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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Kashmi dear 🤗
I am back and couldn't stay away so here I am, late night- tapping away! 😆 Firstly, welcome back to you - really missed you! Was so sorry to read your brother was unwell. Hope he is fully recovered now? I am super protective of my brother- he is my baby, despite him being 6'2 or thereabouts and me 5'4 😆. My well wishes to your brother.Like I said, so glad you continued AO- absolutely loved this chapter! 👏 Firstly, Ragini- you had already done a great job of redeeming her but here you continued that journey and really explained her disgust and turmoil so well as well as the falling of he scales from her eyes finally about Lakshya! Great work- I could feel her world crashing in and whilst a part of me felt glad as she needed this as it is after all the payback for her actions too, another part could relate to her so that is credit to you.Coming to SwaSan- so beautiful again! I just love the incredible way you have portrayed Sanskaar especially- it does him full justice 👏⭐️. I love the whole way you continue to tackle your challenging plot line. The recovery process with such shocking and disgusting assaults can take so long and here, Sanskaar is there every step and Swara's gradual healing was shown so well- kudos! I love how you have shown that she is still able to feel desire and those feelings in themselves are part of getting "better" and living the life they are meant to. I think there is a gift in you to bring out sensual scenes very well without cheapening them and I found the whole romance and tenderness of the whole range of scenes lovely. Starting with the sleeping, with Swara gradually laying on him, in trust and surrender and then a re-inventing of the mirror scene from the show with the sindoor and mangalsutra but done, IMO, with so much more simmering sexuality, that it felt just right for SwaSan and gave me nice butterflies 😃. What I liked too was how Sanskaar isn't being selfish ever, his desire is still very much about what she needs, wants and can take too 👏. Overall, a beautiful update and I know you said you had writer's block beforehand, but you would never know it to read this.Lots of love xoxo
Shruti 🤗
You have been highly missed girlfriend and neither have i stopped missing such lovely insights that you give for my updates you're a gem girl love you.. 😃
My brother is now healthy as a horse and shuttling back and forth from office and home.. 😆
Woah Shru, from the way you describe you seem your brother's baby and not the other way around no offences girl but yeah I agree siblings are always the babies you have before marriage.. Agree with that notion because I'm my brother's baby too.. 😆😆
A person rises anew only from one's own smithereens and that applies for Ragini she has to break down and see the virtual world of fake love and obsession created by her come crashing down and then will a new Ragini rise so I wrote that entire portion down showing the feelings which Ragini is undergoing where on one hand she yet can't move past Laksh and on the other hand she loathes him equally and loathes him enough not to love him.. I loved writing this portion of the update it was challenging but was great in terms of creative satisfaction..
Swasan are always a treat to write specially Sanskaar the reason being his character is very simple and clear to understand he is this no nonsense kind of a person who will not tolerate bullshit.. Smart intelligent and tactful he has an intellectual brain and where Swara comes into picture it becomes even simpler because his feelings for her are crystal clear.. So these sensual scenes come out that way, burning you up totally.. 😉
Thank you so very much again Shruti for this amazing long long feedback you've given, it helped in reinstating my faith on great lengths in the story..
Shall update pretty soon and pm you when I update next..
Love,
Kashmi ❤️🤗
Pati Patni Aur Panga
Jaane Anjaane Hum Mile
Tum Se Tum Tak
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
Vasudha
