Only You (SWASAN FF) Ch. 26 on Pg. 38 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice updates
finally truth is out mu clear
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Nice...
Finally swasan are together...
uttara!!!! happy for her..
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thanks a lot all of you for your appreciations for this FF. I hope i made u all happy or at least you had a smile while reading some of the comments. if any suggestions u can post a reply. This is the next part of my FF. Hope u all like it. Please reply me of your thoughts.

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Chapter-11

Sw- Nahi maa. (wiping her tears) Aap mein se kisi ki koi galti nahi hai. Agar hai toh keval Sanskar ki. (Sanskar was shocked) Aur use uski saza bhi milegi. Usse kabhi meri (walking towards Sanskar) Naarazgi, meri judaai, mera gussa aur sabse important mera mahaan wala tyaag nahi milega. (wiped Sanskar's tears) I am sorry (tears rolled down her eyes).

Sanskar was not having words to speak. He just held Swara's hand and took her in a tight embrace trying to never leave. Swara reciprocated the hug and poured all her pain in that hug in order to let it go. They didn't care about the surroundings. After some time they broke the hug and both of them wiped their tears.

Then Swara thought of lightening the mood so she said- Ek saza toh tumne mujhe batane hi nahi di.

Sa- Bolo, mujhe tumhari har saza manzoor hai.

Sw- Accha! soch lo. Mukar toh nahi jaoge.

Sa- Tumse door jaane ke alaava (except) main koi bhi saza se nahi mukroonga (ignore).

Sw- Pucca?

La- (still side hugging Ragini) Haan bhai. Soch lo. Biwiyon ki punishment bahut daravani (horrific) hoti hai.

Aadarsh- Haan bhai soch le Laksh bilkul sahi keh raha hia.

Ra- (leaving his hug and facing him) Kya kaha aapne Laksh? (in an angry tone)
Pa- Aur humne toh aapko punishments hi nahi di hai aaj tak. Humein aapse baat nahi karni.

La- (holds her by her shoulders) Arre meri poori baat toh sunn lo. Aur biwiyon se zyada khatarnaak girlfriends ki.

Ra- fir theek hai.

Aadarsh- Haan Pari main bhi yehi kehna hahta tha.

Pa- Accha theek hai.

After some seconds, Ragini and Pari at the same time- Matlab aapki girlfriends bhi reh chuki hain! (Pari facing Ragini)Ragini aur pata nahi ki inki shayad abhi bhi hon.

Ra- Han bhabhi aap sahi keh rahe ho.

Ragini and Pari together- Humein aapse baat hi nahi karni. (saying this they left the room with Laksh and Aadarsh following them and trying to make tham understand) And Raksh walking after Laksh to help him out.

Sw- Yeh toh gaye. (faces Sanskar again) Tum bolo manzoor hai ya nahi?

Sa- Haan haan pucca manzoor hai (I accept it).

Sw- Theek hai. (face the other side) Kal Janamashtmi hai. Humare Banaras mein Janmashtmi (the birth anniversary of LORD KRISHNA) (faced him again) Tumhe apne pyaar ka izhaar sabke saamne karna padega. Bolo mazoor? (Do you accept it?)

Sa- Swara vaise galti akele meri nahi hai. Tumhari bhi hai. Tum bhi toh mujhe chodd kar gayi thi. (faces the other side) Lekin uske liye maine tumhe maaf kiya. (faces her again) Magar ye challenge mein, Sorry SAZA mein tumhara bhi yogdaan (contribution) hona chahiya.

Sw- Woh kaise? (with a confused look)

Sa- Agar maine sab ke saamne ye ailaan (announcement) kar diya ki Main tumse pyaar karta hoon toh tumhe bhi ye ailaan karna padega ki U LOVE ME. Ab bolo manzoor.

Sw- Haan theek hai manzoor. Pehle tum toh apna challenge poora karo. Par jab tak tum apna challenge sorry saza poori nahi karte main tumhe apne dil ki baat nahi booloongi.

Sa- Theek hai main bhi tab tak sunoonga hi nahi.

Swara and Sanskar together- Done!

