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divya

@princydivya

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

cute n naughty OS

Sanskaar afraid of cockroach🤣

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Nice ..

Thank you😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -damon-
oh god wat m doing
i was supposed to edit the res waala comment nd quoted it
i really sry i totally ruined ur 1st page wd my mistakes
sry

It's ok dearie.
don't be sorry... i always end up clicking quote when i have to click on Edit
It happens . so chill!

and i take this as a compliment that you really liked my work🤗

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arohijsp

@arohijsp

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Thanks for the hilarious OS dear!
I never would have guessed she's holding a cockroach!
The third condition being on uper...noughty noughty Swara! Has she being getting some love tips from her sis?

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Chaos but what a lovely chaos...But you got both the characters back on sure footing...😊

Thank you so much Jazzy😳.
Yin and yang.. me lubs balance😈.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb..👏

Thank you Sneha😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: TRPS
one more hilarious OS from you,. more like a suspense thriller 😉 😆! I thought it was a puppy, well, it was much mightier than puppy, A cockroach. 🤣
and conditons were too good , were worth giving promises 😉 and biwi learnt blackmail from pati! it that was she trying to say then on you face pati!!!

just love these lines-
"Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari! This is
NOT FAIR!"
"Everything is fair in love and war
Mr. Maheshwari. And this is both
love and war. Winning your love
from you is my personal war!"

Seriously yaar, will you just listen to me?? ;) you have quite good sense of humour. :) Keep posting.. 😊

Thank you so much dear🤗.
I am really so glad that you enjoyed this story..
Yo! Sanskaar is indeed the guru. too bad his chelis keep surpassing him.😆.
puppy sounds so cute.. potential story here..humm!

awiiie.. thank you so much for the compliment girl!☺️.
big hugs*

love.

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Kya socha aur kya nikla.
Nice OS dear. It was really a relief to read this.
I recalled Nana Patekars dialogue "ek macchar aadmi ko hijada bana deta hain". Here " ek cockroach ne Sanskaar ko jhuka diya."

Thnx fr this OS.

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Well I enjoyed it thoroughly...wow swara and her shards... 😉 and sanskaar being scared of cockroaches 😆...she was soo seductive 😳 nd I wud be the happiest person if sumthing happens lyk dis in swaragini... . Thnx for dis beautiful update..nd pls do write more... 👍🏼 👏

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: aamias
the show has become crap except swasan but that is also rare. amidst all this is just like a refreshment . give some ideas to script writers plz

Thank you so much😳.
hahah... if only script writers visit IF they would find so many awesome ideas from so many wonderful writers. Sigh!