SOULMATES.....Made For Each Other Part 5 Updated (Page 11) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting..
I think blue shirt mein Sanskar hoga...
N plz will u make it a RagLak ff too..
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hiiii friends...Thanks for the encouragement...though i thought to update this on new year...but after seeing all the negative articles about the show...really i wanted some relief & refreshment ...so i preponed my idea & updating the first part...Hope you all Like it...



SOULMATES...Made For Each Other

Characters :
MAHESWARIS(ALL)
They are Marwaris & settled into Kolkata long back.They are top Jewellery Manufacturers in the city .

GADODIAS (ALL)
They are marwaris & settled in Kolkata long back .

BOSE FAMILY (SHOBHA ,SHARMISTA & SWARA )

PART - 1

Early Morning ...Kolkata ...Their lived two families opposite to each other in Baadi...Once there was a good relation between them but now they doesn't even want to see each others face...also they don't have any fights or quarrels ...they behave as if the other family doesn't exist...

one day all the work routine of all going as usual then in the house of maheswaris

Dadimaa ; Arey laado ..Laado...

Dadaji : Arey kyun chilla rahe ho Shekhar ki maa , hamari laado pooja kar rahi hai..

Dadimaa : sach mein ji humari laado lakhon mein ek hai ji...aj kal ki bachon jaise nahi hai...

Dadaji : akhir pothi kiski hai??? ( he said with pride )

Outside of the house ... a girl singing with melodious voice & doing pooja to Tulasi plant

In opposite house

a girl struggling on her bed to get some extra sleep but is disturbed by the prayer ...she accepted her defeat & got up...closing her eyes she said " hey bhagawan ise jaldhi lata ji ki jaise singer banaa dhenaa...thaki main araam se so sakhoon "

everything is watching by a lady standing infront her ..smiling to herself seeing her daughter's sleepy talk

then the girl without opening her eyes stretched her left hand & started searching something in the air...

the lady is watching with a smile & trying to be far away from the girl's hand...
after few seconds...then the girl spoke...

" mamma...mujhe patha haiii aap yehi haiii...please haath dho naa..."
then the lady gave her hand to the girl & sat on her bed ...

by taking the hand into her hand then the girl opened her eyes & said

"Good Morning Mamma " witha a smile...
The lady too replied " good morning shona ..."
The girl asked with pout on her face " yeh kya mumma...aap ko patha hai naa ...hum aap ke chehra dekh ke bhina humari day start nahi hotha ...tho??"

The lady said " main tho mazaak kar raha thaa...agar aisa hi hogaa tho thumhaare shaadi ke baadh kya hogaa??"

the girl " mein koi shaadi waadi nahi karoongi ..."

" Acha " the lady said

Then the girl quickly went out of the room running into kitchen & hugged a old day from behind

" Good morning darlinggg..." said the girl...

"arey arey arey...humari shonu utt gayee..." said the old lady...

"aaj nashte mein kya hai..."asked the girl...

"pehle brush tho karo shona..."instructed the old lady...then again the girl hugged her & went to get ready...

Gadodia's house :

" Dadimaa...prasad .." said the girl going into house after perfoming pooja...

" Laado...sach mein thum kithna sundhar gaathi ho...kisiki nazaar na laage maari laado ko..." said Dadimaa

the girl smiled...

"Shekar ki maa...shekhar kaate hai?? " asked dadaji...

Seeing here & there she replied..."wo dekho baathoin mein hi agayaaa ...shekar aao prasad lo.." said dadimaa to her son

"shekar maanne thaare se jharoori baath karni hai..." Said dadaji

" ji...bauji...boliye "said shekar...

Dadaji : wo aaj laado ko dekhne ladake wale a rahe hai...

Hearing this the girl was shocked...

Shekar : bauji ...aaj a rahe hai...koun??

Dadaji : is shahaar mein bahuth badaa naam hai unkaa... Durga Prasad maheswari ji ...unke dhoosre bte ke saath...

Shekar : yeh tho bahuth kushi ki baath hai bauji..lekin ek baath use bhi poochna chahiye..

Tears rolled from her eyes...she wanted to say that she is not ready for the marriage ...she has dreams...she want to become a singer...but being from an orthodox family she very well knows about her family..that they never allow her...After so many pleadings they permitted her to join music college as she is free after het graduation...Now this marriage ...no no she can't allow this ...she tried to speak but words didn't come out...

