Swasan - Yeh Dooriyaan.... Part 17 & 18 Updated - Page 4

Hi all I am back with part - 6 . Thank you all for your lovely responses. All these twists and turns are just making me more excited to write. Hope you guys love this part too.

PART - 6

In Car ,

Swasan returning back to MM , both are in too shock and shy to talk to each other , silence is killing them , so sanskar turns on the FM

BG Music:-

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye

Hum... Hum Tum...

Both gets mesmerized by the song, and gets involved in their own thought remembering the past happening and their recent love confession and kiss

They reach MM , Sanskar holds swara's hand and take her inside He tell her

Sanskar - I have made my decision and just have to tell to everybody - that this is what I wants, you by my side forever. He smiled at his thought. And she blushes

But suddenly she remembers and says "but what about Kavita ?"

Snakar smiles at her mahanta " how can I forget tum sabke bare mai sochogi. Jha tak mai kavita ko janta hu , wo mujhe sanjhegi aur is decision mai mera sath degi. Akhir usne hi to mujhe sikhaya hai ,

"Pyar hasil nahi kiya jata , paya jata hai "

They enter MM , and are surprised to see doctor leaving the house,

Swara - Badi ma, unki tabiyat thik to hai na

Sujata - Jiji to thik hai, thari sautan thik na hai

Sanskar and Swara looks at each other and go to Kavita's room

The moment they enter her room ,she runs towards sanskar and hugs him tight, her eyes are red as if she has been crying for hours and she looked weak and pale.

Ragini - Sanskar , aise koi bina bataye apni sagai ke din jata hai kya ? appko pata hai kavita ki kya halat hui. She fainted

Kavita breaks the hug and holds sanskar's hand to bring her to bed, now sankar was holding kavit in one hand swara in other. He looked back at swara. She leves his hand and goes from there , sanskar so wanted to go after her but by the time kavita brought him to bed and slept on his lap.

Sankar makes her sleep in bed and leaves , he is very frustrated.

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Swara's room

Swara - Ma , mere pyar har gaya Ma, aaj usse keh kar bhi mai usse alag hu ma. Mai nahi chahti ki meri wajah se kavita ki jaan par ban aye.

Somi - par shona , sanskar aur tum pyar karte ho ek dure se. aur usne kaha hai na wo sambhal lega

Swara - par wo ghar ane se pehle , ma mai use aur pareshan hote nahi dekh sakti. Kavita ke sath khush rahega wo. Acchi dost hai uski, pyar ho hi jayega jaise mujhse ho gaya tha.

Something breaks in vicinity , "Ma , mai bad mai call karti hu" she figures out it came from sanskar's room , she ran towards it

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Sanskar was sitting at the couch , with his hand profusely bleeding and a glass broken into half.

Swara- Sanskar!!! Run to get first aid and does the bandage , both look into each other eyes but don't say nythng

He gets up and hug her , she breaks the hug and about to leave.

Sankar - I am sorry swara , mai kuch keh nhai paya , but you trust me right. Mai sab normal kar dunga, bas ye samajh nahi aa raha kaise. I care for kavita , I dnt want meri wajha se use fir se takleef ho. Please kuch bolo

Swara -( after a long pause) Bhul jao mujhe

Sankar turns towards her in anger and pain

Sankar - kya kaha tumne?

Swara- Bhul jao mujhe aur apna lo Kavita ko, 2 mahine bad mai tumhe divorce de dungi, then you can stay happily with her

Now sankar was fuming , he pushes her towards the cupboard and says " Ye kehkar tumne mere pyar pas firse shaq kiya swara, firse mahan banne ki galti mat karo, tum sachme mujhse dur rehna chhati ho ? wo bhi aaj jo hua us sabke bad?"

Swara - han , mai tumse dur jana chahti hu

Both are looking at each other , their eyes full of tears of anger and pain

Sanskar drags her out of their room and shouts "To jao " and closes the door on her face.

