PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN

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Ihopelove

@Ihopelove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#941

Superb part.

Swasan got married.

Sanskar is hurt beyond measure. Swara needs to try hard to convince him.

I hope sanskar forgive swara soon.

Excited for next part.

Thanks for pm.

Update soon.

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Prerana

@prerulalli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#942

Shaadi ho gayi

yayy ...now MISSION PATIDEV on

Superb😉

Thankz for the PM naina 😊

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#943

Naina dear...finally ur back...

Loved this update...swara deserve this rude behavior but felt bad for her too...hopingg sansku doesnot stretch his ignorance n indifference behaviour with swara for long...want more cute romantic swasan scene..n swara manofing him...

Now plzzz update quickly...we waited long...

Talia

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#944

Amazing update or shall I say it was perfect..wow they are married and I like this attitude in sanskaar...

Hope he understands her soon and they make up. ...

Loved the cliff hanger at the end...bechara is going to find it tough to ignore her for long...

Please update soon...

Waiting...

Raz

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swasanboy

@swasanboy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#945

I was a silent reader.

Now iam commenting. Finally they are married.

And Continue soon

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_InDreamWorld_

@_InDreamWorld_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#946

Hi naina superb update 👏.

Waiting to see what will happened next 😉

Plz update soon

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Tapathi

@Tapathi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#947

Naina...🤗

It was awesome update...finally swasan marriage has happens

Thank God...! I knw he will be Soo angry on her...swara was trying Soo hard...Soo sad...! And that nyt wala scene awww...!😳 Soo beautiful...and he lost his sleep...😆 by seeing her like this...arey bechara...

Waiting for next update...😊

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purrple_orchids

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Posted: 9 years ago

#948

Sanskar may b hurt...
But he is behaving like a jerk...
A total contrast to wat their relation was portrayed in Udaipur...
Hope dey talk things out... 😭

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#949

Wow Nainu 🤗 🤗

First of all, hope things are smooth now, and the pressures you were facing have eased up a bit. Best of Luck for all your endeavors, dear. 🤗

I was waiting so long for this update, and the sheer intensity, angst, yearning and love in this chapter were spellbinding. Made up for the long gap. 😊

Sanskaar is obviously in immense pain since he feels Swara has entered into this relationship out of coercion and a sense of compromise. He himself, would never have wanted their engagement and wedding to happen in this manner.

Sanskaar loves Swara so deeply, so intensely, it must be hurting him so badly to think that Swara never loved him the same way, that she in fact loved his cousin. Her furious words to him, that she would never be able to love him, must be haunting his every thought. Also, Sanskaar is understandably not able to easily forget the pain he felt when he overheard Swara telling Lakshya that she loved him. Swara has realized that this was a mere infatuation, a feeling of care and affection due to her years of familiarity and friendship with Lakshya.

But Sanskaar doesn't know that yet, and his anger and feeling of hurt and betrayal would make it difficult for Swara to explain that to him. Our poor dears . They are so deeply in love with each other but all the misunderstanding, the resentment has driven a wall between them. Hope Sanskaar understands Swara's changed feelings soon.

I would absolutely love to see Swara going all out to woo Sanskaar, convincing him of her love. 😳 Am sure he will be in full angry young man mode. 😉 But how can he resist the love of his life...I just hope that he is able to lower the barriers to his heart sooner rather than later, and give Swara the opportunity to clarify her side of things.

Poor Swara---I felt extremely bad for Sanskaar, at all the hurt he has undergone, and I felt a lot of sympathy for Swara too. She obviously felt so confused earlier, she felt guilty about her feelings for Sanskaar since she thought she was "in love" with Lakshya. And even more, she felt that she could be coming in between Sanskaar and Kavita, since after all, they were engaged at that point of time. Her heart and soul always recognized that undeniable, irresistible bond with Sanskaar, but her mind was confused, torn between her sense of duty and propriety; and her true love.

I really enjoyed the scene of how Shomi gently made Swara realize her genuine feelings for Sanskaar. That parting scene, when Swara was aching to apologize to Sanskaar, to tell him that she loved him; but he awkwardly took leave of her was so moving.

Your description of the wedding, Swara and Sanskaar's attire, as well as their dance together during the sangeet was so intricate, Nainu. I could picture the scenes before my eyes, really. 😊

And the wedding night...God. So much palpable love and longing, yet that intense angst and pain holding Sanskaar back. The way he told Swara, that they have both been bound into this marriage against their will, and he wanted them to just remain strangers in the privacy of their room, was so intense. Poor guy, he longs for her so very much, but he can't bear the thought of Swara being in this relationship just out of a sense of obligation. It would seem like cheapening his adoration for her, in a sense.

Inspite of all that hurt, that elemental connection between them was present as always. And you described that so well. Sanskaar really could not resist the strong pull he felt when Swara gazed at him, and he just could not bear to see tears in her eyes. He just needs some time, to realize that Swara loves him every bit as much as he loves her. And then he would never hold his emotions back from her. 😳

Sanskaar unable to sleep, thinking of his wife in that rather revealing and sensuous night wear was 😉 ☺️

Please update Chapter 16 soon, Nainu. Very soon 😊

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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Patel.S.Patel

@Patel.S.Patel

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#950

dear naina..
am seriously disappointed by you
I missed all parts from 10-15
please do pm me please I only read ur ffs on forums nothing else I visit forum for ur updates but u are not giving any pms..
I love all ur ffs
please pm me adha ishq
love potion
zinda rehti h unki mohaabaten
pyaar hota h deewana sanam
kerala SwaSan ff
please please please please

am ur ffs die heart fan I have to read all these parts now so bye.. will tell about them later
but next time don't forget ur crazy ffs fan

sorry if I hurted but I want ur ffs please!!

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