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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb... 👏 Sanlak nd Swasan both interaction are Awesome..loved it 👍🏼

Thank you so much as ever Sneha 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Wow!brilliant.
sanlak part was gd.Swara bcm vulnerable.so much happn & without sanskar she hs no hope.
Othrside sanskar hurting himslf bcz he hurt swara.whn he th8 finaly he got his life its taken away.
Lv shomi.she informd sanskar abt swara & he cm imidiately.i wnt shomi play a role 2 unite swasan.
Swara saw hope tht sanskar cm 2 tk her bt again its broke.
Sanskar cnt see swara lk ths,finaly hisk mask fall.
He kissed her &reassure 2 trust him,trust in thr relatnshp.
Thnks 4 cntuing.love it.wish serial me aisa hota

Hi Sonu! 🤗

Thanks sweetie! Happy you liked it. Poor SwaSan, at the moment, my heart literally cries for them. I genuinely think the cvs too may be trying to redeem Lakshya and I felt Sanskaar could do with some relief, as we have a new villain now too 😉. Whether he's actually changed or not will be seen as we carry on! I so want Shomi to talk to Sanskaar to make him see he needs to give Swara some hope. Poor girl, how to take all that? That's Sanskaar no? Whatever happens if it's about Swara, he would forget everything else. Serial main toh no hopes for a kiss but here we can compensate 😆. Thanks again!

Mmmwah

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: a_uma
beautifully written...

..the barrier is finally broken between swasan .. their reunion is beautifully written.. 👏👏👏.. and happy to see swaLak bonding as well...

Thank you Uma, so glad you liked it and let me know so nicely xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson
I absolutely loved it. Loved both Sanlak and Swasan scene.
Wish shomi plays cupid in the show too.

Hi Nita! Thank you so much for your kind words, glad you enjoyed this 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Kelly08
phew a bit satisfied with this os😉,sorry i didnt like previous.😛But this one was heart touching...especially shomi 's phone conversation with sanskar...awww poor shona is so fragile ,everytime something badly injures her mentally her health get ruined...

helplessness ,desperation frustration of sanskar is well presented ,so do swara's

i m really keen to know what is sanskar 's majboori ?? what she said brings absolute senses she can be his strength in his weakness,,,that how a hubby wifey should be ...

enough of this mushiness,,,,i just wish cv's end this... :((😭

Hey Kelly! How are you?

Ohh you didn't like Resolved? How come? Was it the plot of it or the writing? Do tell me as I really appreciate constructive criticism so I can improve 😊. See the last one had to start as it did to make way for this one but happy that you felt this one was a bit satisfying at least. I would love Shomi to take an active role in helping SwaSan as she clearly understands them at present. Swara is under too much stress and I would genuinely fear for her mental and physical well being.

You will have to wait for the next part to have the details of the conspiracy revealed 😉. Like I said in the intro I wanted to deal with this here but you can see how long this already was. I'll try and end the suspense soon! Thanks for your comments!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
awesome os
loved it

Thanks a lot Prachi 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
Awesome update
I loved it
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Hey Mansi! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I will work on part 3 as soon as time permits and will continue to bother you with PMs 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: KawalArora
wonderfully written by a wonderful person. My fav writer Shruti again u won my heart today. Its so soothing to read it when d same is not happening in d show. plz update soon n thanks dear for pm

Ahhh Kawal your too nice to me sweetie! Thank you so much, really appreciate your words, made me feel really good! I'll update as soon as possible; please keep reading X

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Shruti,
Fabulously written, as with all your earlier writings! I just could never find enough words to suitably convey my thoughts.

Hey! 🤗

This is such a nice comment and its brevity doesn't detract in any way from how happy it made me feel! So glad you have read the other work too and thanks so much for your kindness and support! You might have told me your name before but I cannot recall it, would you mind sharing so I can addres your properly when replying? 😳

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Shrutu🤗

oh and an extra 🤗🤗--because I missed you so much😭.

I have not yet read the first part I am afraid--its christmas eve--and I have an off-day tomorrow..so I am totally online😃

Been watching the swasan scenes..the departure made me cry.😭

Coming to this----

wow Laksh😆..he was pretending to be inebriated..just so he could eavesdrop😉...isse kehte hain--where elephants and horses cannot do anything..a mosquito is sometimes enough😆

The brothers ka convo😃---its wonderful. and all in hindi.😳

The way Sanskaar rushed to see her..you know it reminded me of a quote from sound of music sis----

where the baroness is telling maria"" there is nothing more irresistable to a man than a woman who is in love with him""

the helpless longing..the bitter separation when both the hearts are so bruised...and the way they succumb to the fact that they are no longer happy without each other...its your forte after all.

Love ya sis---

Happiest new year to you..and a very merry christmas😃

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