New swasan FF:Be mine sanskar...(Chapter 5 updated in pg 5) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice..

The story is same as the Tamil Movie Raja Rani??

M i Right!!!

Continue soon..

Waiting for the next part..

A long one!!

Do Pm me

I think so u r right as I am not a tamilian I don't have any idea
But thanks for ur comments..and yes I will surely pm you and will update soon
Yup I'll write a little longer too 😛 😛
Esha 😳

Very funny. Witch wifey lol😆 . Update soon.

Very nice story

Awesome update

HEY HI PEEPS! I AM VERY VERY HAPPY AFTER READING ALL YOUR HONEY SWEET COMMENTS..SADLY,I COULDN'T REPLY TO ALL OF YOU BUT HERE WITH My CHAPTER 3.I AM GOING TO MAKE YOU ALL HAPPY...AND YES!SOME OF THE SUSPENSE UNFOLDS HERE IN THIS CHAPTER...ENJOY 😃
Chapter 3...
as in the earlier part swara and sanskar leave for their respective offices.

they reach their jobs with a gloomy face..every colleague of their congratulates them..but snegha and amit,swara and sanskar's best friends respectively are shocked.

<font size="5">Snegha:swaraaa! congrats but what makes you join office just a day after your marriage</font>



<font size="5">swara:(frowns) you don't know sneg(snegha's nickname) how i am suffering after this marriage?this marriage is a curse..he is a drunkard,a lier,a moron! ( there were lot of disturbing moments between SwaSan).. its all b'cuz of you sneg!its you!i couldn't forget laksh!my laksh!(starts sobbing) and you forced me to listen to my dad and marry that a**hole..my life is ruined and i am finished..</font>

Elsewhere;in sanskar's office



*"GUYS" ARE REFFERED TO COLLEAGUES..

<font size="5">Guy1:hey sanskar!congrats man!wish you a great life ahead..:-) </font>

<font size="5">(sanskar is dull but fakely smiles)</font>

<font size="5">Guy1:what is it sanky? why are you looking so depressesd? any issue?</font>

<font size="5">Guy2:areyy! i think sanskar has already witnessed ''shaadi'' ke side-effects..</font>


<font size="5"> sanskar eyes get swollen and tears well up</font>

<font size="4">*amit drags sanskar as he notices him..he takes him to the cabin*</font>everybody laugh out loud except sanskar and amit

<font size="5">as in both the way swara and sanskar blame their friends for their marriage but still snegha and amit console and give them a hope for their second love</font>

<font size="5">Sanskar:amit!i have agreed to your consent of marrying swara but its time for your return...i want to drink alcohol today it's a ''piece of mind'' for me..take me at the bar today! promise?</font>

<font size="5">amit:(reluctantly) hmm..ok but don't exceed your limits..you have no control!</font>

<font size="5">so respectively, after their work , swara left for home and sanskar left for the bar</font>

In the bar

<font size="5">Amit:stop it sanskar! you've already finished a bottle</font>

<font size="5">sanskar:no no! (dreamily) it would have been so nice if ragini would be alive...i would have married..we would have kids...amazing!!</font>

<font size="5">amit:get up! ( harshly) get up! get back home! bloody selfish! you have a wife and talking about another girl! chheee!</font>

<font size="3">sanskar obeyed him like a obedient child as he was drunk like anything!!he got up amit gave his hand and drove him home..</font>

<font size="4">tringgg...tringgg...tringg(the bell rang)</font>
<font size="5">that day swara brought snegha home ...she(swara) got up to open the door...she was astonished to see sanskar so drunk , she rolled her eyes over snegha , trying to make her understand ''what kind of husband sanskar is?'' </font>

<font size="5">swara:see!sneg see! and you were consoling to give this moron a chance!!</font>

<font size="5">sanskar:shut up!!!just shut your bloody mouth! you b*tch...how dare you call me a moron?</font>

<font size="5">snegha:(dashing in anger towards sanskar) hey mr.maheshwari please mind your language!!who are you to abuse her?how dare you?</font>

<font size="5">sanskar:i am her husband!!and who are you girl? to show your hell attitude in my house..get out!! just get out!! just dont ever try to show your face again!!go!</font>

<font size="5">And,snegha ran away feeling guilty for ruining swara's life leaving swara with ths dreaded moron</font>

<font size="5">swara was numb all this while..she was broken..sanskar entered the house;he couldn't control himself anymore and vomited on the floor and directing himself to the washroom,leaving swara to clean the floor..swara had accepted this as her fate now,laksh was never going to come back to her life again..he had died in her eyes..after cleaning the floor,she went to the bedroom,laying on the bed with a loud music and tears in her eyes..she cried and cried..sanskar was a little normal now,he was feeling guilty for the past consequences but didn't apologise..he continued his merriment...</font>

<font size="5">Suddenly,swara started shaking,splatting her hand on sanskar,rolling her eyes...her saliva was frothing and was continously oozing out of her mouth..she was shaking,sanskar was completely normal by then;his hangover was gone..that sudden action of swara appeared to be a ''fit''.he quickly got up and checked her pulse,she was unconscious by then..he cleaned her saliva tgat wasn't stopping and then to stop her shaking,he rubbed his palm over hers.it didn't work then he took the tv remote.it also didn't work,then he used the keys to stop her;he continuously rubbed the keys which made her stop..and then he called the ambulance..the ambulance came..he took her in his lap and climbed the ambulance..they reached, she was shifted to the emergency unit..he was anxious!!</font>

so peeps here is the end of chapter 3...hope u all like it and do not forget to like and comment...thanks
ESHA 😳