Then Swara goes to Annapurna and Durgaprasad and says- Pichle 5 saalon se iss Janmashtmi mahotsav ka ayojan (arrangement) Main aur Aakash karte aa rahe hain, yehi dua maangte hue ki ek din main Sanskar aur aap sabhi se fir se mil jaaongi. Aaj meri ye manukaamna (request) poori ho gayi. Kal ka dahi-haandi mahotsav (a ritual that involves making a human pyramid and breaking an earthen pot filled with curd tied at a convenient height) sabse sunder mahotsav hoga. Aap sabhi please aayega.

Dp- Hum zaroor aayenge beta aur fir Sanskar ko bhi madad (help) ki zaroorat padegi when he confesses his love to you. We'll be there.

Sw- (blushes) Thankyou Uncle.

Dp- Beta BADE PAPA.

Sw- Thank you Bade Papa.

Swara runs away from there. Uttara witnessed all this and was so happy for her Bhai and Bhabhi that at least they will lead a life together. Then she walks away from there. Sanskar was so happy but he did notice Uttara leaving with teary eyes and was very sure how to get the truth out.

IN AAKASH'S ROOM

Aakash was lying beside his sofa and kept his head buried between his hands which were on the edge of the sofa.

Aa- Kya karoon main? Kya karoon? Dil kehta hai tum Uttara se pyaar kate ho aur dimaag tum Swara se karte the aur kate rahoge.

Some voice- Toh dil ki suno.

Aakash got his head up and was in a shock to see the person standing in front.

Aa- Sanskar tum, yahan?

Sa- Haan main. Actually vo gate khula hua tha so main...

Aa- No it's not a problem. Lekin tum yahan, I mean tumhe kaise pata that I live here.

Sa- Swara se poocha.

Aa- Okay. (wipes his tears) so any special reason?

Sa- Haan actually pehle ek doubt tha. But now I got it cleared.

Aa- What? I mean main tumahari koi...

Sa- Dekho Aakash main poori baat toh nahi jaanta ki poori baat kya hai, lekin ye zaroor keh sakta hoon ki main meri behen ko bahut acche se jaanta hoon ki who kise pasand karti hai, she loves you a lot. Main ye toh nahi keh sakta hoon kit um bhi usse pyaar karo lekin ye zaroor keh sakta hoon ki agar tumhara dil uska naam leta hai then tell her isse pehle u get late. Samjhe tum?

Aa- Mujhe nahi pata main usse pyaar karta bhi hoon ya nahi? Bas dil mein uske liye kuch cute si feelings hai. (he gets u and starts walking in the opposite side) Vo hasti hai to accha lagta hai, vo roti hai toh dard hota hai, usko tease karta hoon toh maza aata hai, lekin koi aur usse kuch bol de toh khoon kholta hai, mann karta maar hi daloon. Iske alava aur kuch nahi pata.

Swara was on the door and overheard their conversation and said- Iske alava aur kukch pata hone ki zaroorat bhi nahi. (they both turned back and faced) Ye pyaar hi hai Aakash. Tum Uttara se pyaar karte ho.

Swara comes and stands near Sanskar and Sanskar keeps his hand on Swara's shoulder.

Sa- Swara bilkul sahi keh rahi hai. Ye sab sirf pyaar mein hi hota hai. Ja ab bata de meri behen ko.

Aakash felt very happy and said- tum dono bilkul sahi keh rahe ho. I LOVE HER, I LOVE UTTARA. Main abhi usse ye bataoonga. (he was leaving but stopped on the door, turned back and said) Aur Swara (they both turned to face him) Uttara sahi thi, maine tumse kabhi pyaar nahi kiya tha. Actual mein there was an attraction that I had for you. Aur haan waise tum dono ki Jodi FAADOOO (awesome) lagti hai, like Jhakaas( real awesome, perfect) .

PRECAP- Aakash's most awaited confession. Aakash ka shagun.

Edited by 357159pikachu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Nice update..
Lets see how sanskar confesses to swara ...

Thank u for the pm..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Really loved it. I really loved the character of uttara. The bond between swara and uttara was also awesome. They understand each other. Swasan scenes were also beautiful. Raksh was also cute. Thank you for giving such a beautiful story. Waiting for your next update
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Woow..awsum..loved it..n plzz add some SwaSan Romance naa yaar..only SwaSan Romance..n haa continue soon
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Awesome update
Pls pm me next time
Hi i am sujay
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Chapter-12

Aakash ran to the hotel with a big smile. When he entered the he met Annapurna.

