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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jess_27


Oh acha acha koi baat nahi.. Take your time.. I ll be waiting... Waise i'm excited for the long update.. Yay...:)


Hahaha hope you like it baby doll.. 😳😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
heya kashmi

that was superb update
mera dil khushi se jhum RHA hai
ooo sanky will feel very happy that she is overcoming her fears and haunting feelings and is facing them...powered by his love.
waiting for next part now...
if u give surprise like this for passing exam then. I will pray to god that next time you shall top your institute...
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Hey hey hey hey, here I am with one more update of this story, hope you guys like this like the previous one's. This is something which I've never attempted earlier so a bit nervous hope you guys approve it. Drop in your thoughts, good bad and constructive criticism is always welcome. No more ramblings here I go 😃:

Sanskaar walked inside the room spellbound by the aura Swara had created in their room. He could clearly see the efforts she had put in to make it special for him; the scented candles, the fairylights, their room converted back to how it used to be before the mishap of that night, every memory of it erased from the face of it.

It was so beautiful and romantic to see his room brighten and lighten up from the light of the candles and the fairylights. He was yet coming to terms with the beauty of the room when he heard soft melodious music playing in the background, Ellie Goulding's soulful voice drifted in his ears as love me like you do played from across the room.

Swara had entered after Sanskaar and shut the door behind her giving him a moment to let the shock and beauty of her surprise sink in, moving towards the bedside table she connected her phone to the mini speakers and put on love me like you do, a song which she and Sanskaar cherished and loved.

She had something more on her mind for tonight but before that she had to talk to him, he hadn't spoken a word since he entered the room, she had to know what he was thinking. Taking a deep breath she walked uptil where he stood and called out his name, "Sanskaar?" her voice shook him out of his reverie and he turned to look at her. He saw her smiling up at him, her eyes full of the unbridled & irrevocable love that she felt for him.

She had looked beautiful to him earlier but tonight she surpassed all boundaries of looking beautiful. Her elfin face getting illuminated in the soft yellow lights of the candle around her, hair tied in a loose side braid the coral peach and golden color of her saree setting off beautifully against her smooth white skin, she looked the most beautiful women to have ever set foot on mother earth according to Sanskaar.

As if he had no more control over his emotions and body his entire being being controlled by a superior force of an emotion called love he sank down on his knees to the floor in front of her surrendering his everything to this beautiful human standing in front of him who loved him just like he loved her, his Swara.

Sinking down to his level almost immediately Swara cupped his face in her palms and asked him concerned, "Sanskaar? What happened are you okay? Please talk to me my love you're scaring me." He looked up at her with reverence and unwavering devotion, his intense and passionate love for her reflected in his eyes and uttered the three most beautiful words which brightened up Swara's face even more, "I love you Swara." Cupping her face in between his palms he continued, his voice thick with emotions of love, "This is the most beautiful and the most special thing anyone has ever done for me till date. I can't even think of words which would help me convey how much I loved this and how wanted and loved I feel at the moment. You went through all this just for me Swara? Why did you do this and put yourself through so much suffering and pain by reviving the memories of that horrendous night, I don't like seeing you in pain Swara it hurts me to see you sad or upset. You've already had enough of those to last you for a lifetime. How did you manage to muster up the courage for this?" he asked still mesmerized by the courage she showed and the love she had for him.

Swara sat opposite him all the while he spoke her smile not faltering even for a second rather it widened with every word he said, she was so happy that he liked her surprise and then he asked her something which was very obvious and clear to her but it wasn't yet visible to Sanskaar, squaring her shoulders she raised herself up to her full height and spoke, "Your love gave me the courage to do this Sanskaar, it healed me bit by bit, putting back the pieces of my broken self with utmost care. Yes, I did feel the initial apprehension and fear when I stepped inside the room but then I was reminded of each and every of our happy moments which we've had in this very room. Those memories gave me the courage to be brave and fight back, it gave me the strength to eradicate the final memories of that night from our existence. I don't want us to spoil our present and future over something that happened in the past. Your love completes me Sanskaar just as you do, I love you very very much you're my world."

Smiling wide he pulled her closer to himself, "As you're mine, I love you Swara Maheshwari. You're mine to love and cherish for now and forever." She looked up at him with all the love she felt for him and inched closer to him in his arms, she knew the fact that Sanskaar exercised too much control over himself letting her get used to his touch never forcing his desire to take their marriage on the next level over her but now they were at a point where Swara wanted no barriers between them, they had earned these moments of love and she would make sure they lived it.

