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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
😭👏
u mk me cry...
its painful to c swasan like ths...thy r so much in love yet helpless..
& yes its our sanskar's plan...u express his pov very well..💔
love it.
&missing u...

Hey Sonu, sorry for causing tears hon, but I am rather heartsore at the moment. Am just convinced that it's a Sanskaar plan so wanted to get it all out to make myself feel better. So glad you liked it despite the sadness! Miss you guys too! Xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

First of all Love you for this Amazing OS..😳

You managed time for this , And hats off for that..👏

Sanskar's pov is very well expressed here..

A much needed piece of writing in this situation when we all Swasan fans are confused and worried about our favorite couple's future...

Thanks for PM 🤗

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a_uma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

beautiful OS ... you have detailed Sanskar's angst superbly.👏👏👏.. you have given all us swasanians new hope and a plausible explanation for his behaviour with swara..

..Hats off to you for this masterful writing even when on vacation.. 👏...

.. agree that swasan are in real danger from Ragini.. she will do anything to safeguard her 'malkin' position.. Sanskar must be worried not only about those marwari samaj ppl who came to MM but also the unknown goons who tried to stab him in the cafe garden..😲

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

This one was beautifully written Shruti, the way you write and bring out the emotions the characters feel is amazing and magnificent just pure beauty I've been reading each and every of your story. And I'd say I just can't stop reading them you really are an ace in writing never give up on this..

The raw emotions of Sanskaar and Swara which were shown, their agony pain and internal turmoil, Sanskaar's struggle against himself to lend that moment of comfort to Swara when she was hurting and the best part for me was the last paragraph it was beautifully written depicting happy days ahead for our couple..

Have an amazing time in Georgia and enjoy your vacations..

Love,

Kashmi

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Vaibhi.
First of all Love you for this Amazing OS..😳
You managed time for this , And hats off for that..👏
Sanskar's pov is very well expressed here..
A much needed piece of writing in this situation when we all Swasan fans are confused and worried about our favorite couple's future...
Thanks for PM🤗

Pubi 🤗
How are you?! Awww thanks hon! Love you all and SwaSan too, hence the ramblings! Haha, I was thinking of various stories during journey times so now to actually write them. This one got bashed out rather quick so am relieved you liked it. I don't know if I'm stupid to be so optimistic but there has to be something to sanskaar's current behaviour, otherwise I will despair! This is wishful thinking of course but am seriously working on the assumption this is a Sanskaar plan, otherwise him not believing Swara at all is just too much.
Lots of love xx

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718075

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

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I'm sorry it me so long to unreserve, got busy.

Wow Shru Di🤗 Hope you are having an amazing time in the mountains.

Are you sure you are enjoying in the mountains with your family? There was so much pain and sadness in this fic.

Shru Di i must say, you are amazing with your words. You brought out Sanskar as well as Swara's pain so beautifully that it brought tears to my eyes. But the hero here is undoubtedly Sanskar. I seriously didn't give Swara's character much of a thought. But the way you brought out the emotions Sanskar is going through inside with his passive and blank face was beautiful. I loved the small paragraph in there where you described what would happen when he went back to the room. I know, the sindur plays a very important role in any married indian couple's life but I think the value it has in SwaSan story in even more.

I think, Sanskar is the only one who is the one who can actually win against, but Ragini obviously knows his week point. Sanskar's love for Swara has become like a parasite, the more deeply he loves her the more hurt he ends up getting.

I don't have more words that are worthy to praise this OS. It is an absolute beauty.

Lots of love
Sree

P.S. The whole scenario of the divorce being a staged drama to fool Ragini, has this been confirmed or is this what most of us viewers believe? I want to believe it too, but you can never trust indian telly.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: a_uma
beautiful OS ... you have detailed Sanskar's angst superbly.👏👏👏.. you have given all us swasanians new hope and a plausible explanation for his behaviour with swara..
..Hats off to you for this masterful writing even when on vacation..👏...