Dadimaa : arey use poochne ki kya jharoorath hai?? Maari laado ke bare mein maanne patha haiii...kyun laado...

The girl with out speaking left from there running into her room...

Dadimaa : dekhaa shaadi ka baath sunthe hi kithna sharam a gayaa use... (smilinggg)

But the girl didn't run with shy...but of helplessness ...she is not yet ready for the marriage...she went to her mother's photograph ..." Maa hume aapki bahuth yaad a rahi hai...agar aap hothe tho aap jharoor hamari madhath karthe...kyun chali gayee maa aap ...hume chodke ..kyun chali gayee..." She cried her heart out.

Then someone knocked on the door... She wiped her tears & opened the door...her papa

" beta thum teek tho ho na..." asked him

"ji ..ji...papa..." said the girl...

" beta thum fikaar math karo thumhare maarzi ke bina kuch nahi hoga...dekho humne kya kiya hai...hume durga Prasad ji se baath kiya...aur unhe convince bhi kiya ki pehle thum aur laksh milenge...agar thum dhono ki marzi hai tho hum baath pakki karenge..." said her father..

" par ..par ..papa ...hume unse ...nahi nahi...hume bahuth darr lagtha hai ...ladke ke saath hum ...nahi papa ..hum nahi baath karenge " said the girl...

Then her father turned the other ..looking to his wife photograph he said...

" nahi beta...darne ki kya baath hai...main thumse bhi wo galathi nahi karna chahtha hoon jho bees saal pehle maine kiya ...ek shaadi ke liye dho parivaar se bhi jyadhaa dho dil milna jharoori hai...manaa math karo...main jhantha hoon e rihsta tho main taal nahi saktha ...wo log bahuth ache hai beta..par thumhari marzi meri lye sabse jyadha jharoori hai... mein thume phone karke use khaa milna hai bathatha hoon beta " said her father.

" mathlab ...mathlab bahaar milna hai unse..." questioned the girl

"ha beta.. thum thayyar rehnaa...aur aaj class nahi hai kya?? "shekar asked...

" hai na papa...hum abhi ja hi rahe " said the girl...

Her father left with a smile...

Then she thought ...main kaise miloon unse...nahi ...e mouka mujhe use karna hai ...par kaise...koun bachayegaa hume...hum papae se bhi nahi keh sakthe e baath...dadimaa unki nahi manegii..." something striked her mind..."haa wahi hamari help karegi...hume jaldhi janaa hai..." saying this she got ready & came out ...she heard her dadimaa screaming at her father.

Dadimaa : thaara dhimaag tho teek hai naa shekar...laado ko ladke se saathe bath karne ka faislaa..mujhe binaa pooche thu ne kaise liya?

She: kyun maa...wo meri bhi beti hai...main uski balayee ke baare mein sochaa thaa

Da: balaye...arey e tho soch log kya sochenge...aur bhiraaadri mein hamaraa kya hogaa???

She : bas maa plss...bhees saal pehle aisa hi ek bhool kiya aapne aab dhobara math kijiye...

Da ; shekarrr( she shouted )

She : pehle hamari beti us se milegi ...bas...

he left without hearing anythingg... then the girl came out of the house...

on the road she was still thinking abt the whole accidenttt...tears rolling from her eyes...a car was coming in her opposite direction ...but she was not moving away...the car driver blowing horn continously...but she didn't hear it...as the car was about to hit her...some one pulled her to aside..then she came into the world & seen the car...

" car horn sunahi nahi dhiya kya thume " the girl who saved her asked with angryy

by seeing her suddenly her grief increased & she hugged her tightlyy...

" swara... " she said

" Ragini...kya hua??? thum ro kyun rahi ho??? " asked the other girl...

but ragini crying with out stop...swara took her to a cafe near by & made her to sit & gave water to her & ...asked with concern...

Sw : Ragini ...kya hua?? plss mujhe bathao...kya thum apni best friend ko bhi nahi bathavogi???

