Only You (SWASAN FF) Ch. 26 on Pg. 38

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HEY MATES! I AM NEW HERE. JUST IN THE CASE OF WRITING ELSE I HAVE READ A NUMBER OF FFs, SS AND OS. I LOVED ALL OF THEM. SO THANKS MATES FOR THOSE FFs AND SS AND OS.WELL FOR NOW I TRIED TO WRITE AND FF OF MY OWN. THIS IS THE PROLOGUE. IF YOU LIKE IT PLEASE LET ME KNOW. IF WORDS OF SOME OTHER FFs, SS OR OS ARE COPIED OR A BIT OF THEME IS COPIED THEN I AM REALLY SORRY BUT SUCH A THING IS NOT DONE INTENTIONALLY. HOPE U LIKE IT


The scene starts after the real culprit (LAKSH) behind Ragini's kidnapping is caught.

MM Hall

Ragini is sitting on the sofa set crying badly giving her head support by keeping it on her Dadi's shoulder. Dadi, Swara And Sharmishtha are trying to console her. Everyone else are standing in MM Hall glaring at Laksh and Laksh is Standing in the middle with his head bowed down of guilt.

DP- Laksh hamein tumse ye umeed nahi thi. Iske baad tum mein aur ragini mein kya fark hai? Bolo...

AP- Laksh tumne aaj hamara sar sharam se jhuka diya hai. Tum itna kaise gir sakte ho. (starts weeping bitterly)

Su- (goes and supports her) Jiji aap kyon ro rahe ho! Ya sab mein aapka kya dosh. Arre sharam toh ya chore ko aani chahiye. Apni biwi ke saath koi esa kaise... Mhaare ko toh bolne mein hi sharam aa rahi hai.

It was enough for Uttara. She came forward and stood beside her brother.

Ut- Aap logon ne ek baar bhi bhai se poocha ki unhone ye sab kyon kiya? Nahi, kisi ne nahi poocha. Bas sab bolne ke liya saamne aa rahe hain. Main batati hoon bhai ne ye sab kyon kiya.

Laksh tried to stop her.

Ut- Nahi bhai. Bas bahut ho gaya in sabka. Bhai ne ye sab Swara bhabhi ka badla lene ke liye kiya. Vo unse pyaar karte hain. Ragini bhabhi ne Laksh Bhaiya aur Swara bhabhi ko alag karne ki koshish ki, uska badla. inn sabke badle ke liye. Swara bhabhi aaj bhi unse...

Before she could complete Swara stood up and said- Kya pyar pyar laga raha hai tum dono ne!!😡😡 Main kisi se pyar nahi karti hoon. So please mera naam toh tum Laksh ke saath jodo hi mat. Meri shaadi tumhare Sanskar Bhaiya se ho chuki hai. (looking at Laksh) Biwi hoon main uske. Bhabhi hoon tumhari. Main Mrs. Swara Sanskar Maheshawarihoon. (looked at Sanskar and then again at Laksh) Do u understand this basic thing? Aur rahi baat bale ki toh mujhe kisi ki help ki zaroorat nahi hai. Agar mujhe kisi se badla lena hoga toh main le loongi. please stop interfering in my life.

Sanskar stood there with a shocked expression. Was he dreaming or she actually called herself to be Swara SANSKAR Maheshwari??

DP- Laksh galti ki saza Ragini ko bhi milli thi isliye ab tumhe bhi milegi. Main police ko phone kar raha hoon.

Ra- Nahi papa. (everybody looked at her shockingly especially Laksh and Uttara) Mana jo bhi kuch Laksh ne kiya vo sab galat tha. par vo unhone apne pyar ko paane ke liya kiya tha. hum jaante hain ye sab karte hue unhe accha nahi laga hoga pyar pyar ye sab kara hi deta hai. Humne unhe maaf kar diya hai. ( goes and stands beside Laksh) aap log bhi kar dijiye hamare Khatir. Galti sabse hoti hai par agar pehli baar mein maafi nahi milein toh maafi paane ke liye log bahut kuch kar guzarte hain. Ye humse zyada accha kon jaanta hai. Maaf kar dijiye.