Both sit down on floor at either side of the door and cry

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Next morning

Everybody is sitting at dining table and swara is serving

Ragini - Mujhe lagta hai , since ab dono ki sagai ho gayi hai to kuch dino mai shadi ki tayyari bhi karni chahiye, she looks at swara to make her feel the pain , but to everybody's surprise

Swara - Sahi kaha tumne ragini, maine paditji ko bulaya hai . aaj hi muhurt nikalwa lete hai

Everybody gets shocked but Kavita is happy . Sanskar sees swara in disgust and leaves for office.

Panditji comes and looks at date 4 hafte baad bada subh muhurth hai , nobody is saying anything . Dadi speaks to say to ragini "chalo lado sabka muh mitha karao ab , ghar ke sabse pyare bete ki shadi hai , sujta ji apni hone wali bahu ko kuch neg to dijiye.

Sujata unwillingly gets up , and gives her ring to kavita

Ragini - Swara , tumne to apne hi barbadi ka intezam kar liya , kitni newakuf ho tum

Swara - Tum bahut bholi ho ragini , mai bahut al tumhara sar khel khatm kar dungi and she leaves

Mujhe jald se jald ye pata karna hoga ki kaveri aur bade papa ka kya raaz hai , "sirf 4 hafte hai mere pas"

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Sanskar comes home and looks very disturbed , Laksh - Bhai app ye shadi nahi hone de sakte, Come on you and swara love each other

4 hafte bad ka date nikla hai , I just hope you do smthng and he leaves

Hearing 4 weeks , sanskar gets more tensed and leaves for his room

Swara passes from his room and he drags her inside pulls her on the wall and comes very close

Swara - jane do mujhe, you are getiing married in 4 weeks aur agar...

Sanskar puts his fingers on her lips

Sanskar - you want me to get married in 4 week, apni mahanta ke liye mujhe bali ka bakra bana rahi ho . tumhe mujhse dur ana hai to sauk se jao , meri zindagi ka faisla mat lo swara maheshwari and her leaves her

Swara while leaving - Swara gadodia

He holds her back, turn her around and puts his hand on her head

Sankar - Tumhe wapas Swara Sanskar Maheshwri to mai banakar rahunga , tumhari Kasam Swara gadodia

Precap :-

Lot more drama , kaveri's entry in MM

Does swara really wnts to get saskar married or there is some reason behind it ?

nyc update n u r fast in updating n i liked dis quality of urs n story moving in good way

awesome update
i think swara has plan

Wow...!superb well written than watching nonsense in that serial tumra fiction acha hai...resembling infront of my eyes...good keep on writing...👏

I am craving for a better turn in the show :(

Woh Paas aaye aur phir alag ho gai!!!

Very good update. This line "Tumhe wapas Swara Sanskar Maheshwri to mai banakar rahunga , tumhari Kasam Swara gadodia" was the best.

Wow.
Just read all parts in one go.
This fic is so nice.
Continue soon nd add me to PM list

Hi guys, here comes the next part , now it will turn little towards what's happening in serial.

If you would like to see something in my FF , do comment

PART - 7

Swara - Mujhe bade papa ka raaz jald se jald kholna hoga , mai ghar walon ko ragini ki bezatti aur sahne nahi de sakti. Par mai ye akele nahi kar sakti, sanskar ki mada bhi nahi le sakti , pata nahi kaise hoga sab

Laksh -Tum shayad bhul rahi ho ki tumhara ek dost bhi rehta hai is ghar mai , aur wo tumhari mada bhi kar sakta hai

Swara looks at laksh and smiles

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MM Hall

AP feels little dizzy and breaks a vase kept on table nearby, sujata , pari and uttara runs to help her

Ragini - Ma , appko patahai na ye vase kitna mehnga hai ? kaise chukayengi is nuksan ki keemat. Kam to aap waise bhi nahi karti , chaliy hamari thodi seva kar dijiye

Ma, hamare pair daba dijiye , bahut dard ho raha hai.

Sujata - bwari ho gayi hai ke chori , pata bhi hai ke keh rahi hai , saas se pair dabwayegi. Itne bure din na aye hai jiji ke

Uttara- mai daba dungi

Sanskar - koi aisa kuch nahi karega

Ragini - Pair to ma dabayengi hamare, hai na papaji

Everybody looks at DP but he leaves without saying a word

AP looks at him disgustingly and goes to ragini , she gets a call and says rehne dijiye ma, fir kabhi.

