PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#951

Hey Naina,
Fabulous update sweetheart!! Sanskaar's anger is completely justified. After all Swara said so much too him!! Poor guy
But his love for her will never decrease.
Now Swara realises her love, true love for Sanskaar and that spaghetti thing was funny😆 and sweet too and I'm badly waiting for the next part😳😉
So please do update soon!!Love ya
Sakshi

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Andreea

@chibi_deea

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#952

Awesome. Amazing. Loved every part of it. I never thought that Sanskar would be so hurt, but I like this angry young man attitude of him. Last part was so great.hayye 😳

Eagerly waiting for the next part

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#953

hi naina dear

awesome update

sanskar being cold towards swara inspite of her repeated attempts to talk to him

his anger is justified and he has aright to be angry

hope swra soon calms him down

swra's pain was brilliantly potrayed

loved the update

thanks for pm

cont soon

plz also update your other stories

ritika

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Kaveetha

@Kaveetha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#954

Hi naina.. It was amazing. Loved every part of it. Eagerly waiting for u'r nxt update.. 👏

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isaritha

@isaritha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#955

Really very impressive 👏

This is the only FF which I managed to read whole ... Other I just read OS... It's fantabulous & now am very much keen to know what's gonna happens next

Infact all the ppl who write FFs, OS everyone are brilliant & good ideas u ppl have... Nobody else feel bad if am appreciating & reading only this FF...

Eagerly waiting for next part...

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whity.007

@whity.007

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#956

😉 awesome naina
Oh please don't take too much of time to update
Next part please

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Preeti

@-Prithi-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#957

Superb update
thanks for the pm

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Pooja

@pooja_shineStar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#958

Kya baat hai!

Awesome update!

But pleaseee make sanskars heart melt for swara...if that makes any sense...;)

I want happy happy swasan! :)

Continue soon

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amimus

@amimus

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#959

Finally got the next Use. Swasan are married but Sanskaar is angry with Swara, we'll he has the right to be. I loved the update and waiting for the next one soon..