FanFiction Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya SwaSan/RagLak Part23 Updated (Pg26) - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3
It's very sweet.. adla badli how gayi!!

Liked the way DP asked SwaRagini to come back. Also SanLak miss them so much.

The background songs were bang on.

Cheers
Sharon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Part 3

It's very sweet.. adla badli how gayi!!

Liked the way DP asked SwaRagini to come back. Also SanLak miss them so much.

The background songs were bang on.

Cheers
Sharon


Thnk u soo.much.it means alot 😊.waiting fr ur reply fr other parts too

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome update

Thnku for the pm


Thnks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gayu6

Nice update. Loved swasan moments. The trio brothers making swaragini fool n arranging their bachelor's party. Continue soon


Thnks fr the Compliment 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 4
RagLak scenes were equally romantic.

Its to be seen now how SanLak win back their Shona and Jaan.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Part 4

RagLak scenes were equally romantic.

Its to be seen now how SanLak win back their Shona and Jaan.


Yes u keep reading.hope u will like it 😊.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Goldie93


Yes u keep reading.hope u will like it 😊.


Like?? I am loving it!

Not feeling well and busy at work.. so will be commenting slowly!
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved more RagLak here.
Awesome part part continue soon ty.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sparkler8


Like?? I am loving it!

Not feeling well and busy at work.. so will be commenting slowly!


Ohh Thnk u fr Loving my ff..n its ok..take ur own tym bt will b waiting fr u reply..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thnk u Guyz fr Appreciating My Wrk. Here is the Nxt Part of Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya.Hopeu Like it.Tried My Best to write as Good as i Can in Fever too :).

Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya

Part 19

The Three DIL n Uttara were going to have some refreshments bt den they saw SanLak n Adarsh coming out of Pub in Full Masti n Enjoyment Mood.

Sanskaar : Thnk U Bhai..fr the Most Awsum Bachelor Part Ever..woh Ladikyaan Dance karrahi thi yaar..

Laksh : Haa Bhai..it was The Best Ever Bachelor Party Ever..

Adarsh : Arrey Bhayyio !! Bachelor Party nhi Official Meeting Bolo..

SanLak : Oops !!! Arrey Haa.Bhai..this was the Best Ever Official Meeting we had in our Life.Hahahahaha..Maaza aaygaya..

Adarsh : Dekha sab kitne acche se hogaya.maine kaha tha ki fikar mat karo wen Adarsh Maheshwari is here ( Winked )

Sanskaar : Haa Bhai..yakin nhi aaraha ki Swara jo itni Smart aur Intelligent hai usku itni aasani se Bhuddhu banana aasan hoga.hahaha..

On the Otherside Swara was Boiling with Anger.

Laksh : Haa Bhai..Aur Ragini..usku bhi Bhuddhu banana aasan hoka i never thot. .kyounki usne jo past main kiya uske baad toh i thot ki she will Catch me on the Spot..bt aisa kuch nhi hua..hahahha

Ragini too was Boiling with Anger..

Adarsh : Dekha..i told u..maine Pari ko itni baar ullu banaya hai ki i cn tell u ki iss bar bhi woh meri baath pe hi yaakin karegi..hahaha

The Tri Maheswari Bros gave a Hi FI to eachother n Laughed at their Wives Foolishness.

Other the otherside the Three DIL were Boiling wid Anger.

Swara : Accha yeh tha inn Teeno ka Official Meeting aur bhi Sheher se Bahar..( full angry )

Ragini n Pari : Haa Swara..humne inpe itna Trust kiya aur inhe Miss kiye jaarahe the aur yeh log Full Maaze karrahe hai.. ( Angry )

Swara : Accha Suno i got a Plan.jisse inn Teeno ko Maaza chakha sakte hai humlog.

Uttara : Bolo Jaldi..m with u three..yeh teeno aaj theek nhi kiya..i will help u this tym..

Swara : Thnk U Uttara..

Ragini n Pari : Haa Swara. .Jaldi bolo. .inn Teeno ko Maaza toh sikhana padega..

Swara Explains da Plain to Ragini Pari n Uttara den went lil Front where the Three Maheshwari Brothers cud see them.Seeing SwaRagini Pari n Uttara They got Scared n Hide behind a Pillar n Heard their Convo.

Swara : Suno Ragini..main soch rahi thi..ki aaj raat hum kuch Party Warty Karte hai..wats say ??

Ragini : Party itni raat ko..na Swara..itni raat ko aur Party Baba allow nhi karege..

Swara : uski fikar mat karo.maine Baba se Permission leli thi.aur unhone Permission deti hai.

Ragini : Arrey Swara..u r soo Fast..

Swara : Thnk U ..Thnk U..Fast Kyon na ho..akhir World's Best Businessman Sanskaar Maheshwari ki Biwi jo ho toh itna Fast toh mujhe rehna padega na :p ( Sees Sanskaar Indirectly so that he does nt notices her n Laughs )

On the Other Hand Sanskaar is Smiling n Feeling Proud by Listening his Appreciation frm Swara.