Ra ; swara...wo ...ghar ..mein humari shaadi ...( ragini said in between her sobs )

Sw : kya ...shaadi...thumhari? achanaak se?? pls mujhe teek se bathao...

then ragini explained totally from the beginning to her papa telling her to meet the boy...then swara finally relaxed said

sw : chill ragini ...bas ithni si baath...acha hi hai naa..ladke se milo aur kaho ki thume shaadi nahi karni hai...bas bath khatham

then ragini mobile rang...her father called

she : betaa college pahoonch gayee??

Ra : bas papa...rasthe mein hum

She ; haa beta wo durga prasad ji ka phone ayaa aur unhomne kahaa ki laksh thumhare college ke pass ayegaa thumse milne...beta sorry maine photo nahi maangaa..lekin wo blue shirt pehanke ayegaa...maine thumahri college ki address aur thumhare naam details sab de dhiya unhe...

Ra ; ji papa...

She : teek hai beta...

by saying this he cut the phone...& he felt very happy that he is giving this chance to her daughter

Sw : kya hua ragini...

Ra : papa ka phone tha...swara plss hamari help karoge...

then she explained some thing to her friend... listening this swara said No ...

"please swara maan jao naa" asked ragini in a pleading voice...

"nahi ragini yeh nahi saktha..." said swara firmly...

"please swara...please " pleaded ragini

"Ragini...thum pagal ho gayee kya? yeh koi mazaak nahi hai " said swara

"Nahi swara...aisa math kaho ...please..." cried Ragini

"Ragini samajh ne ki koshish karo..." said swara

"Teek hai swara ...agar thum hamari madhath nahi karna chahithi hai tho...teek hai hum thume force nahi karenge...humari problem hum hi solve karenge..." said ragini wiping her tears

" Mathlab...kya karego? kuch aisa vaisa tho math karna " said worried swara

"hum kuch bhi kare...thume kya...hum e socha ki thum jharoor hamari madhath karego...lekin nahi...hum hi kuch sochenge...hamari zindagi kuch bhi ho jayee is se thume kya ...humne tho thume bachpan se achi dosti manaa tha...aur ..." she burst into tears...

this melted swara as always...

" Ragini ...please math ro...ek kaam karthe hai ...thumahri dadimaa se bath karthe hai naa...agar chahiye tho main bath karoongi..." said swara

" Nahi swara...Dadimaa nahi manegiii...aur agar unhe e patha chalegi ki hum dhono dosth hai tho bahuth badi problem ho jayegi... " said Ragini

" Par Ragini ...hum Koshish tho kar sakthe hai naa...? " said swara

" Nahi swara...please meri baath manoo...yehi ek upaay hai " said Ragini

" Par ragini e galath hai...thumahare jagah us ladke se main nahi milsakthi ..."
suddenly Ragini cut it down...

" Nahi swara...kuch nahi hoga...thume patha hai hamare ghar mein sab kithna orthodox hai...vahaa bhi aise hi haii...agar e rishta pakka ho jageyaa tho...meri sapne...tho please swara..." explained Ragini

" Teek hai...hume karna kya hai?? " asked swara as she left with no choice.

" bas thum us ladke se milo...aur unhe kehdho ki thume use pasand nahi hai...bas " said relieved ragini

" ithni si baath thum bhi keh sakthi ho na ?" asked swara

" nahi nahi...hum..ladke se nahi baath karenge...thume patha hai naa...hume dar lagtha hai " said ragini..

"Teek hai...naam kya hai uska? kaha milna hai???" asked swara

" Naam ...Laksh...Laksh Maheswari...aaj shaam ko wo humari college ke paas ayenge pick up karne ke liye..." said Ragini

"Teek hai...milthe hai unse...lekin pehchange kaise?" said swara

" wo blue shirt pehan ke ayegaa..." said ragini

" kya ...( burst into laughter )...kis jaamane mein hai hum...shirt color se pehchanenge...oh my god...ithne saare gadgets hai...ek pic bhi nahi hai uska thumahare paas..." said swara...

"Swara...thume patha nahi aisa photos hum nahi lethe...tho thum thayyar hai naa...?" asked ragini

" Yes madam...aur thum fikaar math karo...wo khudh is relation ko no kahegaa...teek hai naa? ' cheered swara

" thank you swara ...thank you so much " ragini smiled hugged swara...

