PART 16,Pg 138-ZINDA REHTI HAIN UNKI MOHABBATEIN

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Hello my dear readers,
I am really very very sorry for being late again..I am trying my level best to update whenever I get free time..😊
And I am sorry again, I am not able to reply individually to your comments, this time also.😳
I have read each and every comment and I loved them all..
Thank you sooo much everyone 🤗 I appreciate your likes and comments, wholeheartedly..
Here is the PART 8 for you all to read.. Hope you all enjoy reading it too..😊

PART 8

Sw: it's ok, Mr. Maheshwari.. I will be alright..!
And then she started to limp slowly, trying to mask her pain, but quite unsuccessfully. Sanskaar felt a surge of anger and he just scooped her up in his strong arms. Swara was shocked at his action and she tried to protest.
Sw: Arre, aap kya..
But before she could complete her sentence,
Sa: (angrily) Shut up, Swara..!
Swara closed her mouth like a meek little girl and looked into his eyes, and saw that they were filled with anger and concern in equal amounts. Instinctively, her hands reached around his neck and hung on to him. She lay in his arms like a placid river, who had forgotten to flow. Her eyes never left hers, as he carried her back into the haveli, along the long entrance corridor, the drawing room, they passed his Study, and then the hallway leading to her bedroom.
After entering into the bedroom, he made her sit down on the bed quite carefully.
From the bedside table, he got the first aid box and then he cleansed her wound with the cotton and dettol. After that he sat down near her and plastered a band-aid to her toe. Swara was watching his every action with her eyes shining with gratitude.
Sw: Thank you Sanskaar..(smiles pleasantly)
Suddenly, Sanskaar raised his hand and touched her lips. She gasped with surprise and looked at his hand.
Sa: Don't embarrass me by thanking me for this..
He looked into her eyes with a look of pure sincerity mixed with hurt, and it was then that he saw her staring at his hand. He took off his hand and stood up from her bed.
Sa: Take care, Swara..Goodnight..
And before she could say anything, he walked towards the door and closed it before leaving. Swara watched him go with forlorn eyes.
Sanskaar was walking along the hallway when he remembered her words, "Thank you Sanskaar.." and his face lit up with a smile of pure joy. It was for the first time that she had addressed him by his first name, otherwise she always called him Mr. Maheshwari. He knew that she had called his name unknowingly, but it meant that he was having a deep effect in her and that she felt a real bonding with him, at least for that moment.
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Next evening, a grand welcome party was set up for the guests who had arrived for the wedding. The party hall was buzzing with pleasant background music and cheerful talks.
On the arm of her fianc Karan Rajput, Uttara moved among the guests, looking gorgeous in a purple coloured flowy chiffon gown with Swarovski crystals embedded along the decorative empire line. Karan and his family had arrived in the morning and his mother, Mrinalini Rajput was standing with Annapurna, watching their children with love filled eyes.
Kavita was wearing an emerald green floor length satin gown. It was adorned with green stones and silver embellishments along the neckline and the waistline. She was sitting with her father, Mr. Rajvardhan Singhania, who was a renowned poet and a close friend of Sanskaar's late father, Shri. Durgaprasad Maheshwari. He had arrived late in the afternoon. Kavita's mother, Mrs. Gayatri Singhania had died when she was only nine years old. Her Papa had been everything for her from then on.
The guests were indeed dazzled by the sumptuous food, gorgeously decorated tables, and authentic music. And this was not missed by Sanskaar's scrutinizing eyes, and he was deeply satisfied with every arrangement. But he wondered where she was right now. She had been here at the party venue, till evening, instructing around the various staff and workers, so that everything would look perfect from drapery, to the table linen and all the way to the beautiful flowers, which now adorned the place.
Lakshya was already present at the event, looking great in a plum coloured tuxedo, teamed with white shirt. He also wondered where Swara was. Earlier in the evening, after a last minute look at the arrangements, both of them had departed to their respective rooms to get ready for the party, assuring each other that they would meet at the party hall later. But she was being late, and he couldn't go off looking for her right now. He was too much busy.
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Swara was checking her reflection in the mirror. Her hair was set in a chignon with beautiful curls.
Like this hairstyle.

She was wearing this dress with the same accessories, she had still not worn the shoes.

Her lips were shining and glossy and her eyes had the perfect make up. She knew she was being late for the party, but she wanted her to look her best tonight. But why was she feeling so, she was not quite sure.
Suddenly she heard a knock on the door. She frowned and decided to check who it was. She opened the door and there stood Sanskaar. She noticed with a gasp that he was looking hot in this tuxedo.