Ragini : Bhabhi n Uttara..aaplog bhi join karo na humare saath Party main..

Pari n Uttara : Haa Kash hum join karskate..bt humne Maa se Permission nhi li aur Adarsh Ji bhi nhi yaha pe toh hum kaise.

Swara : Arrey Bhabhi..yeh Teeno nhi hai isiliye toh kehrahi hu..hum Party Warty Karte Full Night..bahut maazaaayega.

Ragini : Haa Bhabhi..maan jaayiye na..aur rahi ghar se Permission leni ki baad.hum phone karke leleige.fikar mat kariye.

Swara: Haa Bhabhi.aur hum kuch apne Boys Frnds ko bhi bula lete hai.i knw some of our Boys jo humare saath college main padhte the.they r really Awsum.aur unmain se ek pe mujhe bahut Zaada Crush tha infact hai ( Blushes )

Ragini : Haa Swara..I remember woh Akash naa..Akash Mehra..

Swara : Haa Ragini. .ryt.mera Aku..I Loved him sooo much..infact Love him till nw..

Sanskaar Listens this n gets Damn Jealous bt Controlled his Anger n kept listening their Talks.

Ragini : Accha Swara.ek kaam karo toh tum woh Ravi Gupta ko bhi bula le na plzz..

Swara : Offo !! Ragini aaj bhi tumhe woh yaad hai.yeh wohi hai na jo tumhe College main tunhare peeche rehta tha.

Ragini : Haa Swara.bas kuch dino se hi uska Phone aaraha tha.mujhse kehraha tha ki I Wanna meet u Baby..per maine mana kardiya tha.bt aab tum yeh party kehrahi ho toh socch rahi thi ki usse bula lu.waise bhi usse nhi milke bahut din hogaye.I Miss Him.

Laksh too was Listening this n He too got Shocked seeing Ragini's this Side . Meanwhile Ragini too Enjoying Looking soo Jealous n Winked Swara.

Swara : Haa Ok Ragini Sure..aur Bhabhi n Uttara aap dono ko kisi ko bulana hai toh bulasakte hai.

Adarsh was Laughing at SanLak n was Thnking God that His Wife is soo Simple n Away frm such things

Uttara : Nhi Bhabhi..mujhe kisi ko nhi bulana hai per Shayad Bhabhi ko Gautam ko Bulana hoga ( teases Pari )

SwaRagini : Offo.Bhabhi ..aap bhi bhi haa.Kaun hai yeh Gautam ?? Bataye na hume. .

Pari : ( Blushes ) koi nhi bas woh himare saath College main tha.uske baad humari shaadi hogayi thi toh himne usse koi contact nhi rakha..bt bas aak subah jab Adarsh Ji Offoce gaye the uska call aaya tha mujhe. Lekin maine yeh Baath Adarsh Ji ko nhi bataya.

Adarsh too got Shocked Pari in this New Avatar n was Confused.All Three of them where Feeling damn Jealous n Regretting fr their Bachelor Party whereas The 4 Ladies Enjoyed their Jealousy n were Laughing in Mind n Winked Eachother.

Swara: Haa Ok Bhabhi..fikar mat kariye . hum bhi nhi bataye ge.hum toh bas fr a Chnge n Fun yeh sab karrahe hai.

Ragini : Haa Bhabhi..Dnt Worry..

Uttara : Ok Done..hum sab aaj raat Full Party karege..lekin kaha.itni raat ko booking bhi nhi hoti.

Swara : Fikar mat karo Uttara . maine pata kiya hai ki iss Mall Main ek Pub hai.jo bahut Accha hai aur Zabardast hai.we cn go there aur uski tyming bhi acchi hai subah ke 5 baje tak aur Hum sab woh Teeno aane se pehle hi Ghar Pahuch jayege.

Ragini : Haa Maine bhi suna iss pub ke Baare main.News main bahut aata hai iss Pub ke baare main.bahut hi accha Pub hai suna maine.lets go there. .

Pari : Ok..lets go.bt in Kapdo mai.i mean iss Sari Suits main we will look like Alien there na.hume Kapde chnge karna chahiye.

Ragini : Haa Ryt Bhabhi.u r ryt.kya kare aab..

The 3 Boys got relieved nw n were Happy that nw The Ladies wont go to Pub coz they knew they wont Wesr revealing Clothes.

Swara : Offo !! Aaplog bhul gaye hai ki hum Mall main hai Blue Palace Mall Kolkata ka Best Mall yaha har tarah ke Kapde milte hai.so dnt worry we will Buy frm there.

Ragini : Haa..Swara hum bhul gaye the.Lekin Agr un Teeno main se kisi ne call kiya toh kya kehege ??

Pari n Uttara : Haa Swara..kya bolege ??

Swara : Keh denge ki Hum apne Ghar pe hai aur thak gaye Shopping karke.abb unhe thodi pata hoga ki hum jhoot bolrahe hai.they r bzy in their Meeting na ( Looked towards the Boys Indirectly n Laughed other Ladies i.e Pari Ragini n Uttara too Laughed Looking at the Trio )

Sanskaar was Shocked to See Swara telling all these n was Angry bt somehow Controlled His Emotions n the Trio Brothers Followed the 4 Ladies.