Swara too hugge her back saying " thum aise hi hasthe rehnaa Ragini "

End of Part 1
Thanks for reading ...i hope u enjoy it...
Suhasini


Precap : swara & Laksh Meeting






Edited by hasinig89 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update..but m eagerly waiting to know.. which couple's ff is this?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Nice update..but m eagerly waiting to know.. which couple's ff is this?



you have to wait for that 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice plot...
Suhasini
i guess swara laksh se nehi sanskar se milegi...(blue shirt)
Swasan to he hi...it wl b fun
just a guess 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bahoot acha hai...par Merey ko twist chahiye in this meeting...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nice and thanks for the pm
update more soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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here also dadima is creating problems
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi,
Thanks for pm.nice concept waiting for swara and blue shirt guy meeting😉 I am sure even lakshya had sent sanskar curious to know continue soon...
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PART 2

Maheswari Mansion:

A lady is assigning duties to everyone in the hall
" sujata ...saari thayyari ho gayee na?? hum ladki ke liye jho bhi liyaa wo phirse ek baar dekhlenaa...aur parineeta ...thumne meetai dekhlinaa...acha hi banaa hai na...aur uttara agar thume humare saath aani hai tho thume vaise hi rehanaa chahiyaa jaise hum kehthe hai ..teek hai..aur..."

"nahi annapurna ji ..." someone interrupted her flow.

she turned to see her husband & asked him the reason

Ap : kya hua ji??? hum shaam ko ja rahe hai naa???

Dp : Nahi annapurna ji ...hum log nahi ja rahe hai

Ap : par kyun ji??? (she asked with doubt )

Dp: Shekar ji phone ayaa hai ...aur unhomne humse e kahaa ki pehle ladka aur ladki ko milna hai ...

Ap: kyaa??? hum se pehle hamara beta milegaa?? e kya ji?

Dp: hum is rishthe ko aapne haath se nahi jaane dhe sakthe..kyun ki ladki bahuth hi sanskaari hai...aur unka parivaar bhi hamari tarah ki hai...isliye humne unhe manaa nahi kar payee...aur waise bhi e rishtha pakka ho gayaa hamare liye ...is ke saath saath unkaa bhi baath reh jayegaa...

Ap: par ...ji ...aisa tho hamari ghar mein kabhi nahi tha...aab?

Uttara : ( happily )acha hi hai naa badimaa...pehle bhayya milenge tho ...

Ap : (angrily )uttara kithni baar kahaa hai ..jab baade bathkarthe hai thab beech mein nahi bolnaa hai...jao thum andhar ...

Dp : aap apni bete se kahiye ladki ke college par jaake use milna hai ...Naam hai Ragini gadodia...

Ap : Ji...

saying this he left...annapurna also convinced with this as she never cross any word of her husband...but this wasn't liked at all by sujata (her devrani )...but she couldn't show her disagreement ...

After class ...Ragini took swara to wash room & gave some clothes to her...by seeing them swara reacted wierdly

Sw : ye kya ragini?

Ra : swara ye hamari kapade hai...humne hamare saath layaa hai...

Sw : wo teek hai ...par mujhe kyun de rahi ho...

Ragini knows that won't wear chudidhars...she usually dresses in jeans & skirts...for traditional functions she always prefers saree...today she wore a skirt up to her tighs...

Ra : wo swara ...agar thum in kapadon mein unhe milegaa tho...shayaad

she hesitated to speak forward...swara with doubtfull face asked

Sw : hmmm shayaad???

Ra : shayad... unhe doubt hogaa??aur unhe sach patha chalegaa...aur phir ...

Sw : relax ragini...aisa kuch nahi hogaa...aur main nahi pehaan ne wali hoon e chudidhar...

Ra : plss..pls swara maan jao...mere liye pehaano...warna hume bahuth tension rahegaa...

Sw : offfooo ragini...pehle thumhare place mein main milnaa usse aur aab ye chudidhar ...aage kya ..us ghar ki bahu bhi banjavoo kya??

She spoke with hurryyy...after listening this ragini smiled & said

Ra : waise swara agar thume ladka pasand ayaa tho...shayaad...

said teasinglyyy...

Sw : yeh...kya bol rahe ho??? mujhe koi pasand nahi ayegaa...aur waise bhi e ladka bhi thumari tarah boring hogaaa...akhir thumhari Da--dai--maaa ne chunaa hai naa...( teased ragini ..)

