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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Shikha022
Loved ur update.
After such a long time u updated n must say the update was pretty much worth waiting !!
Hope ur brother is doing fine now :))
Tc

Hey shikha thank you so very much dear I'm glad I rose up to your expectations for this story and I made the wait worth it.. Shall make it more readable for you and all my readers pakka waala promise.. 😳😃

My brother's doing great now.. 😃

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Hi Kashmi,

Awesome update dear, I like this SS. Chapter 6 was really good and you got nothing to worry about it being rusty , it was perfect . Do continue soon . Cant wait to read the next chapter

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Autumn_Hue

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Originally posted by: NitaReid
Hi Kashmi,

Awesome update dear, I like this SS. Chapter 6 was really good and you got nothing to worry about it being rusty , it was perfect . Do continue soon . Cant wait to read the next chapter

Hey thank you so much dear, I'm so glad you liked the updates.. 😊

Btw may I know your name??

Shall continue and post the next part pretty soon.. 😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Hi Kashmi,

I hope you do remember me, as I do of this one brilliant story. I was busy recently, had my studies piled up and then suffered a computer break down, so I couldn't find enough time to sit back and appreciate the latest part you have posted here. Accept my apologies first of all.

I thought you had given up on this one, it was a nice surprise to see you continuing to update and I'm glad you decided to see this through.

So Swara is still in her healing process and Sanskar is doing his best in helping her. Considering the care and concern he has for her, I guess they will eventually reach a place where these bitter days of past and certain venomous people sharing their environment will not matter.

I'm loving the bond between the two, both very much in love still giving the other the space needed to come in terms with their feelings. It is a beautiful journey when you walk slowly and side by side isn't it?

Ragini here had captured my attention as well as my partial sympathy. I must confess I can't feel so deeply moved by her as my opinion is clouded with the rather dull and not to mention occasionally stupid on screen version nowadays.

But I do see where she is coming from and it is a worthy portrayal in those terms. I mean at least she is a strong woman here, who have enough courage to see that the one she fall in love with does not deserve that level of devotion or pure feelings. I'm glad she is seeing reason instead of being blindly in love. Bravo for that!

The story is moving at a captivating speed and is a very enjoyable read. I do hope you will continue soon.

love,

Sakura

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Hi Kashmi,

I hope you do remember me, as I do of this one brilliant story. I was busy recently, had my studies piled up and then suffered a computer break down, so I couldn't find enough time to sit back and appreciate the latest part you have posted here. Accept my apologies first of all.

I thought you had given up on this one, it was a nice surprise to see you continuing to update and I'm glad you decided to see this through.

So Swara is still in her healing process and Sanskar is doing his best in helping her. Considering the care and concern he has for her, I guess they will eventually reach a place where these bitter days of past and certain venomous people sharing their environment will not matter.

I'm loving the bond between the two, both very much in love still giving the other the space needed to come in terms with their feelings. It is a beautiful journey when you walk slowly and side by side isn't it?

Ragini here had captured my attention as well as my partial sympathy. I must confess I can't feel so deeply moved by her as my opinion is clouded with the rather dull and not to mention occasionally stupid on screen version nowadays.

But I do see where she is coming from and it is a worthy portrayal in those terms. I mean at least she is a strong woman here, who have enough courage to see that the one she fall in love with does not deserve that level of devotion or pure feelings. I'm glad she is seeing reason instead of being blindly in love. Bravo for that!

The story is moving at a captivating speed and is a very enjoyable read. I do hope you will continue soon.

love,
Sakura

Hey Sakura ofcourse I remember you and very nicely at that you're not someone I'd forget easily.. You have nothing to apologize for girl issues keep popping up and one can always understand so no sorry..😃

Like you even I was caught up with issues on the personal front, my brother was hospitalised as he was down with pneumonia so shuttling between home and hospital and then a fleet of guests coming to visit him at home keeping me busy.. I couldn't write a decent chapter and by the time I got time I'd lost the touch and grip I had on my story and I was facing a writer's block unsure how to take this forward and that is why I came out a little rusty..

