SOULMATES.....Made For Each Other Part 5 Updated (Page 11) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Butterfly.1993

Hi Suhasini,

Thanks for pm. I am in love with sanskar's attitude 😊 continue soon... Waiting for ur update


i will try to update soon..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Lovely lovely lovely..
I knew it..that Swara will meet sanskar..but yet I was afraid that is it Swa-Lak story.. but yeahhh..its a RagLak.n SwaSan story..
Thanx suhasini..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Lovely lovely lovely..
I knew it..that Swara will meet sanskar..but yet I was afraid that is it Swa-Lak story.. but yeahhh..its a RagLak.n SwaSan story..
Thanx suhasini..




Thank u 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Awesome!!!
Nice!!!
Continue soon!!!
And do pm me!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 3

Both girls reached baadi ...& went into their houses one after other.

Gadodia House :
Dadimaa was feeling restless as ragini didn't come till now...just then ragini enters ..Dadimaa comes to her..
Da : ke hua Laado..ithni dher kyun hui...ke hua bathao..milaa us chore se..kya kahaa usne??aur...

shekar interrupted her...

She : maa hum kal bath karenge ragini se.

Da : lekin shekar ...

She : maa pls...abhi tho ayi hai wo..use sochne dhijiye ..aur main apni beti par koi dabaav nahi dalna chahtha hoon...ja beta ...

Dadi fumes...ragini leaves...

Bose House

swara enters ...Shomi was waiting for her

Sh : Shona...kahaa gayee...ithni dher hogayee..aur thumhara phone ko kya hua??

Sw : charge khatham ho gayee maa...wo ek friend se milne gayaa thaa...

Sh : friend ...koun???

Sw : wo...hai...ek ladka...khadoos sa...

Sh : Ladka?? koun shona??

Sw : chodiyenaa maa...mujhe bahuth bhuk lag rahi hai...

Sh : achaa chalo... ...

Maheswari Mansion:

the car stopped with a jerk infront of the house...he stepped out of the car & made his way to his room.His mother was waiting for him..seeing that her son came..she eagerly asked...

Su : chora..khana pados dhoon..
but without giving any reply he reached his room & closed the door with a bang.

Tears pooled in sujata's eyes..this was the daily routine from the past 5 yrs,she didn't forget anything what has happened 5 yrs ago , her son wanted to leave the house..but with most difficulty she stopped her son from leaving...he agreed to stay there..just stay..she clearly knows that her son won't eat in this house..but she still hopes one day her son may become normal like before...
she wiped her tears & went into her room...

He changed his clothes & sat on bed ...his room was dark like his heart...he prefer to be in dark...the word which his brother said echoed in his ears
"mujhe patha hai..ap ko dekh ke koi ladki dar jathi hai...isliye maine mere jagaah aap ko bhejaa hai bhai..."...he clenched fist...he struggled not to remember anything...

Bose House :
swara in her room..sharmista came to give her milk...

Sh : shona...chalo e dhoodh peelo..thumne khana bhi teek se nahi kayaa

Sw : mom...aap kabhi black coffee peeyi kya??

Sh : black coffee...haa peeya tha..sehaath ke liye achi hai..thu peeyegi??

Sw : yaak mumma...ek sip liya tha aaj...kithna kadvaa hai...teek usi tarah

Sh : kiski tarah??

Sw : chodona mumma mujhe aapko meri ek pic dhikani hai..aap shock ho jayenge...

she stood up to get her mobile ,then shramista noticed that her daughter is limping...


Sh : shona kya hua?? thum aise kyun chal rahe hao??

Sw : kuch nahi maa..pair fisal gaya tha..bas ..subah thak teek ho javoongi...

Sh : dhyan kaha rehtha hai thumharaa???

Sw : kuch nahi hua hai...aap ye dhekiye naa...

She showed her pic in red anarkali suit which she wore that day on ragini's insistence,

Sh : kithna sundhar lag raha thaa ...roj aise hi kapade pehan na..waise yeh kab ka hai...

Sw : aaj ka...wo maine friend ka dress try karliya hai...aur roj aise kapade ..no mon..that's not cool...teek hai ab mujhe neendh aa rahi hai...gud nyt..

Sh: e ladki bhi na...gud nyt...

MIdnight Maheswari Mansion:

his room was dark , he laid on bed ..he was in deep sleep...but he was struggling ...struggling for someone...his routine nightmare continued today...
he was running ...she was screaming "sanskaar ...sanskaar "someone stabbed her with a knife...sanskaar shouted "nahi..."he rushed to her"nahi..kavita main thume kuch nahi hone dhunga...nahi..."but infront of his eyes...she breathed last...he screamed "nahiii..."
This was his usual nightmare..but today it seemed to continue...
he was screaming "nahi...kavita...aankhe kolo"...but of no use...her body disappeared from his hand...he was searching ..for her ..."sanskaar main yahaa hoon " came a voice...he was searching around for her..."yahaa...yahaa sanskaar ..hahaaa" she laughed...then he saw her running away from him...he chased her & turned her towards him "thum???" he asked..."ha ..main hi hoon" she said laughing..."Ms.gadodia?" ...

he woke up screaming "No..." ...what happened to me?? what's this dream?? aur wo kaise?? mere dream mein wo kaise???

Here at Bose house..swara woke up with a jolt..."koun??" ...koun hai yahaa...yahaa par tho koi nahi hai...kisne bhulayaa hume???

he stood up from the bed...came near window & stared to moon

swara too seeing moon

Sa : i don't want to see her again...

Sw : yeh kya hogayaa mujhe...us khadoos ki vaja se mera mood karab hogayaa...aaj ke baadh main us se kabhi nahi miloongi...

Both stared into the sky ...speaking to moon...

End of Part 3
Thanks for reading
Suhasini

Precap: swara meets sanskaar And Ragini meets Laksh
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update...yaar tu jaldi likha kr...ab us cavity ko jhelne ke liye mujhe in sab ka sahara chahiye
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice udate.Sanskar saw Swara in his dream.that indicates upcoming happiness in his life.SwaSan thinking about each other and talking to moon at the same time.Waiting for SwaSan meeting.thanks for the PM Dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Nice very nice...👏waitibg for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Good update.. Continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Thanks for the pm... nice work...

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