Resolved - Part 1, The Restitution Series - Page 5

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan

You legit killed it today with you story

Originally posted by: arohijsp

Lovely OS dear! It was heart wrenching and beautifully painful.
I feel this might be exactly what's going through Sanskaar's mind when Swara will be thrown out of MM. It's amazing how you can connect to Sanskaar's character! One thing I'm sure, that Sanskaar's going to make Ragini pay for every tear Swara shed!

BTW , enjoy your holuday dear!

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Aww your not unnoticed:). A lot of us here are chatter boxes so join in whenever and I'll watch out for you to strike up convos with now:)! Thanks to you too and for the wishes, wish the same for your and yours mmmwah

Originally posted by: misaki

Shru 🤗🤗

Firstly I am happy that no matter where you are we are never devoid of your awesome stories.(I know Selfish me😛 - really can't help but want more😆)

Coming to the wonderful OS - seriously, having you write or describe Sanskaar and what he feels has and always will be an absolute treat to read. I really believe Sanskaar cannot be as cold as he is to Swara on the show right now, there has to be an explanation for all of it. I can understand him lashing out , finally having a reason to get all his repressed feelings out in the open but for him to believe that his Swara could actually do something so unlike her (alimony and divorce) is definitely not like our Sanskaar. There can only be one explanation to all of it and as you so wonderfully managed to put it into words( I am always left amazed and stunned at your capability to put something as obvious yet complicated as feelings of a person into words and do it so beautifully.❤️)

The way you managed to show how Sanskaar has resolved(the title very apt of course😊 ) to get his wife out of all the drama and destruction that Ragini clearly has planned for the MM, yet he can't help but falter when it comes to her. She really is his Achilles - heel. That part where he looks into her eyes and his mask comes off no matter how prepared he is for it gave me so many wonderful feels🤗 I am still basking in it!

I really hope the show makers realize how we have come to see Sanskaar, a very smart man who would become a force to be reckoned with when he put his mind into making someone pay. A guy who has the amazing capability to love yet also hate(which is why I find him so much more real and awesome as a character - the intensity of his feelings! Love him so so much!❤️)when someone crosses him or his love. I loved how you explained that part of him there Shru!🤗 That is the guy that we have all fallen in love with. A guy who can see what others cannot, the smartest of the lot by far. So if someone can bring an end to all of Ragini's atrocities (really loved the Medusa and Achilles reference here Shru - so very fitting ) it has to be him and no one else, not even the always mission ready Swara.

Though I would love for Swara to be a part of it , the main"kartru" of all of it has to be Sanskaar.

I have to obviously mention how much I loovedd SwaSan moments there Shru, of course it was all about them but those little moments they had with each other were just soo darn good. Of course my favorite part had to the ending! I absolutely loved how Swara again managed to hear Sanskaar's heart cry out for her. I am a sucker for such scenes and that moment and Swara turning around and meeting his eyes. He not wanting to be found out yet at that moment trying to communicate and put everything that he was feeling and wanting to tell her yet couldn't, in his gaze, urging and praying that she would understand. While I could imagine her being completely ecstatic to find out that her man clearly still cared for her , trying to understand what all of this meant for them and why he was distancing himself from her when she could see in his eyes the agony bigger than what she was going through. Hopefully she was able to get some of her answers which of course would explain why she would go back stronger, wanting to be his biggest support no matter what Ragini had in store for her. What could be a better force to be reckoned with than a Queen willing to go to any lengths to protect her king in a battle?

I honestly do not know or believe the CVs could see the amazing potential the track could have for SwaSan but a girl can dream can't she?

I really hope that Sanskaar really isn't butchered like the other characters have. I really believe Sanskaar is much smarter than that. So I really am praying that they show it was all an act for protecting his love. I cannot think I would ever be happy with any other alternative

Seriously Shru , Anna had already mentioned once to Viji recently about how we really don't have enough number of good Indian writers out there. You two really should consider going pro soon. I know it has been a dream of yours. I seriously hope it comes true very soon. Of course that would mean I could tell everyone that the amazing writer of this awesome book is a friend of mine😆😆

As always Shru what an absolute pleasure it was to have read that. You know I am a sucker for Sanskaar's POV and coming from you just had to fall in love with him all over again❤️ Loved it so darn much Shru! No thank you's na? so 🤗 X 100000000000000(😆) for giving me my Sanskaar.❤️

Love you loads,

Geetha

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Wow shruti..😃😃🤗

Loved your version of the current tracks..😳

but poor swasan😭

sanskaar is undergoing through much more pain here

i mean swara is only facing his wrath and humiliation by ragini..that is painful for her..😭

but what sanskaar is feeling is beyond comprehension..he is feeling pain, grief, scorching hatred towards ragini and himself for hurting swara..his heart is twisting with pain with repulsion for his own actions which he is forced to take ..

and you have portrayed everything soulfully dear shruti.. 😭

and i really loved the way you ended this OS..

sanskaar followed her till baadi and the way you described their eye lock was(*swooning)

It was very beautiful my dear..i wish there was a next update..like you write a TS..hope you will come up with one..😳

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Shru 🤗

Writing even when you are on vacation - you are a true shipper! 😉 I know you are having a fabulous time and I wish you continue giving us pieces of brilliant writing more often. 😉 I hope Georgia is awesome! 😉

Love Love Love the title! 👏👏

The OS on its whole is painfully beautiful! You have so beautifully etched out Swara and Sanskaars feelings. I love how you have described Ragini in the beginning. Beautiful play of words. 👏👏

Swara's pain is heartbreaking. Oh Shru, since the moment, I have read about the segment, I have been hating on the segment and loving it. I did not watch it and I am glad I did not, because you have explained it SO beautifully that I had tears in my eyes while reading it. Do you realise, you make me cry a lot with your stories? 😛 That is to say, you are doing a fabulous job with the writing. 😉

I am so glad, Sanskaar came out to help Swara even if he did not show it. I wish we had it on the show. Sanskaar is being indifferent but yet even in his indifference, he is protecting her. I love this Sanskaar.

I loved the last para where Sanskaar is following Swara in the car and he is noticing her every move. His resolve to solve this mess for her and himself is what I loved the most. Can we please have this in the show? Also, the end part, where their eyes meet and they reach an understanding - Uff! I SO wish the creatives read your OS and we do get this one scene! I want Swara to trust Sanskaar that he wont let her be humiliated and believe in him to protect her always.

Lovely OS Shru! 😊 I loved the fact that I got to read more from Sanskaar's POV because I love him the most as you are so well aware. 😆 Thank you SOOO much for taking out time from your vacation and giving us this gem! 🤗

Love

Anna

P.S : I agree with Geetu above; please write a book! We need good Indian authors and I would love to have a book of yours in my collection. 😉

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update

Your OS was truly amazing

Thanks for the pm