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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: simsen23
Sakura...wat a story..my dear
so interesting...day by day
m falling for SK...wat a personality
n happy for the bail
nw swara should open up to him
n i guess she wont go home,rather stay with sk
after bail...
Ahh...waiting fr next update...plz update soon
love
simi 😳

Thanks Simi dear!

SK hai hi aise...everyone love him😳

Yes, she would eventually trust him.

I will update soon dear!

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Bookmarked!

Thanks😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: TRPS
TOTALLY THRILLING AND CHILLING this chapter is for me..
Swasan read each other so well. :) be it bet or hidden persona inside.. :D cold walls are breaking lil bit , I see..
SK in Action is so intriguing.. :D me loving this character, by the way Sanskaar's character is so intriguing in your all fictions.
whole scenario felt so real and see, our serial, killing is too cool for them..
ending with my usual dialogue, 😛 😆 update soon Saku, eagerly waiting for next update.. :)

Thanks dear!

Yes, they are reading in to each other slowly.

I'm too smitten by Sanskar it seems😳😆

Ending with my usual line too...I will update soon😛

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Kushimian89
this is just AWESOME👏
SK is rocked and laksh is shocked😆

Thanks dear😊 Nice one liner I adore it😉

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: medhasankar
Saku...(my jhappi button is not working...but i gave a jhappi, please imagine it:(( )
I am damn busy nowadays re...what with my first job starting tomorrow..and i decided to pursue CFA alongside my Job..so u can imagine..woe is me:((

barely come on the forum nowadays what with all that rubbish on the show...just keep up with swasan scenes, as i told you.

I have not read even one line of what you wrote..sorry, but kya karu. This is my res, I am afraid----I will meet Icarus, once I have time to breathe. till then please wait for me.:) I love ur stories u know, so I have to come back and read anyway.

love ya--

medha.

Medhu🤗most of my buttons aren't working either, IF is playing Boo with us it seems. Can't even PM anyone.

I know yaar...I won't be active after december either. These are my last golden days, after that working, studying...the continuous cycle. ANyways, good luck for your new job!😃

Show is utter rubbish, I watch the SwaSan scenes only...thinking of completely quitting by the end of this month.

It's alright dear, catch up later, when you have time. This probably would be my last SS as well. I don't have time to write anymore.

Love you more!❤️

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: swa291
it was a good cross examination 👏
I love good thrillers and especially if it is a court room drama

It was these courtroom dramas that made me take law as profession

keep writing dear..
and Ragini simply following swara to the place of murder is a bit fishy ...

You do law? OMG! Then excuse any mistakes I make on the way please!

Thanks dear, I will update soon😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Res 😊

Un-res

Saku, I was lost in the sheer brilliance of SK's cross examination of an obviously coached Ragini, who must have been asked by Durga Prasad & Lakshya to learn her testimony by rote!

But before that, I was intrigued by the dynamic between Swara and Sanskaar before they enter the courtroom. Swara obviously has started depending on him, when she sees Vic first, she is disappointed and asks for Sanskaar! And the way Sanskaar and Vic had that bet---I think, at this point, Vic reads Swara's reaction to Sanskaar better than Sanskaar himself. Or is it just SK's attempt to close himself behind barricades, not wanting to see the cracks in the wall widening? Hmmm...I wonder! 😛

SK took some pleasure in Swara getting a tad worried at the trial didn't he--as a payback for her not being upfront and cooperative with him earlier. 😛 Man, these two sometimes give a tom & jerry vibe!

I also found very intriguing, Swara's awareness of the way SK looks, dresses, his hairstyle. The way she deduces that the outer aura he portrays is inspired by Vic, but there is an inner pain, an inner darkness, which is what really draws her in, tantalizes her. Is SK also similarly getting drawn to her as yet? I guess he is, but he's trying to keep himself away, isn't he?

Coming back to the courtroom drama---amazingly well written. The scene practically jumped off my lappie screen! I could have been right in the courtroom. I love these courtroom dramas, as I've told you, so I was hanging on to each line, each word. The way SK convincingly created sufficient doubt that Swara may not have been fully in possession of her faculties; and created a feeling, even in Ragini's mind, that Swara could well have been trying to pull the murder weapon out, not shove it in!
He made Ragini confess to her near perjury, very artfully, indeed! Exposed her carefully practised, venomous lies...ugh! What a sister she is!!

Loved this Saku. The pace was exciting. I have a niggling fear, though, that the next chapter will see Durga Prasad pulling a rabbit out of the hat, to get bail denied. I hope I'm wrong. 😕

Viji, this was the chapter I was nervous about, no idea how the court room drama will turn up when I post it. But after reading the response, especially yours, it seems I have managed my threads well...aren't I proud.

Coming to Swara...yes she is depending on him. I would later reveal her past experiences with her family and all...she has never met anyone like SK before, so the attraction is unavoidable. She notices and reads him well.

As for SK, he is emotionally disconnected as I said before. He does feel the pull, he does care a lot more than he should for his "client" but it would take him a lot more time to understand and accept this fact.

Ho! You felt it live? You just made my entire week by saying that! Off I go...to the ninth cloud!!!

SK knows the way Durga operates he knew Ragini would be coached and he was ready for it. We all know what a sister she is, only Swara doesn't realize that.

No, I would pull that rabbit a lot later. Bail is my need at the moment. I want her out, as SK said in the earlier update. So enjoy freely, no rabbits would come up now...but I can't make long promises though😊

Thanks again Viji, I adore your replies you know😳

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: chemgirl
Awesome update...this one is so different from your other works...excellent work...coutrtroom drama written to perfection...you should consider publishing this

I love this SK. He is so intelligent...like Sherlock Holmes or Hercule Poirot.

who is the murderer and who was the victim...dying to know all these...update soon.

I said in the opening, this is different from my earlier SSs. Thanks dear, It means a lot. I was really nervous about the court room scene.

Sk😳😳

I will update soon!

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: bwvianna
Gripping update! I didn't want it to come to an end. Fabulously written. Loved each and every moment. Awaiting next update with bated breath.

Please update soon. :)

-V

THanks V!

I will update soon dear😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: manasie23
OOOMMGGG Saku such a brilliant update ... I could not not comment here... The way SK proved that there might be another theory/possibilty ahhh it just won my heart...
And Vic and SK having a bet regarding Swara's behaviour was amusing admist all the seriousness going I think it was a perfectly balanced Chapter...
Absolutely amazing

Thanks Manisie...It means a lot dear😊

Yes, SK is brilliant in what he does, that's why to counter Durga Prasad you need someone like him.

I'm glad you liked Vic and his occasional fun too!