Rectified- Part 2, The Restitution Series - Page 2

Amazing ..just amazing work 👏

Awww... so much angst ..so much love ..so much passion...LOVED it!

such a nice update...finally the sanskaar v know...

Originally posted by: jasw

Awww... so much angst ..so much love ..so much passion...LOVED it!

Originally posted by: ritika52

such a nice update...finally the sanskaar v know...

jldi se ragini ka khel khtm ho jaye bs...

Shruti
wow you yave described the romance of swasan perfectly...
The way lakshay compare himself with sanskar,sanskar's reaction,his so called indifferent behaviour to swarq
,his concern n love for her,swara's anger n reaction to the sudden kiss
i love everything about the story
Waiting fr d next par
love
simi 😊

Superb... 👏 Sanlak nd Swasan both interaction are Awesome..loved it 👍🏼

Wow!brilliant.
sanlak part was gd.Swara bcm vulnerable.so much happn & without sanskar she hs no hope.
Othrside sanskar hurting himslf bcz he hurt swara.whn he th8 finaly he got his life its taken away.
Lv shomi.she informd sanskar abt swara & he cm imidiately.i wnt shomi play a role 2 unite swasan.
Swara saw hope tht sanskar cm 2 tk her bt again its broke.
Sanskar cnt see swara lk ths,finaly hisk mask fall.
He kissed her &reassure 2 trust him,trust in thr relatnshp.
Thnks 4 cntuing.love it.wish serial me aisa hota

Res

Unreserved

Firstly, I'm so glad you decided to write a continuation to your OS. Although, you didn';t leave us hanging, i did feel there was so much that needed to be dealt including Ragini's defeat and SwaSan reconciliation.

Coming to the OS itself. Wow Di. You outdo yourself every time and I love reading your pieces.

Beginning with your description of Sanskar's feeling of hurt, and helplessness was so touching. The way he spend so much time outside, and then coming back to the Maheshwari House, I didn't feel like calling it a home, and avoiding their room altogether was beautifully portrayed.

I loved the SanLak conversation. Although I personally don't favour Laksh as a character because of the lack of depth and understanding in the way the CV's have scripted it, SanLak is one place where i will wholeheartedly welcome him. And since Laksh has become a SwaSan shipper i must say he has gained some respect from me. Haha drunk Laksh is sensible laksh, I like that. There conversation and later plotting was wonderful.

i know the hero of your OS series was initially Sanskar, but I must say, Swara stole the limelight in this one. I loved your portrayal of her sadness and realisation. And how the sight of sanskar itself is enough to put life and soul back into her.

I loved their confrontation, was needed and i think that confrontation is what fuelled the later passion into them. The way Sanskar's resistance starts to crack and then finally breaking till they aare consumed by the overcoming love was so beautifully expressed that I could imagine it in front of my eyes. Wow. I'm so glad that they cleared the misunderstandings and now Sanskar has the support of both his childhood friend and love of his life. I'm pretty sure he is invincible now.

Can't wait for the next part.

Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas.

XOXO
Sree

beautifully written...

..the barrier is finally broken between swasan .. their reunion is beautifully written.. 👏👏👏.. and happy to see swaLak bonding as well...