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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks you so much for the comment lol and my name sorry forgot to write it at the end is razia...
Nice to meet you..

Wow another update excited already...
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Update soon kashmi... Waiting re...
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Hey hey hey hey here I am with the next chapter hope you guys like it and appreciate it like the previous one's. Drop in your likes and feedback would love to read them.. 😃

Here I go:

Warning: Mature Content (16+)

Chapter 9 - Moments of Love

Swara had her eyes closed tight in apprehension not being able to meet the intense glint in Sanskaar's eye. She stood there in front of him surrendering her everything to him, their body fronts touching each other everytime they as much as breathed. Sanskaar's lips touched her and just when she felt that she would experience the soul searing kiss of her husband, their moment was broken due to the noise of his phone's loud ringtone.

Irritation clouded their eyes at the unopportuned timing of the caller. Pulling away a bit Sanskaar answered the call yet irked at the caller's timing and talked to the client holding Swara's waist in a tight grip. Swara stood listening to the conversation for a minute and then a naughty glint entered her eyes. Pushing herself up on her toes she leaned in a little and placed butterfly kisses on his cheeks, his nose and at the corner of his lips.

Sanskaar spluttered for words while talking to the client and moaned particularly loud when she kissed him at the corner of his lips. The client on the other end sounded scandalized when he moaned, he asked Sanskaar if he was fine but he assured the client that he was doing fine steering the conversation back to the deal.

Swara silently laughed at his plight when he turned towards her, pleading with his eyes to let him be for the moment and stop her sweet torture on him. Not one to give up easily she nodded her head indicating she wouldn't do anything and Sanskaar breathed in a sigh of relief at that, but not a moment had passed when he felt Swara's index finger tracing the contours of his broad chest and his abs, he reigned in a moan with terrible difficulty and pressed his hand on her waist, he meekly hmmm'ed over what the client spoke not paying much attention to what he said.

Turning towards Swara he passed a warning glance indicating that payback for her deeds would be heavy for her. This time she doubled up laughing as he passed her a mock glare at her naughty ministrations. Pursing her lips she suppressed her laughter as he turned back to the client who sounded even more scandalized than before. Tenacious as always she perched herself up on her toes and grazed his earlobe with her teeth, this time Sanskaar nearly came apart and moaned very very loud, finally dropping a hint to the client that he was in the middle of something.

Chuckling to himself the client proposed to continue with the conversation tomorrow in office when Sanskaar would be unoccupied unlike now. Sanskaar mumbled a grateful okay to the client and hung up on the call. Turning towards Swara he saw her laughing lunatically and was lost in the sound of her laughter for a moment but then he snapped out it and devilishly thought, "Payback time baby."

Squaring his shoulders he moved his hand and he stopped it where the pallu of Swara's saree was tucked in and untucked it very very slowly, with dangerous ease effectively stilling Swara's laughter. Moving her pallu out of his way he skimmed his finger against the smooth flat expanse of her stomach dipping his finger in her navel and then splaying his palm over it, Swara's breath stuck in her throat and she sucked in her stomach due to his tender ministrations.. Her eyes widened to the size of saucerpans when she felt his hands move upwards, towards her tender front but he didn't go further and his hands continued to draw circles over her upper midriff, teasing her, forcing her to suck in a ragged breath.

Sanskaar devilishly smirked at her plight now, he brought her crashing back to himself when she made a move to escape bringing them closer then before. Swara threw her head back a little at their rather intimate contact, every inch of her clothed body touched his body, marking his existence over her, making her go red in the face.

Leaning down he blew air over the sensitive skin of her neck making her shudder delicately, but didn't kiss her there though she gave him access to her neck making her moan impatienty when he withdrew, he smirked proudly at the effect he had over her. Using one hand he positioned her chin up and twisted her hand behind her back using his other hand, "So Mrs Maheshwari where exactly were we?" he asked his eyes smoldering with passion and a naughty glint; "Umm Sans Sanskaar, I was saying" but he silenced her by running a palm over the curve of her waist, "Yes you were saying?" he asked teasingly while drawing circles with his fingers on her lower back.

Swara closed her eyes trembling a little and Sanskaar's eyes darkened at her reactions, amazed by her innocence, she was a seductress even without knowing tricks to seduce a man, she was a wonder. Opening her eyes after moments Swara saw Sanskaar lost in the moment and thought, "Two can play the game"; Arranging her facial features to that of shock she exclaimed in embarassed surprise, "Bade Papa" and Sanskaar jumped away from her the very moment as if electrocuted. Eyes closed he turned towards the door and started speaking at a fast pace, the words tumbling out of his mouth, "Woh, we weren't doing anything at all just hanging around, Sorry Bade Papa." he ended sheepishly but got no answer in return, not even a grumble of approval.