Ap- Arre Aakash beta! Itna bhaag ke kahan jaa rahe ho?

Aa- (while breathing heavily) Aunty ji Uttara kahan hai?

Ap- Vo toh kamre mein hai lekin...

Before she could say anything he ran away from there. He reached Uttara's room and knocked the door. He took deep breaths and waited for her to open the door. Uttara was crying inside the room.

Ut- (in a broken voice) Bhabhi please jao. Mujhe kisi se baat nahi karni hai.

Aa- Uttara Bhabhi nahi main, Aakash.

Uttara instantly wiped her tears and opened the door.

Ut- Haan Aakash. Tumhe kuch kaam tha?

Aakash was astonished to see her face like this and instantly took her inside, made her sit on the bed and offered her some water.

Aa- Uttara kya hua? Tum itna kyon ro rahi thi?

Ut- (pretending to be fine) main kahan ro rahi thi. Tum bhi na. (she was about to walk away from the room when Aakash held her hand)

Aa- Uttara, mujhse jhoot bologi.

Uttara faced him with teary eyes. Aakash hugged her at that very instant.

Aa- Uttara please mat ro. Main tumhe rote hue nah dekh paaunga. Please mujhe batao kya hua? (he then cupped her face and said) Kisine kuch kaha kya? Laksh ne kuch bola kya?

Ut- (in a completely broken voice) Aakash kisine kuch nahi kiya hai. Tumhe chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. (made her hand free and stepped back in order to ignore his touch and faced in the opposite direction) Tumhara koi haq nahi hai.

Aakash went near her and said in a loud voice- Haq hai Uttara! (Uttara faced him) Haq hai. (again cupped her face) I LOVE YOU UTTARA. I love you. Please ye mat kaho, please.

Uttara was shocked at first but the next moment both of them were hugging each other. They heard the sound of claps from the door. They parted away to see Swara and Sanskar standing together and clapping for them.

Sa- Arre wah! Kya superb confession tha (Uttara and Aakash were a bit embarrassed). Lekin Uttara maine tumse ye expect nahi kiya tha! (everyone looked at him in shock) Haan aur nahi toh kya. (side hugging her) Uttara tum mujhe toh bata sakti thi na that you love Aakash (looking at Aakash). Toh meri aur Swara ki love story thodi jaldi shuru ho jaati. Kyon Swara?

Sw- Jaao! Abhi bhi hamari love story shuru nahi hui hai. Yaad hai na kal ki shart. Uske baad hi kuch sochna.

Aa- All the best Sanskar. Waise bhi Swara jaldi na maanti hai. (he gave a hi-fi to Sanskar)

Everyone smiled while Uttara hit him playfully and said- Aakash khabardaar jo bhabhi ke khilaaf kuch bhi bola. Meri bhabhi nest hain. Agar woh nahi hoti toh aaj HUM bhi nahi hote.

Swara went Uttara and gave a hi-fi. The boys made faces.

Aa- Sorry Baba. Happy?

Ut- Accha jao maaf kiya.

They all laughed.

Sw- Accha chalo ab main chalti hoon. Raat ko Uttara ke liye shagun bhi toh leke aana hai.

Uttara and Sanskar went to see them off. Uttar and Aakash were walking together having talks and behind them.

Sa- Swara, dekho kitne acche lag rahe hain dono.

Sw- Sahi kaha Sanskar. (after a small pause) Sanskar mujhe tumhe kuch batana tha.

Sa- (looking at Swara) Haan bolo Swara.

Sw-Sanskar woh na... Actually na...

Sa- Swara saaf saaf bolo.

Swara said in one go- Mujhe lagta tha ki Ragini tumhari patni hai aur raksh tumhara beta.

Sanskar could not catch up- Kya Swara? (stopped at that moment and was completely flabbergasted) Swara really main aur Ragini? Kahan se? I mean how is it even possible?

Sw- Actually tum mujhse aur Laksh se jab badla lene aaye the, remember tab you started liking Ragini. Issi wajah se...

Sa- Swara please aisa mat bolo. Mujhe bahut bura lagta hai. (very sad face)

Sw- I am sorry Sanskar. I am really sorry. (almost in tears)

Sanskar immediately cupped her face, wiped her tears and said- Swara its okay. Bas maine jo tumhare saath kiya th uske bare mein mujhe soch kar bahut guilty wali feeling aati hai. Its really okay Swara.