Sanskaar checked her out from head to toe with his passionate stare. Swara was at a loss of words and she blushed profusely. She blinked her beautiful kohl lined eyes and waited for him to compliment her look.
Sanskaar just kept looking at her intently as he moved closer to her. Swara's heartbeats set off in an alarmingly fast pace as her drew nearer. She forgot to breathe and her mouth parted with a sharp intake of air.
He stopped right in front of her and then raised his hand to graze along her hair which bundled up in the chignon. She could feel him pull out a few hairpins and her lovely curls sprang out of it and lay cascading down the right side of her head. Just like this.

He moved his fingers along her curls in an attempt to make them fall perfectly. Swara squirmed when the tips of his fingers grazed along the side of her slender throat, during the process. When Sanskaar finished, he stepped back a little and gazed at her beautiful form.
Sa: (husky voice) Now you look angelic..!
Swara's eyes lowered and her glossy lips broke into a shy smile, with her cheeks reddening a tinge more darker. Sanskaar was quite delighted at the way she reacted to his compliment.
Sa: Ok..Everyone at the party wanted to meet the lady behind the splendid arrangements of the party. So I came looking for you..Ab chale..
Sw: Haan..(nods with a smile)
Sanskaar offered her his arm and suddenly she remembered something.
Sw: Oops..I forgot my footwear..
Swara went and sat on her bed. She bent forward and put on a pointed heeled shoe on her one foot. Sanskaar walked towards her and looked down at her with an amused expression.
Sa: Are you sure you can manage with these high heels..? (raises an eyebrow with a smirk)
Sw:(looks up while wearing the shoe on the next foot) Why not..?
Saying so, she smiled at him confidently and got up from the bed. Next moment she slipped backwards and she caught onto Sanskaar's coat lapels for support. Both of them fell on to the soft mattress and Sanskaar's face was on her neck. He inhaled her smell and felt totally addicted. Swara could feel his hot breath on her neck and she closed her eyes when she was turned on for a moment. But still, she couldn't lose control like this. So, she pushed him slightly away from her and he lay next to her on his side. She turned her body face to him.
Sw: Sorry Mr.Maheshwari..(nervously)
Sanskaar laughed out loud and then suddenly glanced at her with an amused expression.
Sa: I told you that you shouldn't wear those high heels..(laughs again)
Swara also felt funny and she too laughed looking into his face. Sanskaar got up from the bed and kept his hands on his hips.
Sa: Hmmph..So Miss. Swara Gadodia..Ab chale..It's getting really late now..
Sw: (grinning) Ok..
Swara and Sanskaar walked into the party hall and Kavita waved at Sanskaar. She came towards them with a wide smile.
Ka: Swara, you are looking really pretty tonight..
Sw: (nods, smiling) Thank you, Kavita M'am..
But then Kavita looped her arm with Sanskaar's and looked at him with a pout. Swara felt a fresh surge of jealousy at the sight, but she hid it under a smile.
Ka: Aap kahan chale gaye the Sanskaar..? Papa aapse milna chaahte hain..Aayiye na..
Sa: (seriously) Teek hain..Chalo..
Ka: Tum bhi chalo, Swara..I want to introduce you to some of my friends..
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It was late in the night, when the party finally got over. All the elderly people, including Kavita's Dad, Annapurna and Karan Rajput's parents had long since departed the venue, and retired into their respective rooms.
Now, even the younger crowd also started to dwindle considerably. Later, Kavita and Uttara left with Karan and they didn't wait for Sanskaar, who was talking with one of his business partners. Slowly the party venue was devoid of all the guests Lakshya went off to talk with some of the catering staff, while Swara was talking with the decorating staff. Sanskaar watched her from a distance and suddenly she glanced at his direction, feeling his gaze upon her. She finished talking with them and walked towards Sanskaar with a happy smile. Sanskaar and Swara were too busy during the party, chatting with other people, and they were craving for each other's company badly. Swara just needed an excuse to talk to him again.
Sw: Hello Mr. Maheshwari..Are you happy with tonight's party..?
Sanskaar kept staring into her eyes intently and Swara felt a warm sensation spread along her face.
Sw: (uncertainly) Err..Mr. Maheshwari..You are happy, right..?
Sa: Kya tum sach mein yehi poonchna chaahti thi mujhse..?
Swara was taken aback hearing his sharp question. She fumbled for an answer.
Sw: Woh..Main..
Sanskaar knew that he just caught her off guard and he let her evade his question easily.
Sa: Khair chodo..Teek hain..Main tumhare sawaal ka jawaab deta hoon..You wanted to know whether I am happy after the party, right..? (looks at her intently)
Swara looked at him with her innocent eyes and nodded, rather meekly.
Sa: Toh haan, I am very happy..(nods pleasantly with a serious smile)...Par, Swaraaa..
Sw: Par kya, Mr. Maheshwari..? (blinks uncertainly)
But at that very moment, Lakshya interupted them.
La: Excuse me, Mr.Maheshwari..We have done all the necessary arrangements for tomorrow's Haldi ceremony.
Sa: Well..that's great, Lakshya..!(smiles politely)
Lakshya looked at Swara and smiled.
La: Toh phir, chale Swara..? Goodnight, Mr.Maheshwari..
Sa: Goodnight, Lakshya..
Sanskaar glanced at Swara, trying to convey a message, 'do you really want to go with him now..?'. But Swara's face was blank and she didn't want to embarrass Lakshya by disobeying his suggestion. Sanskaar got her message and he simply said,
Sa: Goodnight, Swara..(without a smile)
Sw: Err..Goodnight..(tries to smile)
But he walked away arrogantly, even before she could smile at him. Swara looked at his retreating figure with a feeling of loss.
La: Swaraa..
Sw: (startled) Haan..
La: Chalo, hum bhi chalte hain..!
