Swasan - Yeh Dooriyaan.... Part 17 & 18 Updated - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
wonderful update and successfully portrayed ragini's redemption
and sanskar's shaadi sirf swara ke sath hoga, i hope
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

#FF #Yeh_Dooriyan

Hi Guys , here's the next part of my FF , hope you like it .

PART -12

MM has been decorated like a bride, full of flowers rose and orchids in red curtain flowing inside and outside, lights making it shine like a glass palace, Everyone seems to be busy with the preparations but there's someone who's soul is breaking from inside.

It's SANSKAR

He was holding a photograph of swara and trying to keep her in his eyes and his heart forever. He moved his finger around her bright smile and went through events of how she confessed her love, their divorce , to their marriage , fake marriage and all wrong things he did to her, he came back to reality and was cursing himself for avoiding swara and keeping herself away from him

"I am sorry swara, I failed you. I so promised to be by your side forever , but see what have I done. I have no right to be happy and probably that's why it's happening to me . He suddenly remembers smething and rushes

Laksh' room , Laksh is sitting and Sankar enters

Bhai tu yaha , kuch chaiye kya ?

Sanskar"" Han, maafi, maine tere sath kitna bura kiya lucky , agar maine tujhe aur swara ko alag nahi kiya hota to aaj tum dono hi kitne khush rehte "

Laksh " bhai , in sab bato ka koi matlab nahi hai , we are over it and swara ab tujhse pyar karti hai"

Sankar " aur ye sab meri galti hai " and sanskar breaks down , lucky has never seen sanskar so broken before in his life

Nahi bhai says Lucky and hugs him tightly.

Sanskar leaves, Ragini who saw all this enters , Lakash " Ragini mai bhai ko aise nahi dekh sakta , itna dard maine uske aankhon mai kabhi nahi dekha"

Ragini " aap chinta mat kijiye, ab Kaveri ka khel kahtm hokar rahega"

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A frand arrangement for wedding has been , done lots of guest has been invited, everyone is glittering in gold and diamonds.

Sujata " jiji, mhare chore ki murjhaye shakal se samne sab kuch kitn pheeka lag raah hai " AP consoles her

Sanskar sitting in mandap , paditji asks kaveri to bring the bride,

A girl walk down the stairs wearing a red and white lehenga matching that of sanskar's shrwani, with a full ghunghat. pari make her sit beside sanskar . sanskar is not even looking at her .

Laksh panics and comes to ragini " kya hua , you said ye shadi nahi hogi , fir"?

Ragini " humne use bahut samjhaya laksh , pas usne hume mana kar diya, hume maaf kar dijiye laksh , hum ye shadi nahi rok paye"

Everybody is very sad and wishes that somehow this marriage stops,

Marriage rituals starts, it's time for Kanyadan,DP and AP come froward to do the same , pari does the gath-bandhan and both start taking pheras, with each phrea , sanskar thinking about going a step farther from swara. Then panditji asks sanskar to make the bridewear mangalsutra, he does it thinking how he made swara wear it . Then he has to apply sindoor , his hands are trembling , he so feel like getting up and runung away from there, he remebers the first time he filled maang of swara in front of everybody , panditji's voice bring him back to reality , he closes his eyes and unwillingly does the ritaul. Panditji declares the marriage to be done.

Now it's time to take ashirvad , sujata and RP gives ashirvad with half mood , AP hugs sanskar and cries Dp says to bride " hum tumhe apni beti jaisa pyar de payeneg ya nahi , ye vada to nahi kar sakte, par tumhe is ghar ki bahu ka haq jarur milega,hamare sanskar ko khush rakhna, "

Then they move to pari ,adarsh , shomi , shekhar and dadi , everyone blesse them half-heartedly

Finally the couple goes to take blessing of kaveri , she is very happy and takes out the ghunghta of bride "SWARA..."

Everyone looks at bride and is shockd to see swara there . sanskar has no clue whats; going on "did I just marry swara?

Then only Kavita comes in " Aunty , I never thought you whould cheat on me , you protected me for 5 years and then this ?