Whereas The 4 Ladies were Walking towards the Shop where they get Modern Clothes.bt b4 they cud enter the Shop Sanskaar Called Uttara.

Sanskaar : Hello Uttara

Uttara : ( She singals Swara n Pari n Ragini abt Sanskaar's Call n Swara told Gesturing her wat to tell ).Haa Bhaiyyia. .aapke iss waqt call kiya..meeting khtm hogayi kya

Sanskaar : Haa Meeting khtm hogayi.woh sab chodo.Swara kaha hai.maine uska phone kabse try karraha hu lekin woh utha hi nhi rahi
( Phone was on Speaker )

Uttara : Bhaiyyia Bhabhi toh Ghar pe hai.hum sab ne shopping khtm karli bahut pehle aur unhe ghar chod diya aur Main apne frnds ke saatj bahar hu.kuch kaam gja aapko bhabhi se ?

Sanskaar n Adarsh n Laksh were feeling soo Bad on Uttara's Lie.

Sanskaar : Haa theek hai Uttara. Aisa kuch nhi hai.bas baath karna tha.

Uttara : offo !! Missing Her haa.waise Bhaiyyia Bhabhi bhiaapko bahut Yaad karti hai.jaldi se aajao aap sab aur Laksh Bhai de bhi kehdena ki Ragini Bhabhi unhe bahut Yaad karti hai.

SanLak told in Anger while phone was on Speaker.

SanLak : Haan Haan.dhikhraha hai kitna yaad karti hai Hume.

Uttara : ( Uttara n other 3 ladies heard wst SanLak said n were Enjoying ) Kya aapne kuch kaha kya ??

Sanskaar : (realized wat he Laksh told ) Haa..nhi..mera matlab.kuch nhi kaha.theek hai toh enjoy kar apne frnds ke saath.

Uttara : Haa Ok Bhai.Take Care.

Sanskaar : Bye..

Sanskaar Cuts the Call in Anger

Adarsh n Sanskaar : Dekha.inn Teeno ko.hum ek din bahar kya the yeh teeno ne itna
Bada Plan bana liya aur uper se Uttara ko bolrahi thi Jhootu bolne ko.

Laksh : Haa Bhai. .Shayad humne ghalti ko iss tarah jhooth bolke aane ki.i never thotki Ragini aisa karegi.

Adarsh : Haa Laksh.Maine bhi nhi soccha ki meri Pari iss tarrah jhooth bolke Party karegi.areeg ek baar puch leti toh main mana toh thodi karta kya.

On the Other side4 Ladies heard their Convo n Were Laughimg at their Foolishness.

Swara : ( They wnet aside wen the 3 Bros were bzy in their sadness ) hume Bhuddhu banake yaha maaze karna aaye the na.aab dekho Mr Sanskaar Maheshwari Swara Bose a.k.a Swara Maheshwari ki huddu banake ka nateeja.

Ragini : Haa Swara.Zara Lakshko bho pata chale ki unke Biwi yaani Ragini Maheshwari ko Bhuddhu bana itna asaan nhi hai.

Pari : Aur mere Pyaare Pati Dev ne mujhe bahut baar Bhuddu banaya hain na aab meri baari hai unko bhuddu banana ka.

The 4 Ladies gave Hi Fi to eachother n went inside the Modern Clothes shop . They felt lil uncomfortable in going inside bt still they inside coz they knew SanLak n Adarsh were behind them so if any thing wrong hapoens they will come infront to Protect them ( how cute ).

SwaRagini Pari n Uttara Went inside n purposely choosed short dresses n Carried in their hands in a such a way dat tjr Tro Maheshwari Bros cud see.SanLak n Adarsh were amazed seeing their Wives n Sis buying such Clothes.

Sanskaar : Arrey ..yeh mya teeno toh sacchi . main aise kadpe kharid rahi hao aur uper se Humari Behen ko bhi aise kapde dilarahi hai.aise kaise karsakti yeh teeno. (Angry ).

Laksh n Adars : Haa Sanksaar. Yeh aise kaise karsakti hai yeh teeno.

Den all the Trio gets a Dream n wich made them go Mad n Crazy.

Sanskaar's Dream

Swara Wearing a Short Dress n Hugging A Boy names Akash n thry both get Cosy with eachother.

Laksh's Dream

Ragini wearing a Sleeveless Top with a Short Skirt n Hugging Ravi n Kissing him.

Adarsh's Dream

Pari Wearing A Sleeveless Top with Jeans n Kissing Gautam .

The Three Bros Comes out their Dream n Screams.

SanLak N Adarsh : Nhiii !!!

The End !!!

Precap : SanLak n Adarsh Pataing their Respective Wives n Uttara Enjoying :p.

So frnds this was the 19th Part of Jaadoo Yeh Kya.How was the Emotional Dhulai of Trio Maheshwari Brothers :p.Hope u Enjoyed it :).

#Goldie

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