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Uttara's and Karan's haldi ceremony started off gracefully. The turmeric mix or the 'uptan' was to be applied on their faces, arms, forearms, knees and their feet by their closest family members, relatives and friends. Swara and Lakshya were standing in a corner watching the proceedings. Swara was wearing a yellow colour simple anarkali, with bead work border along the hemline and the edges of her dupatta. Swara noticed with pain that Sanskaar was not even paying any attention to her. She knew that he was angry at her from the previous night and she was feeling really desperate to gain his attention again.
Swara noticed with interest that Sanskaar was looking really handsome in his mango yellow silk kurta with white dhoti. She watched him as he went forward towards Uttara to apply haldi on her. He was smiling wide as he started applying the uptan and Uttara was smiling at him with real joy and affection. A happy smile appeared upon Swara's lips when she saw him smile, she has always loved his smile. And when Sanskaar turned around after his turn, his eyes fell upon Swara who was smiling at him. He noted that she was looking really beautiful in that simple traditional outfit and his intent gaze lingered upon her for a moment longer. Swara noticed the intensity in his attractive eyes and her smile faded away, replaced by a look of intense longing. Sanskaar looked away instantly and Swara felt really bad.
Before the ceremony was over, Sanskaar left the room and Swara followed Sanskaar. He was walking very much quickly and she had to half walk and half run to catch up with him. As he reached the drawing room, she was at an audible distance from him.
Sw: Mr.Maheshwari..
Sanskaar pretended as if he didn't hear her and hurried forward.
Sw: Mr. Maheshwariii..Rukiye naa..
Sanskaar feigned deafness again and he just turned towards the door leading to his Study. Swara hurried after him and she caught up with him, just as he entered the Study Room. She too entered inside and without warning, he turned around and closed the door, locking it with his hand. Swara was alarmed when she realized that he had just locked her inside with him.
Sa: (menacing tone) Kya chahiye tumhein..?
His eyes were narrowed with anger and Swara was quite suddenly afraid of him. Sanskaar moved closer to her and she backed away slowly.
Sw: (fearfully) Mr. Maheshwari..main..
Sa: (frowns, and demands angrily) Tum mere peeche peeche kyun aa rahi thi..?
Sw: Main aapse maafi maangna chaahthi thi..Kal raat ke liye..
Sa: (raises his eyebrows) Acha..Par kis baat ke liye..?
Sw: (slowly and nervously) Woh..Aap chaahte the na, ke main aapke paas ruk jaaoon..Hum baat kar rahe the, aur Lakshya beech mein aagaye..Aur mujhe uske saath jaana pada..Mujhe pata hain, ke aapko bura lagaa..
Sanskaar's face expression changed into a softer one, but still he didn't show it when he talked again.
Sa:(taunting) Ohh..Toh phir tum ruki kyun nahin, mere saath..?
Sw: Main..Lakshya ko kabhi manaa nahin kar sakti, Sanskaar..! I told you na..he is my best friend..Aur main usse..
Sa: (narrows his eyes and shouts) Aur tum usse..?
Swara was alarmed at his loud tone and she blurted out the truth in her mind.
Sw: Aur main usse pyaar bhi karti hoon..
Sanskaar felt like a huge blow had hit his head.
Sa: KYA..?!!
Sw: (nods frantically) I love him, Mr.Maheshwari..
Sanskaar came out of the momentary shock and hot fury bubbled inside his veins.
Sa: (menacingly) Toh phir tumhein mujhse kya chahiye..? Kaun lagta hoon main tumhara..?
Swara's eyes widened as she herself analysed her thoughts, "Do I actually love, Lakshya now..?" " Why am I so much disturbed if Sanskaar doesn't talk to me or pay me any attention..?" "Why am I suddenly more concerned about Sanskaar, whereas I hardly ever think about Lakshya now a days..?"
Sanskaar just grabbed her shoulders, and pulled her closer to him.
Sa: Bolo na, Swara..
Swara gazed into his molten chocolate eyes and whispered softly into his face.
Sw: Sanskaar..Aap mere liye khaas hain..
Even Swara was surprised by her answer, and also by the fact that she was actually calling him by his first name.
But Sanskaar was not satisfied. He wanted to know more and he demanded again.
Sa: Khaas matlab..?
Sw: (softly ) I don't know..But I feel like you are my long lost friend..
Sa: Sirf friend..? (frowns painfully)
Sw: Actually nahin..usse bhi kahin zyaada..Ek bahut acha dost..Jab aap mujhse baat nahin karte toh, i feel really bad, Sanskaar..sometimes you are being so rude to me..(painful expression) And I can't bear that..
Sanskaar noticed the pain in her eyes and looked into them intently, his gaze softened and she was lost in his eyes.
Sanskaar's raised his right hand slowly from her left shoulder and he caressed her cheek with love, Swara squirmed, but didn't resist his touch. His grazed his thumb along her lower lip and her lips trembled. She gasped and her wide eyes slowly closed with anticipation. Sanskaar raised his left hand also from her right shoulder and he began to caress her temple and her cheek slowly, while his right hand thumb finger was still rubbing her lower lip. Swara began to tremble from head to foot due to the intensity of her feelings towards him. Even if her mind was confused, her body was betraying her.
Sa: (whispers softly) Swaraa..
Sw: (eyes still closed) Huh..
Sa: I love you..
Swara's eyes opened in shock and she stared at him unbelievably. She was finding difficult to register the words he just uttered.
Sw: Kya..?
Sa: Haan, Swara..I love you..!
Sw: (worried voice) Par Kavita M'am aur aap toh shaadi karne waale hain na..?
Sa: (a bit loudly) Par main tumse pyaar karta hoon, Swara..!
Swara was finding it difficult to breathe and she just blurted out, feeling frantic.
Sw:(some more bit loudly than him) Par yeh sahi nahin hain..Aap aur main..Kabhi ek nahin ho sakte..!
Swara just turned around and opened the door quickly.
Sa: Swara, listen to me..!
Sw: Nahin..Mr.Maheshwari..Main jaa rahi hoon..!
Swara didn't stop to listen to him and she just ran away from there.
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End of PART 8
Please let me know your opinions and comments
Love
Naina😊