Putting her arms around his neck she drew herself closer to him as his grip tightened on her waist anticipating exactly the same thing which Swara anticipated, their breaths came out breezy and ragged intermingling with each other. No one knew who made the first move but the distance between them was finally erased and Sanskaar was kissing Swara very softly cherishing and memorizing her taste. Her response to his kiss was the only thing that was required for Sanskaar's mask of restraint to crack and make way for his intense passionate love.

He pulled Swara closer so that she wouldn't have to exert herself and kissed her deeply with every ounce of his passionate love. Swara responded to his kiss with the same fervour and kissed him with deep longing and desire pouring out the feelings of her heart in the kiss.

Threading his fingers through her braid he let her hair loose and tugged at them angling her head so that he could deepen the kiss. Their tongues and lips locked in a passionate embrace they kissed and kissed until Swara broke apart for need of air but not one with patience, Sanskaar captured her lips in another of his soul searing kisses seconds later.

It was as if a dam had broken inside him and he just couldn't restrain himself anymore, the more he kissed her the more he wanted of her. He needed Swara at the most basic level just like she needed him. And now that he had tasted her sweetness he couldn't help but kiss her again and again and again to savour her sweetness.

Pulling apart for breath they rested their foreheads against each other breathing deeply, their eyes met and their unspoken emotions and need for each other were conveyed in that single eyelock. Standing up Sanskaar pulled Swara up with him. Facing her he put his hand on her shoulder and leaned down to kiss her forehead & then her eyes, he planted a kiss on either of her cheeks and went on to tease her by placing soft pecks on the corner of her lips making her tremble.

Pushing her back against the bedpost he again kissed her full on the lips and unpinned her pallu from her shoulder which fell at their feet completely forgotten in the heat of the moment revealing her bare heaving front to him. Swara arched her back, her head falling back when Sanskaar pushed his hard form flush against her soft form.

Parting away from her lips he kissed her jaw nipping at it's sharp edges with his teeth making Swara hiss softly in painful pleasure. Moving down he gave his undivided attention to her long swan like neck placing lingering open mouth kisses on its entire length, sucking and biting the supple delicate flesh drawing a moan from her.

Caressing her waist with his palms he softly kissed her collarbone and sucked on it leaving the marks of his intense passionate love over her neck, shoulders and collarbones. Swara sucked in a ragged breath when she felt his lips on her exposed cleavage, tracing her hands up his arms she threaded her fingers through his soft dark brown hair and tugged at them making the flames of their desire flare up higher than before.

Pushing her down on the bed he reached for the hook of her blouse at her back and shrugged it off her, discarding his shirt and her blouse. His eyes glazed with wonder and appreciation as he took in her beautiful form, she was amazing through and through.

He slowly descended on her not wanting to scare her with the intensity of his desire and need for her and started placing kisses on her cleavage caressing it with his lips and teeth. Swara's breath hitched and broke when she felt his lips over her breast, he unleashed havoc on their senses as he kissed, squeezed, sucked and nipped not holding back an iota of his desire, drawing and giving extreme pleasure.

She writhed and moaned under him as he ruled over her body taking everything she had to offer. His fingers intertwined with Swara's fingers on either side of her head as he bent down and placed kisses over the smooth flat expanse of her stomach. Dipping his tongue in her navel he swirled it tasting her, Swara nearly came apart when she felt him biting her navel.

He made her writhe and moan with mindless pleasure with every caress of his lips, with every nip of his teeth and with every swirl of his tongue. It was as if inferno of passion and desire burned between them and the flames of the very inferno scalded them to ashes, but the more vital part was that they didn't mind getting burned rather they enjoyed it. Neither of them wanted to go slow or hold back their emotions, they had been doing this for very long and now that they were together they didn't ever want to be apart.

Sanskaar moved up and again captured her lips in a kiss as his hands got busy in ripping her saree off her delicate frame. He groaned in pleasure when Swara touched his chest with the light caress of her fingertips and moved down to run her hands on his chiselled abs, memorizing the contours of his lean body. Putting a hand on the clip of his belt she unclipped it taking it off him giving Sanskaar the signal he needed.

Rising himself off her for a minute he discarded the rest of their clothing and resumed kissing her. Swara gasped loud feeling his hard erection near her wet core, her body now a dark shade of pink she stiffened a bit in apprehension at the intimacy they now shared, though exhilarating it also scared her. This was all new to her and she knew not how to react to this but she knew that she wanted him and she trusted him enough to not her.

Pulling away he read the apprehension in her eyes in the blink of an eye, breathing hard he cupped her face and spoke in a strained voice, "We won't do this if you aren't ready for it Shona, this can wait. I don't want to force you into anything." and he made an attempt to get off her though his body throbbed with the need to make her his.

