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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

I absolutely loved it. Loved both Sanlak and Swasan scene.

Wish shomi plays cupid in the show too.

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Kelly08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

phew a bit satisfied with this os😉,sorry i didnt like previous.😛But this one was heart touching...especially shomi 's phone conversation with sanskar...awww poor shona is so fragile ,everytime something badly injures her mentally her health get ruined...

helplessness ,desperation frustration of sanskar is well presented ,so do swara's

i m really keen to know what is sanskar 's majboori ?? what she said brings absolute senses she can be his strength in his weakness,,,that how a hubby wifey should be ...

enough of this mushiness,,,,i just wish cv's end this... :((😭

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Awesome update

I loved it

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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dilwali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

wonderfully written by a wonderful person. My fav writer Shruti again u won my heart today. Its so soothing to read it when d same is not happening in d show. plz update soon n thanks dear for pm

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Dear Shruti,

Fabulously written, as with all your earlier writings! I just could never find enough words to suitably convey my thoughts.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Un-res'd Page 1 Shru (and I'm still grinning that I got the first post) 😆

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Guys! Have woken to some really lovely comments and am touched! I'll start replying to everyone individually but please bear with me. I slept after 4 and was up before 8 am! Love you all xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Kamala05
Shruthi you are back with another amazing work.🤗

This is the Sanskaar Mahashwari we know . This should be his reaction after the chaos which was created by Ragini . Even Laksh's behavior change is narrated astutely . I loved the conversation between the brothers without any cliche dialogues .
The aftermath of the indifferent behavior of Sanskaar on Swara, the girl cannot forget everything all of a sudden and indulge in other activities , no matter how strong she is . That makes us human . I loved her reaction when she saw Sanskaar in her room , the expression from disbelief to realization .And his reaction when he heard the Jiyun ya maru tumhe kya farak padta hai from her , we cannot imagine a different emotion from Sanskaar.
This is the intensity which the viewers are missing from SR episodes. I wonder how can the writers mistreat there own characters carelessly whereas the talented viewers like u write fab fiction on it .

Kamala 🤗

Such a lovely comemnt you left me and that too it had come in rather quick after I posted. Sorry I didn't reply straightaway but my head was scrambled after the writing 😆. I'm so pleased you liked this! Yes exactly, this is how I see Sanskaar- action oriented even in set backs and not likely to be made a fool of and stop trusting or saving his love. The SanLak convo was hard work. I am so not a Lakshya fan but wanted to show that he may be changing, but not make it serial world dramatic and unrealistic. Glad you felt it worked.

I can't believe how much torture is heaped on heroines in our shows and here I would genuinely expect Swara to cave in unless she got a sign from Sanskaar no? I am rather tired from that scene myself 😆 so it's lovely to read your kind words about it. Awww your making me 😳 with your last line! Thank you so much. Xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Vaibhi.
Amazing ..just amazing work 👏
Swara's answer to Sanskar .. I really wish she reacts some other way too not only just crying and begging...and Sanskar losing control and giving Swara the love she was craving for... just magical...
SanLak conversation was also mind blowing..😳
I loved it ..completely

Pubi sweetie 🤗

Thank you so much for this and for your lovely PM too. I too get fed up of the crying overdose but mind you in yesterday's epi I was so proud of her, she was brave and dignified but the issue is our dear CVs who just want to take her from one mission to the next 🤢. I felt that there should be a confrontation between SwaSan which should end in a way that said more than words could so tried that. So glad the SanLak convo is being liked! Thanks again for this hon!

Lots of love X

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: simsen23
Shruti
wow you yave described the romance of swasan perfectly...
The way lakshay compare himself with sanskar,sanskar's reaction,his so called indifferent behaviour to swarq
,his concern n love for her,swara's anger n reaction to the sudden kiss
i love everything about the story
Waiting fr d next par
love
simi 😊

Hey Simi xoxo

Thank you for your kind words, so happy you enjoyed this update. I pondered hard over the SanLak convo and then went with what felt right. The SwaSan part took the longest to write and am so relieved at the comments on it. I'll get to the next part soon enough, I know what I need to cover, it's just finding the time to actually write it. Lots of love X

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