Ra :(with pout )...swara aap meri mazaak udaa rahi ho? aur meri dadimaa ko kyun beech mein la rahe ho?

Sw :aur nahi tho kya?? rukh..main milne ke baadh bathavoongi wo kithna boring hogaa...

Ra : achaa...tho thume kaise ladka chahiye???

then swara in her deep thoughts said...

Sw ; mujhe ...mujhe aisa ladka chahiye jo mujhe zindagi bar pyaar kare ...sab se jyadhaa...meri har  bath bhina bole samjhe..meri har kwaish poori kare..meri khayal rakhe..mujhe hasaaye...aur sabse jyadhaa haroori hai ki mujhe pyaar se jhele...

both broke into laughter ...

Ra : hamare pass time nahi hai...chalo chalo jladhi e pehaano...plsss

Sw : teek hai...sirf thumhare liye...

swara went in & change her clothes...now she wore red colour chudidhar...she look into mirror & said to her self...

Sw : not bad ...acha hi hai...chudidhar bhi mujhe suit kartha hai...teek hai...

then ragini & she was shocked to see her...

Ra : Swara thum kithna pyaare lag rahe ho..aur e colour bhi kithna cha suit hua thume...sach mein ...

Sw : wo tho hai...kyun ki main hoon ithni sundhaar ...dekhnaa wo thumharaa ladkaa bhi dekhtha reh jayegaa...abhi bhi waqt sochlooo...

Ra : hume kuch nahi sochna hai...aur thume bhi sochoo math ...plsss chalo chalo jaldhi bahaar chalo...

both came out ...as it was closing time of the college all students were going to leave...but all are shocked to see swara in chudidhar...then one of their friend came running to ragini...

" ragini ...ragini ..."

Ra : kya hua pallavi ..

Pa : Ragini thumhare liye koi ayaa hai..bahaar pooch rahe hai...

Ra : Swara chalo chalo...wo a gayaa hai...

Sw : teek hai baba...aaram se chalo ...main nahi bhaag sakthi is dress mein..agar jeans ho tha na tho main jump karke uske saamne jaathi...

Ra : chup karo swara...

they both came out along with pallavi..pallavi showed them a car & a man with bald head standing behind the car & she left .Both Ragini & swara stood behind a pillar and peeped from it & whispered to each other

after seeing the man swara said to ragini with wierd feeling...

Sw : yeh kya ragini? thumhare ghar waale ise pasand kiya thumhare liye?? my goddd...

Ra : chup karo swara..hume dekhne dho..kya yehi hai wo ladka..

Sw :(burst into laugh)...ladka nahi uncle hai uncle ...

Ra : swara ..yeh wo ladka nahi hai...dekho tho yeh driver hai...blue shirt ladka nahi hai...

Sw : achaa...haa ragini ...teek kahaa thumne bhi...main tho dar gayee thi ki kya iske saath mera pehla pehla date ...

Ra : Date ...yeh date hai?? (asked innocently)

Sw : haa darling yehi date hai..thume tho yeh bhi nahi patha ...

then ragini's mobile rang...her papa called her...

Ra : hello..ji papa...

She: beta...wo car bhejaa hai thumhare liye...wo nahi aayaa..ye kehane ke liye maine phone kiya...teek hai beta ab main rakhtha hoon...

Ra : ji papa..(she cuts the phone ) swara humne kahaa na e driver hai...chalo

Sw : achaa...tho chalo uska bhi darshan karenge...

both goes to driver...& asks him for who he is waiting??

Dri : madam ji hume Ms.Gadodia se milni hai...

Sw : Ms.Gadodia ???

Ra : haa..yehi yehi hai...Ragini Gadodia...Mathlab Ms.Gadodia...( pointing to swara..)

swara understands & tells...

Sw : ha...main hoon Ms.Gadodia...aur aap?

Dri : madam ji saab ne gaadi bhejaa hai aap ke liye...kuch jharoori meeting hai isliye saab nahi aapay...

Ra : koi baath hai...swara...(trembled with words) i mean ragini..ragini gadodia jhayiye...hum aap ka wait yehi karenge ...aap wapas yehi ayiye..thab thak hum madam ke saath andhar rahenge..

