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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Hey Kashmi!

I so loved reading your lovely comments! I don't think we have had the pleasure of interacting before? I hope we will do now 😳. Honestly, as I wrote this in such odd timescales and feeling rather scrambled about the present track, I wasn't sure of the reception it would get but am so pleased and grateful for the responses so far. You've been reading all my Ffs?! That makes me feel so good, I can't express it! I love writing and when I read someone say they related to something I penned or felt the emotions of the characters that I so love, it gives me such a grateful and warm feeling
😳. I want to say a huge thanks for your support and for reading what I write and letting me know in such a nice manner! I wanted to somehow end on a hopeful note and this ending literally almost wrote itself as I went through the angst of the earlier sections. I am an eternal optimist so like to think that even in the midst of trauma we can find some hope! Hope to continue discussions and thanks again! Thanks for the wishes for my break! Love,
Shru x


Hey yes we've never had an opportunity to ever converse before this comment as I've been lurking in the backfront of this forum like a silent reader but certain stories do give you the prod to come out of your shade and your's made me do it along with some others too.. 😊

Your response to my comment is as warm as your are girl I'm really happy that the writer in you was pleased after reading my response ofcourse the biggest reward for an author is appreciation and constructive criticism which helps improve..

I've been reading and re reading each and every one of your story specially the Comprehension series that one is personal favorite and Zenith these two are par excellent not that the others aren't good but these two are just beauty.. I love reading them.. 😕

You deserve every ounce of this support just continue what you're doing and well you and some other amazing authors have been my inspiration to start my own story on Swara and Sanskaar so you keep writing and spreading inspiration around the forum. 😃

Sorry to bug you but had to get this outta my system. 😳

Love,
Kashmi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Sakshi xoxo!
I was so happy to see the quick res and thanks for this wonderfully kind comment! Yes is a painful piece isn't it? It's how I feel when I watch the episodes at the moment and as I'm away from regular discussions it makes it even more hard to bear I think. Despite Sanskaar not saying anything, you can see how much hurting Swara hurts him and I couldn't believe it when he didn't react to her recent words when she openly told him she wants to win him. That whole scene was a confession without saying I love you surely? So to me, something must be up, otherwise it makes no sense to me.

OMG- I am obsessed over Greek and Roman mythology since childhood. I used to devour those tales, so similar I find to Indian mythology with their multiple Gods and them being depicted divine but yet very human? Also the parables and all always appeals to me. The legend of Troy is a serious obsession with me. Not just with works like Illyiad and Odyssey but especially because of David Gemmell's excellent re-telling of the popular legend to make it a whole alternative saga. Have you read that? It's a trilogy, the last book completed by his wife after his death. If you haven't I highly recommend it. Not many people have read it but as you know I like to reimagine things already being shown (in the context of the show) and his whole alternate version is so amazingly done, it's one of my fave works of fantasy fiction.

Thank you Sakshi for your lovely words, mmmwah



I agree yaar! There is something going on in Sanskaar's mind. The way he peaks at her and then looks away when she's about to look at him, shows he wants her to see that he's ignoring but beneath he does want to look at her like before. Then, he is not such a fool to believe Ragini over Swara, especially after when, she did say I really really love you Sanskaar, on her knees literally begging him to not divorce her. And he also knew that those Samaj wale people are going to come. I'm sure he's doing this for Swara. At east I hope the same.

No, I haven't read that trilogy! I'll definitely read it now.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

Shru, hope you're enjoying your holidays and mountains🤗

Ah, your words are daggers and sentences are whips darling, they leave marks in a tender torture against one's heart. I've never read anything that had captured the gist, of utterly bitter and dark and agonizing...truly molten lava kind of pain this perfectly before.

This is the only silver line the only dawn I can see at the moment. Sanskar has to be acting, sacrificing his queen in hope of checkmating Ragini in a further move...or else this would be the end of journey for me. I don't like perfect couples broken and patched up...love never reconciles to perfection.

The way you portrayed Swara from Sanskar's eyes...God, these days you make me cry a lot. It was harder a blow than loosing Kavita for him. At least he played no hand in her death, here he was suffocating his love, with verbal grasp that would kill her soul even before it would touch her life and the agony he felt...and the pure hatred towards Ragini for making him to this...marvelous...just pure magic!