Forgive me for the coding mistakes...sorry for the typos aswell

Nice Update
I didn't watch Tamil Movie Raja Rani
I watched Bengali Movie Shudh Tomari Jonno

I like the story continue soon pls

I am damn sure this s raja rani movie. In tat nayanta ll get like this n arya ll take her to hospital. Later they both ll came to knw abt their past love and they both fall for each other. Loved this part pls continue soon

Really nice yapls do continue soon i am waiting for the next part

HI PEEPS!I AM BACK WITH MY FF CHAPTER 4..I AM AMAZED WITH THE SOLID RESPONSE I AM GETTING ''THANK YOU ALL''.THIS CHAPTER IS GOING TO BE A LITTLE TRAGIC BUT INTERESTING..THIS CHAPTER INCLUDES SWARA'S DARK PAST REVELATION AND SANSKAR'S GROWING FEELINGS ABOUT SWARA AND YES! THIS CHAPTER INTRODUCES ''LAKSH''...SO PEOPLE ENJOY READING IT AND PLEASE COMMENT AND FORGIVE ME FOR THE #TYPO'S :-)

sanskar POV: i was confused as i am generally in extreme circumstances... i was feeling bad for what i told swara..she didn't deserve this,i was torturing because of my own inner frustation of losing ''ragu''.I seriously wanted swara to get rid of me but i purposely tried to show my care..she wasn't my wife anymore she was my life..her meanness was my life,her attitude was my life! sometimes i would think ''she has some magic inside''that attracted me..yes! i was attracted to her after i gave her so much pain..she was battling with her life,her inner shock..i saw her trembling,i saw her fearing...''i was her harm''..mr.maheshwari! i heard,the doctor called.i broke off from my thoughts..yes? i was confident..what relation do you have with the patient?the doctor threw me in a dilemma! a..a.. umm...umm h..h..husband,i am her husband! i was relunctant..'ok!we need her details' her name? sw..swara! 'ok! her age?' umm..20! no 21! the doctor looked at me suspiciously 'ok!do you know anything about her past health issues?' umm..No i was confident..'ok! anything about her family hereditary health issues?' sorry! i know nothing! ''i was sure''..Dr.khatri! the senior doctor called 'why are you relying on a drunkard like him?','he is good for nothing!let us see ourselves' the sr doctor snapped..i was unreactive because i was guilty..the turned away..i waited outside.

'mr.maheshwari'..yes doctor! 'you can meet your wife!,she is ok now!' ok!thanks doctor!

i went inside with some fruits and juice..she opened her eyes 'a tear drop fell' i was broken again;feeling my guilt..she turned her face..i went ahead..

<font size="4">sanskar: Swara! here i have brought some fresh fruits and juice..'should i serve you?'</font>

<font size="4">swara:i can help myself! you can go! i do not want to be an interference in your life! and thank you for what you did for me! but i do not wish for your care further..</font>

her thorny words pinned inside my heart causing a lot of pain...i deserved it!

<font size="4">sanskar: umm.. swara doctor asked me to know that 'did this i mean this ''fit'' happened to you earlier'? i only asked you this because of the doctor!!(i reassured)</font>

<font size="4">swara: yeah! it did once!</font>

<font size="4">'How?' I(sanskar) wanted to know</font>

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And,she began with her story which revealed everything that her soft heart experienced...i was shattered ''why did i hurt her so much?'' after listening to her story..

<font size="4">Swara: i met laksh for the first time in darjeeling..me and dad used to live in darjeeling earlier..my mum died during childbirth so my dad was everything for me..once,me & dad were going to my college for some admission related issues..and there-</font>

'booom...screechhh'..
i am sorry actually i am running late for work...a young handsome boy replied
'whatever i don't care! now whose going to pay for the dent that you and your stupid bike caused?' swara replied
sorry..sorry! and that boy sped towards the college
'bloody rascal' swara snapped
calm down shoroo( her petname) lets go! her father consoled

@#$**#@* was swara's description for that notorious boy

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in the college

receptionist: i am sorry! mr.shah if u don't pay 3 lakhs by tomorrow! you won't get a admission!

laksh: but i have got a scholarship.. is it good for nothing?

receptionist: no! now dont my our time and get off..i have other people to attend!

and that boy turned away feeling sad for being poor..he decide to talk to his snobbish father mr.shivkumar shah(ss)

Tringgg..tringgg...his father picked up

laksh: hello dad! actually i need some money for the formalities of my college..

ss(shivkumar shah):more? do u want me to sell of my kidney? keep the phone down and please my son forget me if you only want a relationship of money..get lost!

Thud..'the phone was kept down'

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laksh:(talking to himself) why does my father think i love him because of the requirements of money? ( crying)

'excuse me?' sorry i heard everything! my father is the trustee of this college! may i help you to get admission?

Keep guessing who is it till I write the next chapter 😉
Esha 😳