The thought of Sanskaar parting away from her at this point hurt Swara to the point of physical pain, she needed him too much. Acting on pure impulse she grabbed him by his waist and pulled him back on her, his body completely eclipsing her's, she nodded her head and said in a low voice, "Don't leave me Sanskaar." and she kissed him again indicating that she wanted this just as much as him.

Smiling happily against her lips he fused his lips with her's again and kissed her with all his feelings. Ripping the foil he put on the protection & resumed kissing her and slowly entered her, hot met cold and imaginary fireworks burst around them as he entered her accepting body. Swara arched her back and moaned, her eyes closed in supreme pleasure. He eased himself out of her and entered again going deeper this time, he repeated this a few times till he broke her barrier and went down as deep as he could giving their union a beautiful touch. Burying his face in her neck he again sucked on it as he increased the pace and tempo of their lovemaking and she met him midway; thrust for thrust driving him over oblivion with her moans of pleasure and fulfillment.

He knew they were close to reaching the pinnacle of their lovemaking so he increased his pace slamming faster into her accepting body and then exploded inside of her at the same time Swara experienced her mind numbing orgasm.

Both saw stars and lay completely spent in each others arms as they reached the zenith of their relationship becoming one, mind body and soul. The flames of the passion of their lovemaking burned as long as the candles in their room. Sanskaar took Swara again and again turning her into mindless mass of pleasure with his tender love and care and drugging kisses, groaning at her bold touches giving a new dimension to their beautiful relationship.

It was only in the wee hours of morning that they finally slept, completely spent from the long passionate night with Sanskaar's face buried in her neck, his hand across her waist holding her close to him cherishing their beautiful night together.

Phew, finally done posting.. Guys this was just a fragment of my imagination so if I've hurt anyone's sentiments here then I'm sorry didn't mean to.. Drop in feedback and let me know how much you liked this experiment of mine. Fingers crossed.

Lots of love,
Kashmi šŸ¤—
Edited by Autumn_Hue - 9 years ago
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Woah Kashmi! That was HAWTT!!!ā˜ŗļøšŸ˜³ Jeez, you wrote something like this for the first time?? Then baby, you rock<3 You remember my first comment, when I'd said that writing something like an assault on the virtue of a lady is not easy and requires a lot of guts and talent and skill. I'd again say! This requires a lot of talent and skill and you did it perfectly!<3 It was so beautiful and blush blush!!

Swara has done so much for Sanskaar! She loves him so much<3 So does Sanskaar. The point when Sanskaar falls on his knees was too good. Totally suppressed by the powerful emotion called love, selfless love! I just loved that.

And then the entire love-making was very beautiful and not at all vulgar! SwaSan love each other sooo much and this step of taking their relationship to the next level was very well written! Kudos Kashmi!

Great update and thanks for the scrap
Love ya darling!
Sakshi
Edited by MusicAddict - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh.my.god... What an update kashmi..!

1stly i read your update even before the PM.. And YES.. i was stalking you.. :P


I have no words to say, but i still wanna say... The way you showed sanskar feelings on entering their old room was so very pure and genuine... He could feel that his love has finally healed swara bit by bit to overcome that dreadful night... And this new swara was the swara created by her sanskar... That scene was so emotional and heart touching...


Coming to the love making.. I seriously dont have words to explain... It was beautiful...
And if this is the 1st time you have tried a hand on this genre, then way to go girl..!


I was actually sulking last night and entire moring, waiting for your update.. But it was totally worth the wait...


Cant wait for next part.. Update asap..

Love
Jessica
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks Kashmi... Finally they are one... its a dream come true...
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Kash...😊

Well that was intense, romantic,bold and beautiful.😊
Sanskar's reaction while entering the room was so natural and his love confession to swara was so pure as if he has surrendered his life to her...

Swara's words to sanskar was perfectly written that how his care ,love,concern has healed her.their unison was full of love,passion and intensity.

Keep writing
Love
Simi😊
Edited by simsen23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow that was soft po*n. Liked it but i think Swara would have been more bold.
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Finally unres for Chapter 9 on page 39 (late as usual😭) and
res for chapter 10 - off to reading it now!

Dear Kashmi,

It was beautiful - especially Sanskaar's wonder at the room and his concern at the painful memories it would have had for Swara. Her reply that it was his courage had helped her heat so well that she could replace all the horrors with the happy moments that they had shared in that room.šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘. Their love for each other, truly completes them.

Awaiting the next update.

Love,
Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago
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šŸ˜³ā˜ŗļø this was really nicešŸ˜³ā˜ŗļø
Edited by Sanya17 - 9 years ago

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