Flashback

Ragini brings a girl to Kavit's room when she's getting ready , and tell her entire story of how sanskar was found sleeping with her and so focefully he is marrying her , also swara is sanskar's wife and then she pleads kavita to stop this marriage. Kavita foes not answer anythign and asak her to leave

Present

Pehle to mujhe rgini ki batpar bharosa nahi hua, fir maine socha aur wo sab yad kiya ki snskar kitna tadapta hai swara ke liye aur fir mane

Flashback

Kvita calls swara " swara abhi MM aao , mai nahi aa sakti kavita , sanskar ke bare mai bat karni hai

Present

Kavita goes to swara " mujhe maaf kardo swara , maine tumhari bahut insult ki , tumhe bahut hurt kiya , aur aaj tumhara pyar tumse chinne wali thi , I hope tum aur sanskar hamesha khush rahohe

To Sanskar " itna mahan banna kaha se sikha : and sanska sheepishly looks at swara and both kavita and sanskar hug

Kavita goes to kaveri " aapne ye sab paiso ke liye kiya, sharm at hai mujhe aap par

She joins hand and to every one , "inke sath aap jo karna chahe kar sakte hai and she leaves

Police comes to catch Kaveri , " bas , ye sab nahi ho sakta , hume MM ki jaydad milka rahegi , 10 saal intezar kiya humne ki hum wopas , DP ki jaydada le sake, unhone humse shadi karne se mana kar diya , kyunki hum unke paise chahte the , hahahhah , hum aaj bhi wahi chahte hai

She takes out a gun in her hand and take AP in it , a'agar koi age aya to isko uda dungi , everybody panics , Ragini tries to outpower kaveri from behind but she throws her off and ragini collides with a pillar andfaints and starts bleeidng Laksh rusehs to her

Kaveri reaches to the top of the stairs , throws AP from stairs and sees sanskar coming to get her ,

She Shoots...

PRECAP

MM members are crying and are standing in front of OT

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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Awesome update..
Kavita was nice..
Who is hurt..
Cant wait to see more..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
cliffhanger...who got hurt? kavita, sanskar or swara? waiting for the next part
happy that swasan at least got married again...though would have liked it to be in happier circumstances
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
awesome update dear,, i think its swara..,,who got hurt...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

#FF #Yeh_Dooriyan

PART 13

Enioy the read

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DP , AP , Sujata , Shekahr , RP , Shomi , Pari and Adarsh running along with the stretcher . Doctor is asking the nurse to prepare the OT " DP ji , khun bahut beh gaya hai aap intezam karwayiye"

Ragini in on bed in the hospital Dadi and Laksh are with her , she fainted because of the falling. The doctor has dressed her , she wakes up and "Daadi , ye humne kya kar diya, sanskar ke bina swara ji nahi payegi" to Laksh How's sanskar ?" Laksh and Dadi look at each other.

Everyone is crying and sitting on chair , they hear a footstep and turn around , they see SANSKAR coming towards them, he was like a dead man , with his hands and clothes full of blood , blood of his love , his life , Swara

Flashback

When sanskar was about to be shot by Kaveri , Swara came in front of him and Kaveri shot 3 bullets on her before police could stop her. One in her stomach one just passig through her hands and other one right in chest. She was falling as sanskar hold her in his arms , he just sat there holding her , everybody was shocked to see sanskar not reacting at all. Laksh ran to him and shook him hard, bhai ise hospital le jaan hoga , uth bhai , but in vain , leaving him there everybody ran to hospital with swara

Present

Sujata runs to his son, " Tu chinta na kar chore sb thik ho jayega, hamari swara ko kuch nahi hoga"

Doctor comes and announces , unki pulse rate bahut kam ho gayi hai , bullets to humne nikal diye hai par khatra bahi tala nahi hai , kal subah tak unhe hosh aa jana chahiye , warna wo koma mai bhi ja sakti hai

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Laksh" Ragini wo , goli sanskar ko nahi , swara ko lagi , wo bhai ke samne aa gayi aur.."