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DP's room

Sanskar - Bade papa kya bat hai aap mujhe batatyiye, itna to jarur hai ki swara sahi keh rahi thi , koi raaz hai jiske wajah se aap majboor hai , par aap batayiye to , mai sab thik kar dunga

DP does not say's anything

Sankar - appko muhpe bharosa nahi hai ? mai anta hun bahut galtiyan ki hai maine , par ab mai badal chuka hu, plz aap mujhe batatyiye

DP doesn't says anything and sanskar leaves

DP - agar humne kuch bhi kaha beta, tu tumhari zindagi mai tufan aa jayega, hum apne bete ko doobara nahi kho sakte.

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Swara and Laksh goes to Kaveri

Swara - aapko batana hoga ki aapke aur bade papa ke beech kya raaz hai , aur kavita definitely reason nahi hai

Kaveri - samajhdar ho , pata laga hi liya ki kavita wala kissa sirf ek nakab tha asli raaz pe parda dalne ke liye. Par mohtarma , itni asani se hum tumhe sab kuch kaise bata de, kimat to deni padegi

Swara gives her rings and earrings to Kaaveri "bat bahut purani hai , jab tumhare bade papa jawan the , humne unhe dekha aur dekhte hi reh gaye, ek tasveer basa li apne dil mai "

Laksh - fir ?

Kaveri - bade besabr ho , par itni kimat mai bas itni kahani

She gets a call and picks it

Kaveri - tumne is waqt call kyu kiya ?han agla karyakram shuru karo. Hum baad mai bat karte hai

Aur ab tum dono jao yaha se , hume kam se jana hai

Swara and Laksh are leaving , when swara starts coughing , laksh - ek glass pani la dijiye

Kaveri leaves and swara takes her phone to record the number form which the call came , but she could not get the whole number ,as kaveri returns

Both leave from there

Kaveri - Hum bahut jald mileneg DP

Swara - na to bade paa na ye kaveri kuch bata rahi hai , ab is number wale ko dhundhna hoga

Laksh - mai kuch karta hu...

He dials few numbers and then - Since number shura hai ,4-5 lageneg pata karne mai , ki kitne user hai , uske bad hi hum kisi ki track kar sakte hai ...

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MM

Malkin koi aurat ayi hai keh rahi hai Kavita ji se milna hai

Everyone gathers in hall

Kaveri enters MM

Kavita runs to her " Aunty , app aa gyi ,hume bahut accha laga ab mai apni shadi puri enjjoy kar sakti hun"

Kaveri blesses her " don't worry , mai aa gayi hu na , aap jaka aram kijiye , hum ate hai"

Ragini " aap yaha kaise?

Kaveri "kaise kya , meri bacchi ki shadi hai , hume to ana hi tha "

Ragini " Aap yaha nahi reh sakti ,

Kaveri kisne kaha"? hugs ragini and says "mat bhulo ragini , aa tum Mm ki milkin hamari wajah se ho , humne apna muh khola, to accha nahi hoga tumhare liye

Ragini gets scared "kaka , inka saman guest room mai rakhwa dijiye

Kaveri- "nahi hum kavita ke sath rahenge, and she leaves with a authority

DP is shocked and says to ragini and Dadi - humne aapka sab kuch kaha , swara aur sankar ka divorce kar kara diya , to fir ye yaha kya akr rahi hai . Bade papa aap kuch nahi kar sakte (to herself aur ab hum bhi mabor hai)

Sanskar , Swara and Laksh thinks( Is kaveri ka bade papa aur ragini se kya lena dena hai,

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Night

Sanskar was taking care of his plants in garden ,swara comes there to walk and was busy thinking about all the happeneings.