I've heard that those who love to extreme when pushed in to hatred becomes the lethal poison, it is so true in Sanskar's case. He would destroy Ragini...I actually fear for her now. I've seen the extent this man can love, I've seen the extent he can tolerate blows upon his own physical form, I have seen him compressing his own desires and...I have seen him explode, after reading the poisonous wrath boiling inside him for those who had dared to hurt his most precious, I can only pray for them, hell's fire would surely be better than having this man's wrath unleashed upon one's existence.
Pray for Ragini...the end is near!



Saku 🤗
I am having a great time, my siblings and I are together and even my mum! My hubby has accompanied me and my cup is rather full:).
Saku, I have read and re-read your comment and am somewhat speechless! Honestly I feel like a bit of a dithering idiot but I found the beauty of the words you used in your comment so powerful, I am really not sure my OS deserves it. I feel quite moved that you who can write what you just have about Sanskaar in particular but SwaSan and their endless game of beautiful pain and tender love felt what you did reading what I wrote. I am going to savour the words in this comment, I almost res a reply as I wanted to type from a laptop but thought that would be too much 😆.
I entirely and whole heartedly agree with you. I don't think I can take it if they intend to show that this is anything other than a Sanakaar plan. Swara's momentary mistrust was bad enough but if they think that die hard Sanakaar supporters like us can stomach seeing that Sanakaar of all the perfect men seen in Tv history would not trust his Swara when she gets on her knees or that he would think she would ask for alimony in that way, I am done with the show. You said it so perfectly, patched up love never reconciles to perfection and we want perfect here so will not settle for less.
I so want Sanskaar to annihilate Ragini. I can't believe I'm saying this but if they want to redeem Laksh, fine but after this, I can't see any other option but destruction for Ragini. I see Sanskaar just as you so aptly described, when love is that consuming it can destroy and so can he. He had a very Damon-esque quality to him; it's always drawn me. I so wish we can get justice finally as I am heartsick of the plot endlessly rotating around Ragini and her new tricks each time. Love you xoxo


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much to those who have already commented and are leaving me with their immensely valued feedback. It's 2.30am here now so I shall be replying to those I haven't yet got round to as soon as I wake! Huge thanks again and much love xoxoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow..shruti...what a perfect explanation of sanskar's current behaviour...i just love ur os...wish n hope for dis reason in d track too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey shruts!! i know you don't know me so well...but atleast i hope you've seen me in here..like in tit-bits.. whatever, your OS made me possessive about SwaSan even more than i naturally am.I am really contented and amazed by your ''resolved'' ...you've done a wonder by writing your interesting concept..Happy Reading It!! BTW enjoy ur trip to georgia..i know its beautiful cuz i've been there for around 2-3 times..i am an extreme travel freak and so is my family..we've enjoyed touring the whole USA and i hope you people enjoy a lot too...BEST WISHES TO YOU AND HAVE SAFE JOURNEY - ESHA 😳
write more and pm me if you can 😉

Lots of love
Esha 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shru 🤗🤗
Firstly I am happy that no matter where you are we are never devoid of your awesome stories.(I know Selfish me😛 - really can't help but want more😆)

Coming to the wonderful OS - seriously, having you write or describe Sanskaar and what he feels has and always will be an absolute treat to read. I really believe Sanskaar cannot be as cold as he is to Swara on the show right now, there has to be an explanation for all of it. I can understand him lashing out , finally having a reason to get all his repressed feelings out in the open but for him to believe that his Swara could actually do something so unlike her (alimony and divorce) is definitely not like our Sanskaar. There can only be one explanation to all of it and as you so wonderfully managed to put it into words( I am always left amazed and stunned at your capability to put something as obvious yet complicated as feelings of a person into words and do it so beautifully.❤️)
The way you managed to show how Sanskaar has resolved(the title very apt of course😊 ) to get his wife out of all the drama and destruction that Ragini clearly has planned for the MM, yet he can't help but falter when it comes to her. She really is his Achilles - heel. That part where he looks into her eyes and his mask comes off no matter how prepared he is for it gave me so many wonderful feels🤗 I am still basking in it!

I really hope the show makers realize how we have come to see Sanskaar, a very smart man who would become a force to be reckoned with when he put his mind into making someone pay. A guy who has the amazing capability to love yet also hate(which is why I find him so much more real and awesome as a character - the intensity of his feelings! Love him so so much!❤️)when someone crosses him or his love. I loved how you explained that part of him there Shru!🤗 That is the guy that we have all fallen in love with. A guy who can see what others cannot, the smartest of the lot by far. So if someone can bring an end to all of Ragini's atrocities (really loved the Medusa and Achilles reference here Shru - so very fitting ) it has to be him and no one else, not even the always mission ready Swara.