Swara is healing slowly albeit but Sanskaar is doing everything in his capacity to ensure she is healing and their togetherness is something in trying times is what I always wanted to show through my writing so attempted that here..

It is indeed beautiful to walk down the journey called life with someone you love and even better when you're loved back by the same person it's sheer beauty.. 😃

I haven't been following the show for sometime now because of my hectic schedule but from what little I've been able to decipher from the posts is that she is yet behaving lame and love struck by Laksh. God when will she learn and get a life of her own she is in real need of some introspection..

But yes in my story I want her to do that much needed introspection and she is doing it and coming in terms with the blaring reality of life.. She is torn between love she feels for Laksh which is hard to forget and hatred and repulse for him..

I've already started writing the next chapter Sakura so yeah I'd wanted to ask any particular scene suggestion you'd want to give to want me to incorporate it in the next update.. 😊

Thank you so much again for this lovely comment I shall update real soon this time..

Love,

Kashmi 😃🤗

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Hey thank you so much dear, I'm so glad you liked the updates.. 😊

Btw may I know your name??

Shall continue and post the next part pretty soon.. 😃

Well i am Nita 😊

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Kashmi dear 🤗

I have bookmarked to read the update and will def do so and leave a detailed comment too but am really pressed for time at the moment with work and juggling my FF at the same time so please do bear with me. Really looking forward to it, was so glad you had updated

Love,

Shru x

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Well i am Nita 😊

Great knowing that.. 😃

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Kashmi dear 🤗
I have bookmarked to read the update and will def do so and leave a detailed comment too but am really pressed for time at the moment with work and juggling my FF at the same time so please do bear with me. Really looking forward to it, was so glad you had updated

Love,
Shru x

Hey Shru no hurries 🤗

Take all the time in the world read the update when you're at leisure and when you're free I want you to enjoy it and not read it in haste.. Finish all your commitments no problems.. 😃

Love,

Kashmi ❤️

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#180

Kashmi dear 🤗

I am back and couldn't stay away so here I am, late night- tapping away! 😆 Firstly, welcome back to you - really missed you! Was so sorry to read your brother was unwell. Hope he is fully recovered now? I am super protective of my brother- he is my baby, despite him being 6'2 or thereabouts and me 5'4 😆. My well wishes to your brother.

Like I said, so glad you continued AO- absolutely loved this chapter! 👏 Firstly, Ragini- you had already done a great job of redeeming her but here you continued that journey and really explained her disgust and turmoil so well as well as the falling of he scales from her eyes finally about Lakshya! Great work- I could feel her world crashing in and whilst a part of me felt glad as she needed this as it is after all the payback for her actions too, another part could relate to her so that is credit to you.

Coming to SwaSan- so beautiful again! I just love the incredible way you have portrayed Sanskaar especially- it does him full justice 👏⭐️. I love the whole way you continue to tackle your challenging plot line. The recovery process with such shocking and disgusting assaults can take so long and here, Sanskaar is there every step and Swara's gradual healing was shown so well- kudos! I love how you have shown that she is still able to feel desire and those feelings in themselves are part of getting "better" and living the life they are meant to. I think there is a gift in you to bring out sensual scenes very well without cheapening them and I found the whole romance and tenderness of the whole range of scenes lovely. Starting with the sleeping, with Swara gradually laying on him, in trust and surrender and then a re-inventing of the mirror scene from the show with the sindoor and mangalsutra but done, IMO, with so much more simmering sexuality, that it felt just right for SwaSan and gave me nice butterflies 😃. What I liked too was how Sanskaar isn't being selfish ever, his desire is still very much about what she needs, wants and can take too 👏. Overall, a beautiful update and I know you said you had writer's block beforehand, but you would never know it to read this.

Lots of love xoxo

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