SOULMATES.....Made For Each Other Part 5 Updated (Page 11) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Nice!!!
Both thinking about each other!!

When sanskar come to know that swara is not Ms.Gododia??
Continue soon!!!
Thank you for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
It was short ..but cute...plz update soon..(long one)..interesting plot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awesome update..emotions well described... 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 4

Next Day Morning , At a shopping Mall.

Ra : Swara ...saahi kiya thumne hume yahaa layaa...last week humne apni violin yaha dhiya tha repair ke liye...aur yaad hi nahi rahaa

Sw : oyee..hello ..kal thumhari wo khadoos ladke se milne ke baadh meri puri mood karab hogayee...even i need some refreshment ..isliye yahaa par ayaa...

then ragini sees a dress & pointing to it...

Ra : Swara ...wo dekho ..kithna pyaraa dress hai...thum par bahuth acha suit karegi..chalo dekhthe hai...

Sw : haa ragini...very beautiful..par mujhse jyadhaa thujhe suit karegi...

Ra : Mujhe nahi nahi ...main aise kapade pehanthi nahi hoon...

Sw : achaa...kal maine thumhare liye suit pehanaa, us khadoos se mili aur thum mere liye ithna bhi nahi sarkthe... (she made a face..)

Sw : trust me ragini thum par bahuth achaa lagegi..vaise bhi jeans hi hai..koi skirt tho nahi naa...plss..mere liye..plss plss plsss

Ra : achaa achaa..teek haii..sirf thumhare liye...

both went into the shop ...swara selected jeans & tee for ragini , again ragini chose salwar suit for swara...both went into trial room ...they came out swara in salwar & ragini in jeans..both are happy to see other like that...then they paid the & came out...

both went to a ice cream parlour...

Sw : ragini ...meri wallet...(starts searching) shayad shop mein bhulgayee..thum yahi ruko...abhi leke athi hoon...

Ra : teek hai ...jaldhi aao

after a few mins..some guys come there & starts teasing ragini

Person 1 :hey beauty...what's your name?

Person 2 : naam kyun? number dhedho baby?

Person 3: disco pe chale ...

she starts feeling uncomfortable & starts to leave with tears in eyes..

Person 1: arey jaa kaha rahe ho?? (holds her hand...)

she starts crying...
Ra: chodiye...hume chodiye plss...

" sun nahi usne kya kahaa haath chodo " came a voice...

they all turned to see a guy standing behind them...

Person 2 : dekh bhai...ye hamari matter hai ...thu jaa yahaa se...

'Acha..." said the guy & hit him hard...

all left leaving her their...

she was all nervous , unconfortable ...tears rolling from her eyes...

he started to console her " dekhiye ..pls..royiyegaa math...kuch nahi hua...wo chale gayee..."

but she started looking around for swara ...then she saw her coming from a shop...she ran to her... he too followed her...

"suniye...arey suniyee tho..." he shouted & ran behind her...

swara was shocked to see ragini crying & ran to her ...both hugged each other...

Sw : kya ..kya hua ragini?? thum ro kyun rahi ho?? kya huaa...

Ra : wo..wo...vahaaa...ladke...mujhe...

said in between her sobs pointing to the place where some guys misbehaved with her...but swara saw the guy who was coming in their direction...

seeing him swara fumed & came forward to him along with ragini...

Sw : kya...hmm..akeli ladki dhiki tho chadthe hai kya??/ sharam nahi hai kya...

he was totally confused..." hello...excuse me..." he said..

Sw : kya excuse me??? dhekhne mein tho pade likhe lagthe ho...

ragini was pulling continously swara to stopp...but swara retarded her...

Sw : thu chup kar ...aaj ise chodungi nahi...(pointing to the guy ) ..aur thu ne kya sochaa ladki akeli hai...kuch nahi karegi ...

with this crowd gathers...

" hello...aap misunderstand kar rahe " he said in disapproval...

Sw : achaa...main misunderstand kar rahi hoon??? ...teek hai...ek minute... (she pulls ragini forward ) bolo ragini...kya hua bolo...sabke saamne bolo..thabhi tho is tarah ladke ki akaal teek hogi...

Ra : wo...swara...wo...

" please bholiye...dariye math ..." he said to ragini convincingly...

Sw : dhoor raho...paas bhi math aanaa... thum bolo ...

Ra : wo swara...kuch ladko ne hamare sath batthameezi karne ki koshish ki...

Sw : sunaa...thumne iske bathameezi karne ki koshish ki...