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Monica_Suhasini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#663

res nainu🤗

unres...very late dear

loved how sanky made swara shut her mouth

n as a kid she followed

awww how caring n protective sanky is...sooo sweet

naina loved ur explanation of sankys happiness

wen swara called him by his name

very nice

ur descriptions are splendid n awesome as always

dressings decorations emotions ...alll

swasan dresses are excellent...specially swara

⭐️👏⭐️

the way he did to her hair ...opening it z...out of this world

so romantic naina

that fall was funny dear...

lakshya 😆interrupted swasan

enjoyed it

omg the conversation tooo intense

penned it perfectly

lots of love...suha

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#664

Awesome update 👏
I loved it
The way sanskar proposed i like it but swara 😡
Update soon

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foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

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beautiful beautiful beautiful. everything right from his caring, to his waiting for her for the party, her wanting to be with him, their accidental fall, her wanting to be with him but going with laksh, the haldi ceremony...all was so beautiful. so swara has now confessed what she believes and sanskar has confessed his feelings, scaring swara off. i wonder how long she will be able to resist her own heart. hope she confesses before marriage. i guess then they can be together to face the twin army of kavita and laksh.

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Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#666

Wow sanskar proposed. ...awe. ..

Loved the update...

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Robia Yousaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#667

this is just AWESOME update ☺️.thank GOD update to milli.i eagerlly wait for update.its my favourite one. finally Sanskar confess his love😳 but Swara is confused😕.i hope yeh confussion jald solve ho jaye.love their love dovey and passionate moments,Swara just melt wwith Sanksar's touch☺️.she cant resist his touch and closeness😳..yaar update jaldi diya karo..thanks for the Pm

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ayeshamukhtar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#668

Awww lovely update...
Sanskar confession .. 😳

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#669

Lovely update Naina...Swara is so confused...giving mixed signals to Sanskaar and wow he even confessed to her!! But why did she reply like tht?? I think she is feeling guilty for feeling tht she loved laksh but is more Attracted to Sanskaar and thinks about him more ... And also about Kavita...

Waiting for what happens next!!

Tas

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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#670

naina
i was waiting for a updste from a long time.
well ya the way sanskar is attracting swara is awesome
he is in love and he wants to win swara
swara is a confused soul...
i am eagerly waiting for next update
love
simi 😊

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