DP- Laksh Ragini ke kehne par hum sab tumhe maaf toh kar rahein hain par saza toh tumhe milegi. Ragini ab yahan nahi rahegi. shayad tab tumhe guilt hoga.

after some time Ragini packed her bag and went with Maa, Baba and Dadi. Later swara also came down with her bag and was holding some papers.

Su- Swara chori tu kahan jaa rahi hai?

she came down went to sanskar and handed him the papers.

Sw- Sanakar maine in papers pe sign kar diya hai. tum bhi kar dena.

AP- beta tumhe Baadi hi jaana tha to Ragini ke saath chali jaati. Alag se kyon? Swara tum Baadi hi jaa rahi ho na?

Su- Jiji aap bhi kaisa sawal pooch rahe ho. wa badi nahi to aur kahan javegi?

Sw- Nahi mom, main Badi nahi jaa rahi hoon.

Ut- toh Kahan jaa rahe ho Bhabhi?

Sw- ab main tumhari bhabhi nahi hoon uttara aur main ek esi jagah jaa rahi hoon jahan mujhe jeene ke liye ek wajah milein.

she took everyone's blessings and went out. Sanskar was too shocked to say anything. He kept staring at those papers.

Uttara came and said- Bhabhi main jaanti hoon aap mujhse bahut gussa ho. par please Sanskar bhai ko chodke mat jao.

Sw- Uttara mera decision final hai. aur main kisi ko bhi saz nahi de rahi hoon. mujhe iss sab se door hona hai. so please try to understand.

Ut- theek hai bhabhi par aap theek ho ya nahi ye main kaise jaanoongi. Bhabhi main zindagi bhar iss darr mein nahi reh sakti hoon. please bhabhi.

Sw- uttara main tumhe apna naya address text karoongi. par vada karo tum kabhi kisi ko iss baare mein nahi bataogi. aur saare messages delete karogi. vada karo mujhe.

Ut- bhabhi...

Before she could say anything Swara kept uttara's hand on her head and told her- Tumhe meri kasam. Uttara agreed. Swara left in the car waving her hand.

After 4 years...

Well, if you like the story please let me know. I will continue it. Please ignore any kind of grammatical mistakes.




Index

Chapter 1- Pg.1

Chapter 2- Pg.3 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4530096&TPN=3

Chapter 3- Pg.4 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4530096&TPN=4

Chapter 4- Pg.4 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4530096&TPN=4

Chapter 5- Pg.5 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4530096&TPN=5

Chapter-6- Pg.6

Chapter 7-Pg. 7

Chapter 8-Pg.8

Chapter 9 & 10- Pg.9

Chapter 11-Pg. 10

Chapter 12-Pg. 11

Chapter 13-Pg. 12

Chapter 14-Pg. 13

Chapter 15-Pg. 14

Chapter 16-Pg. 17

Chapter 17-Pg. 20

Chapter 18-Pg. 23

Chapter 19 & 20-Pg.27

Chapter 21-Pg. 30

Chapter 22-Pg. 32

Chapter 23 & 24-Pg.34

Chapter 25- Pg. 36

Chapter 26- Pg. 38

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Chapter-1
Guys, thanks a lot for your encouragement. Your comments were really encouraging for me. So I came up with the 1st chapter. Hope you all like it.

After 5 years
In MM

A young mother was trying to wake up her 4 year old son - Raksh uttho! Its high time. Chuttiyan chal rahi hain iska matlab ye nahi hai ki tum sirf sote rahoge. Raksh!! Uttho bhi.

Raksh cuddled up in the pillow trying to cover his ears and eyes in order to sleep more as RAGINI was waking him up continuously and the sun was trying to do the same without words. Sanskar entered the room. He saw Ragini's efforts towards waking up her son.

Sanskar went and sat beside Raksh who was trying to be asleep.