Ragini gets up from bed and about to faint ,laksh handles her " hum thik hai , hume swara ko dekhna hai"

Ragini comes where everyone is sitting , she sees shomi and shekhar and goes there and joins hands as if asking for forgiveness , they both hug her "Maa doctor ne kya kaha , swara thik hai na

AP says what doctor has told them , Ragini looks around to search for sanskaar , she was expecting him to be hyper worried but seeing him sitting silently in a corner shocked her

Ragini to Sanskar " Apka pyar waha zindagi aur maut se lad raha hai aur aap yaha chup chap baithe hai , hamari behen nai aapke liya kya kya nahi kiya , she reminds him of all times when swara was with him and a flash back starts in his mind , aur aaj jab use aapki jarurat hai to aap bas baithe hai . sanskar is playing all the scesn in his mind and finally the gunshot and then the reality hits him "Swara..." after 4 hours he finally spoke.

He rushes towards OT , and cries turns around and says " Maa , baba , bade papa , badi man aap sab chinta mat kijiye hamari swara ko kuch nhai hoga, everybody is relieved to see sanskar back in normal condition.

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Sanskar was sleeping beside swara holding her hand , he woke up realizing a sensation , swara's hand were moving , he could feel it , he ran out to call for doctor and nurse. Within few hours , swara was in her senses. Everybody gathered to see her and wished her to get well soon and come back home.Doctor said that she has recovered very fast and they can take her home next day , with a nurse to accompany her. Everybody left except Ragini , Laksh and Sanskar

Ragini " Swara , koi aur maaf kare na kare , hume pata hai tum hume jarur maff kar dogi , par hume maffi nahi chahiye , humne galtiya ki hai , bahut sari , galtiya nahi , gunah kiya hai , aur unki saza to hume bhagwan de hi denge. Hum bas dua karte ki tumhare aur sanskar ki zindagi mai sirf khushiyan ho , khayal rakhna and she leaves . Laksh was looking very lovingly at her and both sanskar and swara saw that in his eyes

Laksh also asks swara to take care and asks sanskar to call him if he needs anything and leaves

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Sankar " So Mrs. Sanskar Maheshwari , first night after wedding in hospital , not very romantic I would say"

Swara gives a faint but a bright smile and sanskar kisses on her forehead. Then they talk a lot about how everything happened , how their life went across and finally they are together , sanskar made swara laugh a lot. "Accha Swara , thodi der mai maa -baba aa jayenge, fir mai ghar hokar aaunga"

Nahi tum mat jao plz,

Sanskar" I dnt' want to , but look at me ,and makes a cute face, sanskar was still in his blood stained sherwani "

Ok said swara , as sanskar got up to clear her room and arrange it " Tumne kuch dekha ?"

Kya?

Swara " mujhe lagta hai , Laksh ragini ke taraf soft ho raha hai "

Sanskar "Well , sirf soft nahi ho raha , shayad use samajhne ki kosish bhi kar raha hai , aur shyaad khud ko bhi
Swara "tumhe nahi lagta hume kuch karn achahiye"

Sanskar " shayad han , par abhi nahi , inhe waqt chahiye , aur koi force nahi, ek dusre ko samjahane ka mauka aur ek dusre ka marham banne ka bhi, aur han agar mujhe aisa laga that hey need a push , fir hum jarur inki mada karenge"

Swara gives a smile and he hugs her , then shomi and shekhar comes and sanskar takes their ashirwad and leaves , Swara sees him going with a smiling face

Precap

Swara discharged from hospital , Swasan romance

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow finallh swasan together
Waiting for swasan romance
Cont soon
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#68
Finally dey r together
Waiting 4 swasan romance
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

#FF #Yeh_Doriyan

Hey Guys, so here's next part

PART - 14

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MM was decorated with fresh flowers , everybody was running here and there , well they should be afterall swara was coming back home from hospital

Sujata " Sanskar , chore tu bahi tak yahi hai , jaldi ja aur mhari bahu ko ghar lekar aa"

AP and Pari was smiling at sujata's change of heart

Sanskar rushed to hospital , he himself could not wait to see swara

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Swara was standing at the gate in a beautiful red anarkali dress , and sujata was doing her aarti , then they deicded to do a proper griha pravesh hence all the rituals happened , finally swara entered the house she was weak hence she could not walk properly , so Sansakr without hesitating tokk her in his arms , Sujata" chore kuch to sharm kar " DP " Sujata , hamara kam ho gaya sab andar chalo"

Everybody gave a cunning smile to swasan , and OMG swara was blushing so hard. Laksh "enjoy bhai and, he winked and left