Sw :( with sarcasamm..) haa swara ..thum andhar raho ...main athaa hoon...


then swara left with driver in the car...Ragini feeling tensed prayed to god...

after few mins car reached a restaurant ...driver said

Dri : madam ..aap andhar chaiye aur aapke naam pe table reserve kiya hai...aur main saab ko bhi bathatha hoon

Sw : ji...
then she went in & manager knowing she is Ms.Gadodia directed to a table where reserved board is placed ...she sat & looked around ...only few customers are present ...she searched for blue shirt but she couldn't find anyone.Somewhere in her heart ...she is feeling nervous ..for the first time in her life..she is feeling nervous...

swara to her self " relax swara...yeh tho nataak hai..asli date nahi hai...use dekhna ..aur kehanaa ki thume wo pasand nahi aayaa..aur chali janaa yahaa se ...bas...relax..."

her mobile rang ..she swa the number ..ragini calling...she was about to lift... but an unexpected situation happened..
A tall guy...with muscular body..in his late 20's ...fair toned came & stood near her...she was lost by seeing him...his grey eyes..clean shaved face..his muscles...swara didn't blink her eyes for a second...

he wore white shirt & black waist coat ..his attire says that he is business man...his attire perfectly suited him...he was asking something ...but swara was mesmerized by his looks...she is seeing his lips ..but the words coming from his mouth are not audible to her...this time he spoke little bit loud...

" Ms.Gadodia ???"

she came into the world with a jerk " ji...ji...nahi nahi..."...she was literally tensed & trembling with the words...

" what?? are u not Ms.Gadodia ?? " He asked in a serious tone.

"ji...Nahi..meri mathlab ..haa.." she still tensed...

he sat in opposite chair ... then she realized he is not in blue shirt...she asked him ...still tension in her voice...

"aur aap??? "

He replied with a glare " aap jinhe milne aye the ...wo main "

Sw : par ...aap tho blue shirt...

He : what ?? (he didn't understand at first & then realized what she is asking) wo..main ek business meeting mein tha..tho formal attire...

Sw : wo... & she smiled...

But he was not paying any attention to her , he was busy with his phone...

swara to her self :kaisa aadmi hai yaar...ithna sundhar ladki yahaa baiti hai..aur isne tho dekh bhi nahi raha hai ...waise bhi kahaa na maine ragini se sach mein boring hai...
she thought that she should speak as he is not speaking ...

Sw : Tho..Laksh...

He gave her a angry glare ...she understood..

Sw : mathlab Laksh ji...

He again withou seeing her said..." i prefer Mr.Maheswari "

Swara in her mind...yaar ye kithna khadoos hai ...koi ladki se aisa ghoor ghoor ke dekh ke bath kartha hai kya???

Sw : ji ...Mr.Maheswari ...aap karthe kya hai??

He :(his eyes still on phone ) Business...
one word answer came...

Now swara feeling uncomfortable with this..she usually speaks alot but now his angryglares , his tone are making her inconvinient
He noticed it ...after a few seconds he kept his mobile aside & thought to order some.

He : Kya lenge aap Ms.Gadodia...

swara came out from her world of her words & said .

Sw : kuch bhi...

He : Kuch bhi...?

Sw : Mathlab ...jo bhi aap order karenge...
( In her mind...Swara ..kya hua thume...ithna tension kyun?? relax..just realx)

he called waiter

He : Two black coffee please..turned to her & asked " is it okay ?"

Sw : yeah yeah ofcourse okay...( black coffee...yak yak yak)

Again his mobile beeped ..he lost into his mobile...

Swara to herself ...kaise insaan hai? usne order dhene ke baadh mujhe poocha? wo bhi balck coffee ...oh my goddd..ek second bhi main nahi rukh sakthi ..mujhe janaa hogaa...kya karoon???

their order came...she changed her expressions seeing the black coffee & couldn't resist ...she took a sip

Swara in her mind...yaak...log kaise peethe hai ise...kithna kadvaa hai...
she kept her cup down & looked here & there...

Then his phone rang...he excused from her & went a side.she quickly grabbed her phone & dailed ragini's number

Ra : hello swara..

Sw : Ragini ye kya moosibhath mein dal dhi thumne...

