Icarus SwaSan SS Complete - Page 10

Cute lullaby! !! Will try singing it to my little ones!!!

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Cute lullaby! !! Will try singing it to my little ones!!!

So sanskaar meets sharmistha but why r they so wary of any attorney. .. guilty or not guilty swara definitely needs someone to defend her...hmm so this shekhar is a loser dad too

Whr is sanskaar putting up? His old apartment in kolkata? Or is it a maheshwari property tht has been unoccupied and he has access?

Somehow can feel sanskaar's eagerness to start the case soon...to face off with his nemesis the Durga prasad maheshwari! !! Tho he is just as eager to get to know swara and about swara ... this is not just a case fr him!

Open away the cupboard of skeletons sakura...cant wait fr the next chapter to unfold :)

I like the build up to their meeting here. You have used a different style of writing here, in first person, but it works for the story and keeps that mystery about sanskar himself. more importantly, it gives a very nice insight into his way of thinking about others and the situation... which i really liked in this. esp in the way he dealt with shomi, his view on her husband, how he knows to deal with people (critical part of his role). I do wonder now how singh came to recommend the case, but i know you will unveil that soon. i am keen to get a glimpse into what sanskar thinks when he meets this swara. he already feels she is peculiar.

Originally posted by: foresight

I like the build up to their meeting here. You have used a different style of writing here, in first person, but it works for the story and keeps that mystery about sanskar himself. more importantly, it gives a very nice insight into his way of thinking about others and the situation... which i really liked in this. esp in the way he dealt with shomi, his view on her husband, how he knows to deal with people (critical part of his role). I do wonder now how singh came to recommend the case, but i know you will unveil that soon. i am keen to get a glimpse into what sanskar thinks when he meets this swara. he already feels she is peculiar.

continue soon!

Sakura! it feels great after reading sk is gonna meet her next. Just can't wait for it to happen. But I was wondering,how was sharmistha behaving n so normal?😕 And why does sk has to shift to a dirty place? Well I am actually liking this lawyer sk😳.

so much suspense Saku!!! update fast dear!!! can't wait...
I guess in next chapter we will get to know who is who in the case exactly.. well, after listening lullaby, I thought it is Sharmistha to Swara, finally Swara got entry in this fiction. errr!!! that was SK!!!
and why MR. singh gave him this case!!! challenged him thinking that he can't win it specially after involvement of DP... eagerly waiting of opening of the case and Sanskaar's past... he was missing his mother... Sigh!!!!

PS- Sanskaar's habit of rearranging the sentences quite like my habit.. it is just I put comma in sentences, here and there...

Mistry queen...a lot of things r to be opened...one part m cler about swra's father...n mom...father is so cruel n poor mom..hmm...waiting fr ur next update..

lovely update!! and i loved the urgency with which sk wanted to meet that girl :)

Originally posted by: dimaag

Sakura! it feels great after reading sk is gonna meet her next. Just can't wait for it to happen. But I was wondering,how was sharmistha behaving n so normal?😕 And why does sk has to shift to a dirty place? Well I am actually liking this lawyer sk😳.

Lots to catch now dear. I know you have managed many surprises with your characters and good writing skills for us😛.

Sharmitha and sanskar's conversation was amusing too. Sk seriously has skills to break walls and he just picks the right weapons to do so. Be it the way to the heart of a mother's or a case.

Thanks for the pm sakura😉 and update soon. By now I know you keep promises well. Great job👏.

Originally posted by: TRPS

so much suspense Saku!!! update fast dear!!! can't wait...
I guess in next chapter we will get to know who is who in the case exactly.. well, after listening lullaby, I thought it is Sharmistha to Swara, finally Swara got entry in this fiction. errr!!! that was SK!!!
and why MR. singh gave him this case!!! challenged him thinking that he can't win it specially after involvement of DP... eagerly waiting of opening of the case and Sanskaar's past... he was missing his mother... Sigh!!!!

PS- Sanskaar's habit of rearranging the sentences quite like my habit.. it is just I put comma in sentences, here and there...