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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: foresight
sanskar has a tough challenge against him...his own client can be termed as uncooperative hostile witness! i loved how he thought ahead and realised it was better than he break her than the prosecutor...esp when it is her ex lover. so the witness had already been well trained to face the defence lawyer...keeping in mind who he is. i wonder what ace will sanskar be bale to pull out when he starts questioning ragini. he seemed to have sense the real issue already...good lawyer he has his theory. if only his client can let him widen that crack that has connected them. i liked how their interaction went actually...and the final eye contact. looking forward to the trial beginning.

Yes, saving someone who doesn't want to be saved is hard. But don't worry he will manage. As for Ragini no one can train her for facing SK...he is one piece!

Thank you Sapna, it means a lot when you say that😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: krishuuu
U r sooo good... Im highly impressed...For ur story update i wait desperately...🤗
Keep up the good work... God bless u...❤️

Waiting for next part...👏

Thank you so much dear😊

I will update soon.

Stay blessed😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...
I could see her night and she could see the light in my side, perhaps, we might communicate through this crack, if she trusts me enough to do so.

Beautiful beautiful..
Usually the girl would be the light guiding the guy away from darkness.
and then i read this quote..

very very intriguing Saku.. chapter 2 and 3.
heart really goes out for the girl.
and my my.. SK is one FAB character.
and all the characters sounds very interesting.. but SK stands head and shoulders above all.

When a girl is trapped in darkness that is far more intense than a guy's Nimmie. I'm glad you found it interesting. And SK...well he is one of a kind!

Thanks dear, I'm updating shortly, hope you'd enjoy is as much😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Pinkylibbi

Oh My God Saku...
You never fail to leave me speechless...

That SwaSan scene, how intense was the communication between the two... Simply awesome girl.. And the way SK was consoling her simply left me in tears. I can see both of them falling for each other.. Can't wait for the next part.. Pls Continue soon...

And my Favourite line was,
People who don't love themselves can't love others...

Awww. How intense was that?

Take a bow girl...

Ohhh, thanks Swathi, it's very sweet of you dear!😳😊

Yes, there is unmistakable attraction, only time will tell when it would turn in to something deeper.

I'm updating now!

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
This was just the most amazing chapter ive read till now. .. such an indepth capturing of sanskaar's feelings abt this case and swara tho he is completely bowled over by this girl. Why doesnt she crack..its like his life's mission now. Who is she trying to protect. .. the answer lies in her cracking. ..so tht wont happen so fast I guess.
So durga prasad plays a tough game too ... handing the prosecution to lakshya when he knows swara is vulnerable to him. But will this lakshya be tht smart in his game?? And is he still in love with swara?? I guess not...since he agreed to prosecute. ...lawyers are tough n heartless ppl i guess...tho looks like our sanskaar is cracking bfr madam swara...nowhere does he seem like one to offer sympathy to anyone and here hez patting away to glory. But swara has affected him since day 1 and he would be the last person to acknowledge her power on him till now.

Poor swara...it must be hellish being in jail fr so long...who is she doing it fr!!!

Thanks dear! It truly means a lot.

Yes SK is taken by her attitude, his mission is to find out the truth now.

Durga is one hell of a lawyer, he knows when to employ what weapon. You'll see Lakshya in the next update.

Hmm...not all lawyers are heartless, they are tough people I agree and sharp minded as well.

You'll have your answers in the future updates😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

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Saku, I was lost in the sheer brilliance of SK's cross examination of an obviously coached Ragini, who must have been asked by Durga Prasad & Lakshya to learn her testimony by rote!

But before that, I was intrigued by the dynamic between Swara and Sanskaar before they enter the courtroom. Swara obviously has started depending on him, when she sees Vic first, she is disappointed and asks for Sanskaar! And the way Sanskaar and Vic had that bet---I think, at this point, Vic reads Swara's reaction to Sanskaar better than Sanskaar himself. Or is it just SK's attempt to close himself behind barricades, not wanting to see the cracks in the wall widening? Hmmm...I wonder! 😛

SK took some pleasure in Swara getting a tad worried at the trial didn't he--as a payback for her not being upfront and cooperative with him earlier. 😛 Man, these two sometimes give a tom & jerry vibe!

I also found very intriguing, Swara's awareness of the way SK looks, dresses, his hairstyle. The way she deduces that the outer aura he portrays is inspired by Vic, but there is an inner pain, an inner darkness, which is what really draws her in, tantalizes her. Is SK also similarly getting drawn to her as yet? I guess he is, but he's trying to keep himself away, isn't he?

Coming back to the courtroom drama---amazingly well written. The scene practically jumped off my lappie screen! I could have been right in the courtroom. I love these courtroom dramas, as I've told you, so I was hanging on to each line, each word. The way SK convincingly created sufficient doubt that Swara may not have been fully in possession of her faculties; and created a feeling, even in Ragini's mind, that Swara could well have been trying to pull the murder weapon out, not shove it in!
He made Ragini confess to her near perjury, very artfully, indeed! Exposed her carefully practised, venomous lies...ugh! What a sister she is!!

Loved this Saku. The pace was exciting. I have a niggling fear, though, that the next chapter will see Durga Prasad pulling a rabbit out of the hat, to get bail denied. I hope I'm wrong. 😕

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Sakura...wat a story..my dear
so interesting...day by day
m falling for SK...wat a personality
n happy for the bail
nw swara should open up to him
n i guess she wont go home,rather stay with sk
after bail...
Ahh...waiting fr next update...plz update soon
love
simi 😳

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TRPS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

TOTALLY THRILLING AND CHILLING this chapter is for me..
Swasan read each other so well. :) be it bet or hidden persona inside.. :D cold walls are breaking lil bit , I see..
SK in Action is so intriguing.. :D me loving this character, by the way Sanskaar's character is so intriguing in your all fictions.
whole scenario felt so real and see, our serial, killing is too cool for them..
ending with my usual dialogue, 😛 😆 update soon Saku, eagerly waiting for next update.. :)