Sanskar took swara to their room , it now had a big picture of Swara and Sanskar together right behind the bed, swara smiled looking at it

Sanskar tum change karlo, mai tumhare liye juice lata hu"

Swara went for the bath and came back , her hair was wet and she was wearing a kurta which had buttons in front , he was hooking it when she saw the bullet mark on her chest, yes it was still there. She was thinking all the incidents that happened and was happy that now bcoz of all this she is with sanskar forever

Meanwhile sanskar came back with the juice and saw swara looking at the mark, seeing him swara tried to hook her button feeling shy , sasnkar came near her and stopped her from closing the buttons and tried to feel the mark, swara got shock from his touch and her heartbeat increased , both were mesmerized by each other , suddenly sanskar remembered smthng and broke the moment

He mke her drink juice ,kissed on her forehead and went for bath. Inside "sanskar , kya akr raha tha tu ?use time de, ghaw bhale hi bhar gaye ho , par jakhm to gehre hai aur yad hai na doctor ne kya kaha tha , he remembers doctor tellinh him " swara abho emotionally aur physically bahut weak hai , so it's better use recover hone ka time de aur physical contact kam rakhe , kyunki uski body abhi koi bhi strain nahi le sakti" I won't hurt you swara promise

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1 Month Passed

Everything was back to normal in MM , in past one month sanskar and swara got more closer. Sanskar has also made swara understand about hi sbusiness and his partners and clients , and swara being a quick learner understood it all ,, they sometimes used to discuss matters with RP , Adarsh , lasksh and DP. Everyone was happy seeing swara's interest in business

But in this all whenever swara tried to get close to sanskar , he avoided her. He was all caring and loving but not close. Swara was getting a little concerned and wanted to find out the reason and soon she got a chance

Pari was not feeling from few days , doctor came home to see her and she announced that pari and adarsh were going to be parents , everybody was happy in MM and congratulated the couple, Ssujata in excitement " Sanskar , chore ab tu kab khushkhabri de raha hai hume?" Snakr got a little irritated "kya mom , kuch bhi ad he left . everybody laughed thinking he s shy

Swara came to room , Sanskar " I am sorry swara, mom bhi na , kuch bhi bolti hai "

Swara" to kya galat kaha mom ne , sanskar was surprised , tum kyu avoid kar rahe ho mujhe itne dino se , tum mere sath ho par mere pas nahi"

Sanakr "aisi bat nahi hai , tum abhi weak ho swara aur fir , and he tells everything that doctor tells him, aur tum bhi to nahii chahti na ki mai tumhare aps aau... I mean ...he stops"

Swara leaves

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Sanskar comes back home thinking that Swara would be very angry after what happened in the morning

He entered the room to find Swara standing in a bright red saree with her hair open and flowing in winds , entre room was lit in candles and was decorated with red rose . Swara came near him took his bag and kept it in a corner , then she closed the door behind and hugged him from back

" mai yahi chahti hu , aur abhi, then she turned around and hold both his cheeks in her hands , she moved closer to her but stopped an inch earlier , her heart was beating crazily . Sanskar looked at her lips, thery were trembling but it totally shook his determination to avoid her and without losing a secnd he took her into a passionate kiss. His one hand in her hair while other roaming around her waist, swara also got comfortble and she also put her hands in his hair and oher one in his neck

They stopped the kiss, not because they wanted to but because there was no breathe left to continue , swara took his hadn and brought him to the bed . He ade her lie on the bed and slept beside her . he took apart her pallu and kissed on her chest where the bullet mark was , that she was trying to hide that day . Swara moaned when sanskar kissed it not in pain but in ecstasy of forgetting the pain. Then he kissed her all over her body form forehead , to cheeks , to bosom, to belly ... everywhere . His every touch and every kiss was like a drop on hot tawa and then converting in a mild dew

They were intertwined in each other , like a vine from the tree. Today they became one

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In lamhon ke daaman mein

Pakiza se riste hain

Koi kalma mohabat ka

Dohrate farishte hain

Khamosh si hai zameeen hairaan sa falak hai

Ek noor hi noor sa abb aasmaan talak hai

Nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein

Husn hai sari adaon mein

Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein

Precap

Swara's Birthday party

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update and helly n swara bday same time wow grt

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