SwaSan OS: Dyuta Parva/ Karna Parva Day 16.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: luvakanksha
Hey viji
Superb work
I enjoyed reading this
There were 3 brains working simultaneously in your os that is ram sanskar and Swara unfortunately that doesn't happen on the show😆 show 's rule is one brain at a time
I loved Ram's character, so understanding
Sanskar was a treat in this os his turmoil for swara was amazing
Swara's way of making him understand her love for him was also awesome
I loved it
U will continue it right?
Pls continue soon
I am not watching the show right now only Swasan scenes are watched by me rest I skip so these os ss ff are really needed

Hey Akanksha...🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton for your comment dear. Am so very glad you liked the portrayal of Sanskaar & Swara here, as well as Ram.

I hope to write a sequel OS, but will be after I return from holidays, around Jan 1st week. Will surely PM you once I'm able to post.

Have a Very Merry Xmas and a Happy New year!

Cheers

Viji

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TRPS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

hey! 🤗
I totally adore this beautiful art of yours of intermingling the two different tales so neatly to make a full new different story. :)) It would be so nice to see other family members to take stand for themselves as you mentioned in this story. Ram prasad playing Swasan's cupid was something very different. I was thinking that he will give words of wisdom to Sanskaar. (chhora adjust karna padta hai. main nahin kar rahaa hoon kyaa thaari maa ke saath adjust. 🤣 ) but this approach in your story was better , clean and accurate.
the quotes you mentioned are so true and perfect, I really like those quotes. :D
and *Humph* it is a cliff hanger for me, eagerly waiting for next part but first you enjoy your vacation. :))

Edited by TRPS - 9 years ago

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ShadikaIshVeer

@ShadikaIshVeer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Hey...Shadika, is it? Thanks a ton for your comment on this OS, as well as your lovely words about my previous works. 😊

Regarding this OS, am very glad you liked the gradual rapprochement and reconciliation between Swara and Sanskaar. It will take time for that trust between them to be fully restored, but the understanding and hope is slowly growing.

I really wanted to envision SwaSan countering Ragini together. And beats me how in the serial, they have conveniently forgotten that CD of Ragini's. 😆 They can use it so easily to prevent her nakhras! Also, there are so many business and corporate laws that will make it very difficult for Ragini to take over ownership of their firm.

I've sent you a buddy request, so I will be able to PM you for my future works.

Cheers

Viji</font>

You can call me MM 😊 Your most welcome 😳 Yeah it takes time for a heart to hell 😳 Yeah they forget logic due to twist 😆 😆

Yes , I accepted 😳 Cant wait to read more from you 😳

MM

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Wow!fantastic.
I love it.

Thanks so much Sonu yaar. Very glad that you liked it. 🤗 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ritika52
wat a story...seriously...
beautifully blended with the mahabharat...
such a nice os...
wish u convert it to ts or 4s smthin...showing their life ahead after these revelations of feelings...
n put in some more of those swasanlicious moments...

Hey Ritika...🤗 🤗

Thanks so much for your lovely comment. Am very happy you liked this OS.

I will definitely do my best to write a sequel OS to this one, after the Xmas holidays (should be January 1st week). Not sure about making it longer, into a 3 or 4S yaar, at present I have plans only for one more OS on this theme, as a sequel.

But I'll surely write other OS's on SwaSan. Apart from this sequel OS, I am also working on ideas for a separate standalone one.

Shall PM you as soon as I post.

Wish you and your family a Very Merry Xmas and a Happy New year in advance!

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Prizi
heya this is beautiful

Hey Prizi...thanks a lot for your comment. Happy to hear you liked this. 🤗 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Purbishona
Viji. Its a masterpiece.
The blending of Mahabharata with the story made it awesome.
The characterisation of Ramprasad was very well..
His hidden feelings, concern for his son, pains and communication with Swara .. You penned down all so perfectly.
DP and AP reminded me about Dhritrastra and Gandhari frm Mahabharata.. Sanskar is a mixed version of Arjuna and Krishna.. Swara's last interaction with Sanskar was mindblowing .. She told the exact things the viewers wanted to hear..
Write more. Your every work is immensely brilliant stuff..
🤗 for the PM..

Love,

~Purbi.

Hi Purbi dear...🤗 🤗

Thanks so much for that very lovely comment. I was so very happy to read your words, about how you liked this OS.

I agree with your interpretation of Durga Prasad and Annapurna, they are really like Dritarashtra and Gandhari. Though Durga Prasad tries to be fair to Sanskaar, and really does love him too, in the end, they always land up being partial to Lakshya.

Ram, I do feel, will take a stand in support of his son. He could not support him 5 years ago, and let Sanskaar down badly then. But I really think, that when push comes to shove, his paternal instinct has to win over his sibling attachment to his Bhaisa. He needs to take a stand protecting his son's interests, its high time.

I think one reason why Ram approves of Swara, is because he knows that she will place Sanskaar's interests first, something Ram and Sujata could not do.

I also feel that Sanskaar is a blend of qualities of Shri Krishna and Arjuna. He also has some good traits of Karna.

Thanks for saying that you liked the concluding scene between Swara and Sanskaar, the gradual and steady progress in their reconciliation.

Wish you and your family a Very Merry Xmas and a Happy New Year in advance! 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: simsen23
Viji..
Superb one dear...i mean i salute your creativity...
😆
Kind of comparing characters of mahabharat with this fictional characters is amazing
especially ram prashad's emotional side is just outstanding
😊
seriously...u did a great job
waiting for next updates
love
simi 😊

Hi Simi..🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton dear, for those lovely words. Am very happy to hear that you liked this OS.

I'm hoping to write a sequel OS to this, around Jan 1st week once I return from Holidays. Also have plans for another, standalone OS.

Cheers

Viji

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Kelly08

@Kelly08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

i never knew the name of sanskar's father.😆..lol thanks with this os i know who he is.he is always sidelined in serial...but u choose to give a word of mouth for him,,...

its pretty good os but i want to know how you gona carry this story further...will it be connected to present forged signs on divorce papers ?? or will there romance happen in their room...

plz update os today itself...whatever i read so far and whatever i m watching in this serial is very mushy ...i cant see sanskar so much rude..😡.swara doesnt deserve this much pain😵

thnkx 4 pm btw😊