" arey pls..uski poori bath suniye...' he said to swara

Ra : ha...kuch ladko ne humse bathameezi ki...aur ye (pointing to him)...

Sw : isne bhi kiya hai naa???

" arey kamaal hai...aap tho poori bath sun nahi rahe " said he

Ra : nahi swara...isne hume bachayaa tha...

Sw : kya... (swara's voice echoed...) & she uneasily saw himmm...

he folding his hands up to his chest & said.."ab bholiye??"

first swara cleared the crowd...& said to him

Sw : i'm so sorry...wo actually kya hai ki...apni dosth ko aise dekh ke mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi ayaaa...tho

"wow...apne mujhe bath bhi nahi karne dhiyaa ' he said

Sw : i'm sorry ...pls...

" kya sorry ..." he said rudely...

Ra : plsss...ghalathi ho gayee...sorry ... ( she said peeping from swara's back )

he stared at her ...her innocent eyes , face ...ohhh godd...he was unable to blink his eyes...then he said smiling to her..."its okay ...aap teek hai naa"

Ra : ji...hum teek hai...aur thankss... (she still didn't look into his eyes )

swara observed this...yeh kya ho rahaa hai..main tho beech mein kaadi hoon ..ye dhono mujhe nahi dekh rahe...

Sw : chalo ragini...chalthe yahaa se...

" ek minute..." he objected themmm

Sw : what ?? (she asked sternly )

" maine tho aap ki sorry accept nahi ki...agar mujhe aapki sorry accept karni hai tho mere saath coffe pe chaliye "he said ...while speaking his eyes all on ragini...

swara whispered to ragini "dekhaa kaise faidha uta raha hai..."

Ra : nahi swara ..isne hamari madhath ki..ek coffe hi hai naa chalthe hai...

swara was shocked & surprised...jo ladki kal uski jagah mujhe bheji...aaj kudh thayyar hai ...

Ra : swara...kya hua...?? she moved her...

Sw : haa kuch nahi...chalo..chalthe ...

the trio went to coffee house in the mall & discussed about order...they ordered cappuccino...swara thought abt black coffe...chee...main kyun soch rahi hoon uske baare mein...then she observed those two stealing glances at each other...swara thought in her mind & said...

Sw :main jaake thumhari violin le athi hoon ...teek hai...

Ra : hum bhi chalenge thumhare saath

Sw ; nahi nahi thum rukhna...main abhi athi hoon ...

she said & left them...she really wanted her friend to mingle with others...

she made her way to musical instrument shop...she took the violin & started to play...she was about to play...then

Dhak dhak...dhak dhak... her heart beat increased...she felt something ...she held her hand to her heart ...yeh kya ho rahaa mujhe...but it seemed to increase...she turned slowly back keeping still her hand on her heart...

heart fail...he was there...

swara stood stilll... he was in white shirt with black waist coat as before hand...black googles...shaking hand with another person ...firm look...

she didn't blink her eyes...but he didn't look at her...

"madam ji " called the person ...then she came to this world...

Sw : lijiye paise... saying that she hurried to run...she has to go to ground floor...now she is in 5th floor...she reached lift...she went in & punched 0 button...the doors were about to close...but stopped by a hand...then he came in...& doors were closed...

heart fail once again...he was looking at his mobile checking some mails...she was panicked & punced all the numbers in panic...

"Ms.Gadodia " he called...

She froze at the spot...Dead...sweating...

End Of Part 4

Thanks for reading

Suhasini

Precap : Swara & Ragini sees Laksh speaking with sanskaar & gets shocked...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Haye Swara's feels Mr.Khadus presence ☺️
Love Raglak scene and Swara scene
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
suhu dear👏 well done

pls continue soon. ab tu nacv's ki tarah tadpana😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Wow!!!
Nice!!!
Loved it!!
Sanskar recognized her!!!
Lucky liked Ragini!!!

Good!!!

Continue soon!!
Thank you for the Pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Hasini,
What yaar short update? Suspence is killing me😡 no swasan. I was waiting for this update for long time n u made it short😡. Wait I will cum to ur working place n tell ur boss to give u some time to update this😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Butterfly.1993

Hasini,

What yaar short update? Suspence is killing me😡 no swasan. I was waiting for this update for long time n u made it short😡. Wait I will cum to ur working place n tell ur boss to give u some time to update this😊


Soumya...next time long update..yeh vadaa rahaa 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manisha.8148

suhu dear👏 well done

pls continue soon. ab tu nacv's ki tarah tadpana😉


Manisha...na naa main cv's ki tarah nahi hoon i will continue soon

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