Swara didn't say anything and just hugged him tight and Sanskar alos hugged her back.

Sa- Swara main tumhe ek baat bataun.

Sw- (still hugging) Bolo

Sa- Actually mujhe bhi lagta tha that you and Aakash are together.

Swara immediately broke the hug and started hitting him playfully. Uttara and Aakash turned to see them fighting.

Aa- Chalo Sanskar ko bachate hain he needs us.

Ut- Rehne do Aakash. Bhai ne fir se kuch kara hoga.

Aakash was about to go to help him when Uttara caught his hand. Aakash faced her and eyelock.

Sa- Bhai tu apna romance baad mein kar lena abhi mujhe bacha.

They both went to help him.

After some fun talks Swara and Aakash left.

IN THE EVENING

The whole Maheshwari family was on the dining table.

Ap- Aaj agar Swara bhi humare saath khana khati toh kaafi acha lagta. Kyon ji?

Durgaprasad was about say something when Swara interrupted.

Sw- Maa maine aapki ye iccha (request) poori kar di hai.

They all turned to see Swara and Aakash standing with something in their hand.

Sw- Aur main akele nahi aayi hun maa, saath mein Aakash ji hi aaye hain.

Everybody greeted them. They took blessings of all the elders. Raksh hugged Aakash and Swara.

Sujata- Wah sab toh theek hai chori ar ya thare haath mein kya hai?

Sw- Mom iske bare mein main aapko abhi nahi bataungi. (walking to bade papa) Bade papa kya hum aapke kamre mein chal sakte hain? Humein aap sabhi badon se ek bahut zaroori baat karni hai.

Dp- Theek hai beta. Sabhi humare kamre mein chalo.

IN DP's ROOM

Everybody settled down except for Uttara and Aakash.

Dp- ab bolo beta kya hua?

Sw- Bade papa, main aapse Uttara ka haath maangna chahti hoon, (looking at Aakash) Aakash ke liye.

Dp- Lekin beta tumhe nahin lagta ki iss baat ke liye Aakash ke maa-baap ko aana chahiye tha.

Aakash was looking very sad.

Swara understood his state and said- Bade papa Aakash ke maa-baap ki maut (death) ho chuki hai. Abhi kuch saal pehle hi unka Accident ho gaya.

Everybody was shocked, even Sanskar. Durga Prasad walked to aakash and put a hand on his shoulder.

Dp- Swara beta, (looking at Swara) Humein ye rishta manzoor hai bas agar ismein Uttara aur Ram ki manzoori hai.

Su- mhare ko toh is rishte se koi aitraaz nahi hai aur nahi inko. Uttara beta...

Uttara nodded in shyness.

Su- Oh! Ab samajh mein aaya. Matlab ya sab pehle hi ho chukka hai. (walked to Uttara and hugged her).

Uttara and Aakash took the blessings of the elders.

La- Swara tum Aakash ki taraf se akeli aaogi kya? Mera matlab bhai kiski side hai?

Ra- Haan Sanskar aaj aapko choose karna hi padega Pyaar ya Behen.

Sa- Ragini aur Laksh main toh dono ke saath hona chahta hoon. But ye jaante hue ke Uttara ke saath sab hain (went to Swara and side hugged her) Main Swara ke saath hoon.

La- Dekh le Uttara bhai ne tera saath chod diya hai. Soch le ab.

Ut- Bhai mujhe koi problem nahi hai.

Dp- Masti bahut ho gayi hai. Chalo sab khana kha len neeche. Swara beta aur aaksah beta tum bhi Aa jao.

Sw- Ji bade papa.

They all went down and had their dinner.

Raksh- Aakash bhaiya bye! Kal bhi aana.

Ra- Raksh beta ab toh bhaiya roz aayenge. Aur bhaiya kyon? Phuphaji bolo. (husband of the sister of a father)

Aakash and Uttara were blushing hearing this.

Sw- dekho toh kaise blush kar raha hai! Arre Uttara bhi!

Sa- Chalo bhi ab meri behen aur mere dost ko tang mat karo.

Sw- accha beta matlab ab...

All together- No fight!

They both stopped and Swara made an angry pout face.

PRECAP- Janamashtmi and Sanskar's proposal.

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