.. agree that swasan are in real danger from Ragini.. she will do anything to safeguard her 'malkin' position.. Sanskar must be worried not only about those marwari samaj ppl who came to MM but also the unknown goons who tried to stab him in the cafe garden..😲

Hey Uma! Xoxo
Thanks for your kind words! Is there a fandom that has suffered so much with their hero?! 😭 How much more test are SwaSan fans to give to be able to enjoy good times for their OTP?! I mean union hua nahi, and here they want to bring separation! Grrr. I know other think/ hope the same as I have tried to do here, I just built that into a short-ish scene/ explanation of the feelings on both sides but mainly on Sanskaar's as his current viewpoint is so hidden. Logically I feel he must be fearful for Swara and that can be the only reason he would agree to her being sent away, after only recently defending her to Ragini? Yes there was the goons and I like to think that sanskaar's reaction to learning of the Samaj people was shocked and could potentially lead to him wanting to remove Swara from harm's way. I will otherwise find it hard to stomach Sanskaar's character being changed in such an inconsistent way.
Love mmmwaaah

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue
This one was beautifully written Shruti, the way you write and bring out the emotions the characters feel is amazing and magnificent just pure beauty I've been reading each and every of your story. And I'd say I just can't stop reading them you really are an ace in writing never give up on this..
The raw emotions of Sanskaar and Swara which were shown, their agony pain and internal turmoil, Sanskaar's struggle against himself to lend that moment of comfort to Swara when she was hurting and the best part for me was the last paragraph it was beautifully written depicting happy days ahead for our couple..

Have an amazing time in Georgia and enjoy your vacations..

Love,
Kashmi

Hey Kashmi!

I so loved reading your lovely comments! I don't think we have had the pleasure of interacting before? I hope we will do now 😳. Honestly, as I wrote this in such odd timescales and feeling rather scrambled about the present track, I wasn't sure of the reception it would get but am so pleased and grateful for the responses so far. You've been reading all my Ffs?! That makes me feel so good, I can't express it! I love writing and when I read someone say they related to something I penned or felt the emotions of the characters that I so love, it gives me such a grateful and warm feeling
😳. I want to say a huge thanks for your support and for reading what I write and letting me know in such a nice manner! I wanted to somehow end on a hopeful note and this ending literally almost wrote itself as I went through the angst of the earlier sections. I am an eternal optimist so like to think that even in the midst of trauma we can find some hope! Hope to continue discussions and thanks again! Thanks for the wishes for my break! Love,
Shru x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
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Hope u had a gr8 tym holidaying Shru🤗

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Shruti
It was so painfully beautiful. Like u said bittersweet
Sanskaar's pain at hurting Swara and witnessing each rivulet of hers falling from her eyes was so elegantly described, that we cant stop ourselves from hugging hm and crying for him.
It was excruciating for me even to read as it went deep through me and at the same time I couldn't stop reading as it has been written so flawlessly. Kudos to you Shruti!

Btw, u have read Greek and Roman mythology?? Achilles heel? I have read it all! Loved the way u created parallelism between Achilles' heel and Swara for Sanskaar!

Sakshi xoxo!
I was so happy to see the quick res and thanks for this wonderfully kind comment! Yes is a painful piece isn't it? It's how I feel when I watch the episodes at the moment and as I'm away from regular discussions it makes it even more hard to bear I think. Despite Sanskaar not saying anything, you can see how much hurting Swara hurts him and I couldn't believe it when he didn't react to her recent words when she openly told him she wants to win him. That whole scene was a confession without saying I love you surely? So to me, something must be up, otherwise it makes no sense to me.

OMG- I am obsessed over Greek and Roman mythology since childhood. I used to devour those tales, so similar I find to Indian mythology with their multiple Gods and them being depicted divine but yet very human? Also the parables and all always appeals to me. The legend of Troy is a serious obsession with me. Not just with works like Illyiad and Odyssey but especially because of David Gemmell's excellent re-telling of the popular legend to make it a whole alternative saga. Have you read that? It's a trilogy, the last book completed by his wife after his death. If you haven't I highly recommend it. Not many people have read it but as you know I like to reimagine things already being shown (in the context of the show) and his whole alternate version is so amazingly done, it's one of my fave works of fantasy fiction.

Thank you Sakshi for your lovely words, mmmwah

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Hey Shru I hope you are enjoying your holidays...
I so want to see something like this.. Where all this is just Sanskaar's plan against Ragini and he just wants Swara out of the way... Because if not I would be even more heartbroken than Swara and since we havent got any monologue from Sanskaar's side we can actually hope that this could be it...
I think u have literally penned down all of our feelings in a totally your kind of way... And I absolutely loved it...
Be back soon😳

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