Sa- Raksh dekho koi fayda nahi hai is sabka. Main aur Ragini hum dono jaante hain kit um so nahi rahe ho. Isliye utth jao. (he went near Raksh's ear and said) Abhi uthe toh Chocolate bhi milegi baad mein toh mammi apni tareeke se uttha hi legi. Offer seemit hai. Jaldi.

Listening to him he got up and ran to the washroom to freshen up.

Ra- Sanskar inko toh aapne uttha diya. Ab Laksh ko bhi uttha dijiye na.

Sa- Maaf karna Ragini par vo kota tumhara hai (saying this he saw Laksh who was sleeping with his mouth open and covering half of the bed.)

Seeing him both of them laughed merrily. Then Sanskar went to his room to get ready.

He went to the drawer and took out a photo from it. Tears were formed in his eyes. He looked at the photo and started talking to it- Swara, tum kahan chali gayi ho? Ragini, Laksh sab sab tumhe miss kar rahe hain. Raksh ko toh maloom hi nahi ki uski koi Mausi cum chachi bhi hain. Kyun tum uss din mujhe divorce dekar chali gayi kyon? Tumhe pata hai usss din mein aur aaj ke din mein kuch nahi badla hai. Sab kuchch waisa hi hai. Aaj bhi main tumhare wapas aane ki raah dekhta hoon. Please wapas aa jao. (saying this tears finally rolled down his eyes. He looked at the mouli that she gave him on last diwali.)

Uttara was passing by and saw his brother breaking down. She wanted to tell her brother that she was the only one who knew where bhabhi was but she was helpless as Swara gave her a vow to never tell anybody where she was. All she could do was to go inside and console her brother. She went inside and kept a hand on her brother's shoulder. Sanskar put a hand on her hand and started to cry. Uttara felt helpless really helpless.

Ut- Bhai! Aap dekhna ek din zaroor aayega jab aapke saamne khadi hongi aur aap unse ye saare sawal pooch sakte ho. Theek hai.

Sa- par maine aisa kya kara Uttara jo vo mujhe itni badi saza de gayi. Kyon?

Ut- Bhai ye mera vada hai ek din aap logon ka milap zaroor hoga aur vo din zyada door nahi hai.

Suddenly Sanskar's phone rang he wiped away his tears and picked up the call. After cutting the call he looked at Uttara who was looking at him with a questioning look. He said- Naye clients se milne ke liye Banaras Jana hai. Sabki tickets book kara lena. We'll go tonight. (he smiled at her as she wanted to go to banaras since a very long time but for now he couldn't see any excitement on her face. All he could see was a tensed look.) he thought that might be she is not used to that's the reason so he left)

Ut to herself- Bhabhi mujhe lagta hai Bhai aur aapko milane ki koshish sirf main hi nahi kar rahi hoon. Bhagwan bhi kar rahe hain. Chalo iss hafte jhoot to nahi bolna padega.

FLASHBACK ( 4 years ago)

Ap- Par tumne to tumhari padhai poori kar li hai na toh ye kaisi padhai? Vo bhi Mumbai mein.

Ut- vo maa mujhe na Home science ka course karna hai isliye Mumbai Jana zaroori hai. Hafte mein sirf ek baar.

Ap-Mumbai mein kaunsa HOME SCIENCE ka course hota hai? Aur hafte mein ek baar matlab kam se kam 3 din mere khayal mein. Mujhe lagta hai tumhe jane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.

Dp- Uttara hum tumhe ek hi shart pe bhejenge. Course khatam ho jane ke baad tumhe shaadi karni hogi.

Uttara looked at him shockingly but accepted the offer in order to meet Swara.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Ut- Ab toh ye baat Bhabhi ko bhi batani hogi. Chalo accha hi hai. Mera ek din ki home science ki Mumbai wali class bunk ttoh hogi.

Saying this she giggled and happily went to the hall to take breakfast and to see everybody's reaction on her brother's idea. She knew everybody would agree but all was aware that Sujata would love to say something or the other.

Guys, so this is the end of the 1st chapter. I hope you liked it. Plz let me know through your comments.

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