Ra : kya hua swara? kuch ...

Sw : e poocho ki kya nahi hua?? kaisa ladka hai yaar...na bath kartha hai..na dekhtha hai ,na suntha hai...

Ra : swara ...kya wo physically handicapped hai kya?( asked with concern ..)

Sw ( with disgust voice ) Nahi yaar...dekhne mein teek taak hai...lekin apni dhuniya mien rehtha hai ...ek bath bhi nahi kiya usne..kaise manaa karoon rishte ka?? wo a raha hai..acha main rakthi hoon...

he came & said to her..."Ms.Gadodia ..ab mujhe chalna chahiye..."

Sw : ji... ( chalo thank god...)

He : mein driver se kehtha hoon aapko wapas chodne ke liye..

Sw : ji ...
chalo swara ..pehle bhaag jaa yahaa se...yeh koi date hai kyaa?meri pehli date aisa nikla...

she stood to leave & he too was coming out to send driver with her ...she was lost in her thoughts ...when walking her high heel flipped which made her to fall...but he caught her at the right time...his one hand on her back & one hand on her waist ...her hands on his shoulder...both kept staring into others eyes...
his eyes...his lips...his face...now she ahs got clear view of his face ...she is seeing him with out a blink...
first he adjusted himself & he helped her to stand & asked her

He : are u okay Ms.Gadodia??

Sw : yeahh...thank u (but her leg was paining)
she tried to walk but couldn't she was again to fall ...again he hold her

He : i think you can't walk Ms.Gadodia...

Sw : No No...i can adjust ...

But she was unable to keep a step also...seeing her with difficulty he came forward & with out her permission he lifter her in her arms...She was hell shocked with this...she couldn't react ...she even forgot her pain ..she kept staring him...but he couldn't pay attention to her.

He came out with her in his arms...& made her to sit in the car & asked driver to drop her back , then went off without even seeing her...she sat still...driver started the vehicle.she watched him go..but he didn't turn...

After a few minutes car reached college...ragini was waiting outside for swara...

swara came out of the car & walked with difficulty ...ragini came to her

Ra : Swara kya hua?? thum aise kyun chal rahe ho?

Sw : kuch nahi ragini ...wo pair mo mocha ayaa hai...chodo ye sab kaise ladka ko chuna thumhare ghar waalon ne...

Ra : kya hua ? thumne use kahaa kya??

Sw : Nahi...usne bath bhi nahi ki...

Ra : Ye kya car wapas a rahi hai??
said pointing to the car...

The car stopped infront of swara & the driver came to swara & handover a chit to her & said " Saab ne dhiya aapko " ..saying this he left..

both opened the chit " No..from myside "...ragini hugged swara ...even swara was happy that her work was done ..

Sw : chalo ragini bahuth dher ho rahi hai...thum ghar mein bathadhenaa ki thume ladka pasand nahi ayaa...

Ra : ha..swara...thank you so much...

swara changed her clothes & both went home...

After 1 hour...
He was on his way to home...his mobile rang ...He lifted & listened to the other person ..then he came to driver..." gaadi rokhiye ".
He stepped out of the car...after a few seconds ..a guy came on his bike...
he stoppd bike with a jerk ..with out parking, he came running to him & hugged tightly..." Thank you bhai...thank you so much..."

but he didn't respond...

again the guy who came on bike said " i know bhai aap mere liye kuch bhi karenge...aap dhuniya ki sabse best bhai ho..."

now he responded " yeh koi mazaak nahi hai...ladki ki zindagi hai..."

the guy said " ohh come on bhai..waise e bathayiye ...ladki kaisi hai...usne kuch kahaa ...nahi kahaa hogaa aap ko dekhthe hi dar gayi hogi...mujhe patha hai..ap ko dekh ke koi ladki dar jathi hai...isliye maine mere jagaah aap ko bhejaa hai bhai..."

he didn't respond at all , he reached his car & sat to driver " gaadi chalayiye " & left from there...but the guy in his mad happiness kept screaming...aaap best ho bhai...aap best ho,... aap sabse best ho SANSKAAR bhai...Thank youuu

End Of Part 2
Thanks for reading
Suhasini

Precap : Again Swara meets Sanskaar
Edited by hasinig89 - 9 years ago

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