She doesn't see the rock beneath and looses her balance , but sanskar holds her in his arms , both have an eyelock

BG Music

Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Mere kareeb, mere habeeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai

Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai

Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

Huaa ameer dil ghareeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnasee

Kavita sees them from window and gets sad

Kaveri comes there and consoles her " wo tumhara hi hoga""

Precap

Kavita says to sanskar that swara have affair with someone

Hi Guys , I know you all want Swasan together (even me too) . This part's precap will freak you out more but don't worry, After Part 8 and 9 all MU between our Swasan will be gone , forever.

PART - 8

Everyone is busy with their own missions , Ragini , day in and day out humiliating MM members in one way or other and al they could do is bear the shame, Kavita trying her best to get close to sanskar and keep him away from swara, Swara and Laksh busy in finding out the truth btween kaveri and DP

But there was someone planning very big and nasty.

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Swara gets a call , aap jis insan ko trace karne ki koshish kar rahi hai , mai aapko uske bare mai bata sakta hu "kaun ho tum"

Person " kaun , kya chodiye , aaj sham 5 baje mujhe kali phadi ke kile mai miliye , aur han yad rahe , aapakele ayiyega , warna wo raz razhi rahega"

Swara tries to call laksh , to let him know she is going somewhere , but she hesitated as he would insist to come, she had to go alone.

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Kali Pahadi ka Kila :-

Swara reaches there, it was little scary and lonely. she gets inside

Swara " hello, koi hai ? she hears a footstep from behind as she turns she feels sensatin on her neck she tries to look back but faints and falls on floor

Person" Madam , apka kam ho gaya hai , wo behosh hai " voice " jjaisa kaha hai waisa ho jana chahiye "

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Swara wakes up and finds her unconscious , she sees around but finds nobody

Reaches MM , with heavy head.

Evrybody gathers there , sanskar watching all this from balcony above, he was concerned for her, as she was gone for 4 hours

Kavita " kaha se aa rahi ho swara? Wo bhi itni raat ko?

Swara " kuch raaz kholne hai mujhe " and she leaves

Kavita " raaz kholne hai ya chupane hai "? Holds her arms to make her stay

Swara - " Kavita plz chodo mujhe , mera sir ghum raha hai " she keep touching her nape of neck

Sanskar gets concerned hearing it and walks down the stairs

Kavita "bahane chodo swara , accha chalo mai hi bata deti hun tum kaha thi "

She takes out an envelope and shows some photos to everyone

Everyone is shocked to see the photos

Swara snatches it form kavita sees it

Kavita " Yahi chupa rahi thi na swara , ki tumhara is aadmi ke sath affair hai , aur tum roz isse milne kali pahadi jati ho"

Swara is stunned by the photos , her throat was choked " han mai kalp pahad gayi thi aajj ,par .. and she tells what happened "

Kavita " plz swara kahani mat banao , ye pics saaf bata rhae hai ,ki tum jhut bol rahi aur ,sanskar ko dhokha dena band karo swara "

Swara tries to snatch photos from kavita and it falls on ground and they fall at the edge of stairs where sanskar was standing . Swara rushes to collect the photos and sanskar also sits to get them.

He looks at the photos " swara was sleeping with a man with her head on his chest, and then in other one he was kissing on her forehead"

Swara looked at him as if saying " this is all fake , you know I can't do this , tell me you trust me"

Sanskar returns the pic and without saying a word leaves form there

Swara was stunned Kavita " well it says all , swara you are guilty and sanskar believes it .

Everyone leaves , swara is still sitting at stairs crying "sanskar left wthout a word , is it possible that he believes these photos"

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Sanskar is not able to sleep , he walks around the corridor and was passing form the swara's room , he sees her lying lifelessly on her bed , shivering from cold.

She was sleeping with her cheeks still wet from tears and was hugging a photo of sanskar

Sanskar gets teary eyed, he pulls s blanket and cover her up and says you can't get weak swara , you are my strong soldier , you have to fight

He caresses her hair when he sees a mark on her neck , and he remebers her touchign her neck , he check s it and smiles " I have the proof " he thinks smthng and leaves , but comes back and gives a peck on her head and leaves

Swara who was awake all the time , feels happy that sanskar trust her and goes to sleep.

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Precap :-

Sankar proves swara's innocence. Kaveri's master plan to create rift between swasan , Raglak team up