Though I would love for Swara to be a part of it , the main"kartru" of all of it has to be Sanskaar.

I have to obviously mention how much I loovedd SwaSan moments there Shru, of course it was all about them but those little moments they had with each other were just soo darn good. Of course my favorite part had to the ending! I absolutely loved how Swara again managed to hear Sanskaar's heart cry out for her. I am a sucker for such scenes and that moment and Swara turning around and meeting his eyes. He not wanting to be found out yet at that moment trying to communicate and put everything that he was feeling and wanting to tell her yet couldn't, in his gaze, urging and praying that she would understand. While I could imagine her being completely ecstatic to find out that her man clearly still cared for her , trying to understand what all of this meant for them and why he was distancing himself from her when she could see in his eyes the agony bigger than what she was going through. Hopefully she was able to get some of her answers which of course would explain why she would go back stronger, wanting to be his biggest support no matter what Ragini had in store for her. What could be a better force to be reckoned with than a Queen willing to go to any lengths to protect her king in a battle?
I honestly do not know or believe the CVs could see the amazing potential the track could have for SwaSan but a girl can dream can't she?

I really hope that Sanskaar really isn't butchered like the other characters have. I really believe Sanskaar is much smarter than that. So I really am praying that they show it was all an act for protecting his love. I cannot think I would ever be happy with any other alternative

Seriously Shru , Anna had already mentioned once to Viji recently about how we really don't have enough number of good Indian writers out there. You two really should consider going pro soon. I know it has been a dream of yours. I seriously hope it comes true very soon. Of course that would mean I could tell everyone that the amazing writer of this awesome book is a friend of mine😆😆

As always Shru what an absolute pleasure it was to have read that. You know I am a sucker for Sanskaar's POV and coming from you just had to fall in love with him all over again❤️ Loved it so darn much Shru! No thank you's na? so 🤗 X 100000000000000(😆) for giving me my Sanskaar.❤️

Love you loads,
Geetha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow shruti..😃😃🤗
Loved your version of the current tracks..😳
but poor swasan😭
sanskaar is undergoing through much more pain here
i mean swara is only facing his wrath and humiliation by ragini..that is painful for her..😭
but what sanskaar is feeling is beyond comprehension..he is feeling pain, grief, scorching hatred towards ragini and himself for hurting swara..his heart is twisting with pain with repulsion for his own actions which he is forced to take ..
and you have portrayed everything soulfully dear shruti.. 😭
and i really loved the way you ended this OS..
sanskaar followed her till baadi and the way you described their eye lock was(*swooning)
It was very beautiful my dear..i wish there was a next update..like you write a TS..hope you will come up with one..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shru 🤗

Writing even when you are on vacation - you are a true shipper! 😉 I know you are having a fabulous time and I wish you continue giving us pieces of brilliant writing more often. 😉 I hope Georgia is awesome! 😉

Love Love Love the title! 👏👏

The OS on its whole is painfully beautiful! You have so beautifully etched out Swara and Sanskaars feelings. I love how you have described Ragini in the beginning. Beautiful play of words. 👏👏

Swara's pain is heartbreaking. Oh Shru, since the moment, I have read about the segment, I have been hating on the segment and loving it. I did not watch it and I am glad I did not, because you have explained it SO beautifully that I had tears in my eyes while reading it. Do you realise, you make me cry a lot with your stories? 😛 That is to say, you are doing a fabulous job with the writing. 😉

I am so glad, Sanskaar came out to help Swara even if he did not show it. I wish we had it on the show. Sanskaar is being indifferent but yet even in his indifference, he is protecting her. I love this Sanskaar.

I loved the last para where Sanskaar is following Swara in the car and he is noticing her every move. His resolve to solve this mess for her and himself is what I loved the most. Can we please have this in the show? Also, the end part, where their eyes meet and they reach an understanding - Uff! I SO wish the creatives read your OS and we do get this one scene! I want Swara to trust Sanskaar that he wont let her be humiliated and believe in him to protect her always.

Lovely OS Shru! 😊 I loved the fact that I got to read more from Sanskaar's POV because I love him the most as you are so well aware. 😆 Thank you SOOO much for taking out time from your vacation and giving us this gem! 🤗

Love
Anna

P.S : I agree with Geetu above; please write a book! We need good Indian authors and I would love to have a book of yours in my collection. 😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
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You legit killed it today with you story

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