Taking a risk he opened one eye and then opened the other one too catching up on her prank, seeing absolutely no one at the door. Eyeing her warily he said, "This is the meanest thing you've done to me Swara, I was scared out of my wits. Imagine Bade Papa standing at the door while we made out. UGH." and he shuddered violently.

Laughing out loud Swara said, "I never said I play fair Sanskaar, everything fair in love and war Babu Moshai." "But this wasn't war." he shouted at her retreating back "Not fair Swara Maheshwari." Turning back near the door she smiled her perfect smile at him and said, "Get dressed and come down soon Sanskaar, a night full of surprises awaits you. I'm waiting."

Smiling wide he mussed his hair as she left for the kitchen, excited for the night. Sanskaar climbed down the stairs after a while freshly showered. He had changed into a pair of grey chinos and a plain white V neck tee. Swara was busy setting up dinner on the table when she heard him approaching.

She turned to look at him a smile gracing her lips but her smile faltered the very next minute and her eyes glazed with appreciation over the fine human sample that her husband was. He looked ravishing tonight she thought, the chinos and the tee fit his body snugly highlighting his lean frame and every hard muscle of his perfect body. The heady scent of his cologne and aftershave reaching her before he did. Her Sanskaar was making her thoughts go all Asanskaari. That was the effect he had on her he was making her brazen and unashamed.

Sanskaar smirked at the visible effect he had on Swara. Sitting down on a chair he asked her still smirking, "What's for dinner tonight Shona I'm starving." Shaking her head clear off his effect she got down to serving dinner, concern taking over, breaking a morsel she brought it to his mouth to feed him but he stopped her hand midway, "Wait, did you eat your dinner Shona?"

Nodding her head in negative she grinned sheepishly, sighing exasperatedly he shook his head at her carelessness feeling a strong need to reprimand her for her easy ways towards her health and well being but he didnt have it in him to say a word to her now and spoil their moods. Breaking a morsel he brought it to her mouth and fed it to her at the same time she fed him his morsel.

They continued feeding each other, talking about their day, what they did and what they didn't, it was very relaxing for Sanskaar to sit and see her talk while he listened to all that she had to say to him. He could do that all his life and live happily. Putting away their plates she turned to Sanskaar, "I'll be back in a minute Sanskaar." she said sounding a bit excited.

Nodding his head at her he saw her lithe form bounce off to the kitchen, he sat there patiently for a few minutes listening to the sound of the vessels coming from inside the kitchen but then his resolve broke. Curiosity got the better of him and he got up to go inside the kitchen at the same time Swara made an exit from the kitchen holding a silver bowl in her hand, a very yummy aroma coming from the it, an aroma akin to the aroma of kheer. Pushing him back on the chair she answered his unasked question when she removed the lid off the bowl.

"Kheer" he exclaimed excitedly and started gobbling the contents down his throat. Swara sat down next to him at the table propping her chin on a palm and observed his childlike glee over eating his favourite sweet dish. Stopping for a second he offered her a spoon but she refused, shrugging he continued drowning the contents at top speed helping himself to one more bowl of the delicacy. "Mmm, you're the best Swara I love it when you prepare this, perfect end to my day."

Chuckling at his antics she said, "The perfect end is yet to come my love." he raised his eyebrows at that and nodded his head. "Okay then can't wait for the perfect end to come my love." he smiled wide then.

After he was done eating she pulled him up and tied a cloth over his eyes, "Swara, kya kar rahi ho tum I can't see a thing." Chuckling at his childlike antics she said "Ohhh sounds great Sanskaar exactly what I aimed for." Taking him by his hand she guided him up to where she wanted them to go. "Where are we going Swara I can't see a thing, I'll fall on my backside at this rate." Slightly irked at his impatience she mumbled very quietly, "Serves you right for your impatience." "Huh you said something Swara?" he asked sounding highly scandalized at her silent mumbling. "Huh no nothing, and Sanskaar would you wait please you'll discover everything in a minute." Not giving up he tried again, "Just tell me where we're going na? I can't handle the suspense." Huffing in irritation she spoke, "Ya right tell you where we're going and ruin my suspense ehh? How impatient of you Sanskaar wait na." she reprimanded him lightly.

He let her guide him for a while until coming to a stop suddenly. Raising a hand she stripped the cloth off his eyes, shaking his head he blinked his eyes furiously a few times and finally opened them the location of her surprise coming into focus, their old room. "Swara, what are we doing here?" he asked in confusion, because he knew that Swara had not healed fully, she yet had those occasional nightmares which he would ward off by taking her in his arms and whisper words of comfort and love in her ears, this was the last place she would want to come.

Smiling solemnly she put a hand on his cheek and egged him on to open the door, "Go on open it my love." "But Swara" she didn't let him complete his sentence and stilled his protests by placing a finger over his lips, "Open it darling." and she prodded him to open the door.

Sanskaar didn't ever want to return to this part of their home because all it reminded him of was Swara's grief and trauma, it scared him but now Swara was telling him to open the very door to their misery. Breathing deeply he put a hand over the quaint gold handle and pushed the door open expecting to see memories of their dark haunted past and its after effects but the sight that met his eyes literally blew his mind to another level.

And I end this update on a cliffhanger again haha dusht dushyashan mode taking over me these days when I write the update.. 😆Anyways less talking here I am with the next chapter this time a little early than before the next chapter will also be put up soon.. 😃

Love,
Kashmi 🤗
Edited by Autumn_Hue - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kash..😉

Cliffhanger.. Dust prani..😆

But seriously dear,this chapter was so cute..
Swara's sweet torture was unbearable for sanskar...
His continuous moaning.. Lol..client's reaction in the end was so funny.swara became naughty...😆.Then Sanskar was ready to pay back the torture.. But Bade papa trick by swara broke his confidence..😊

Swasan are so caring for each other,Sanskar's concern for her was so touchy. He became so happy after getting the kheer.swara is drooling her hubby dearest ...tonight Mrs Maheswari is in hyper mode .😃😆.,the best thing was that ,swara has completely overcome the pain from the past,so they are entering to a new phase of their life...😊,this time swara is taking the first step.

Continue soon...
Love,
Simi😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
galat baat hai yeh.. you seriously cant leave it like this... what if i die in anticipation of the next part.!

coming to this part... it was just magic... i mean, this swara is actually the swara which sanskar has created.. and she has finally got back her fun element in her... her teasing sanskar while he was on a call was lovely..

and then sanskar teasing her back was even better... swara created distance from him by taking bade papa's name, now thats really mean!


sanskar is indeed the most caring husband/friend.. he thinks abt swara before himself... probably this particular night will be full of surprises, and their old room was only to start with...!


waiting for next part.. update sooner..:)

love
Jessica
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey kashmi...😊
What a cliffhanger...how can u do this to us..😭😭.nooo...was waiting for swasan to take their relationship to next level..
...😕😕😕
Now have to wait for next chapter...khair...sabar ka phal meetha hota hai...😳😳😉

Coming to chapter...swara in full romantic mode...teasing...but sansku is sansku...what a payback for teasing...😉😊

Fantasticly described...👏 dinner scene was sooosweet...n the climax...now waiting eagerly for next update...😛😃

Lots of love👏
Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
THANK YOU FOR SUCH AN AMAZING UPDATE LOVED IT LIKE ALWAYS
... I AM EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE

LOVE YOUR WRITING

HAIII BEING NAUGHTY ... ARE WE SWARA HMMM 😳
TOH AAB ARUR KYA KARTI IT WAS EXPECTED AFTER ALL YOU DO HAVE A DASHING HUSBAND 😉😉😉

SWARA TEASING SANKAR WAS HALARIOUS ... I SWAER I DEAD
LAUGHING 🤣🤣🤣

* LET ME CATCH MY BREATH *

SANSKARS REACTION KILL ME
🤣


OK OK ... 🤣 ... ( ZAINAB STOP LAUGHING AND FINISH)

BREATH IN BREATH OUT ... SHANKYS METHOD

MUCH BETTER

😆

I SERIOUSLY LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS FF I REALLY ENJOY READING IT
BUT WHYYY THE CLIFF HANGER YAAR
*SNEEZES*
AM ALLERGIC TO CLIFF HANGERS 😛😆😛


❤️
ZAINAB
Edited by Miss-swasan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Kashmi
With apologies for my lateness, here is my comment on Chapter 8. A haven indeed this was and such a lovely read. I loved how the progression now is truly happening with Swara really moving on too. The whole way you showed them pining for each other, literally whiling away hours until they can be together again was so realistic in that sort of "butterfly giving" stage of a relationship- golden days for most relationships! I really liked the little touches of Swara cooking for Sanskaar and then Ragini and Pari teasing her, especially Ragini being happy for her was so nice to see. Of course then there was the mad frenzy when he didn't return and the amazing convo where the walls really came tumbling down 👏👏. Oh and of course the real highlight was Swara trying to "tackle" that room - a true sign of her impending recovery being complete!

Overall, really enjoyed it.

I am utterly exhausted today so am not able to write much more but wanted to share my views anyway. I will leave a separate comment for Chapter 9 soon:)

Love to you xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear kashmir,
You r a superb Writer. What a romance. Swasan at their best. Sanskar is scandalised. Please give us the next update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice so continue waiting for next part... u ve pened it well...

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