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Posted: 9 years ago
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well being a bong i knw d movie ;) would luv to read
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey hi peeps!! i read all your comments and i am really happy reading those but sorry i could'nt reply..but here i present the second chapter...
Chapter 2
As we entered our hell ''paradise''...we completely forgot we are married rather we considered ourselves merry rivals!!.. we changed to our night clothes settling on the bed and making the great pillow wall of my home between us..we maintained a precise distance from each other..she slept and i switched on the tv...shuffling the channels getting bored,but suddenly i switched to a music channel where the song '' chikni chameli ''was being played.I decided to tease this tiny wife of mine..i raised the volume and started dancing on the bed itself..i knew she was getting irritated but it was fun to do
Sanskar:yaya!! Hmm hmm chikni chameli woohoo chupke rakheli..naiyaa laga ke aayi

swara:its not naiyaa! pauaa chada ke aayi! and yes stop irritating me for God's sake and sleep(harshly)


omg! she looked fierce!! i thought let's not take panga and sleep quietly...and yes she was right with the lyrics :-)

Next Morning-

🤢 I was feeling sick today!! but for the first time my eyes were searching for my fiercy wife swara! where was she? then i noticed her shakha-paula(bangles which bengali women where after marriage) on the side table with her mangalsutra at the side.why did she open all these? i was confused! and then my confusion was put aside when the lioness arrived from the balcony wearing kurti salwar ...she looked more fierce..her hair was flowing freely,her face was covered with her dupatta as the burqa is tied on the face..and she carried her scooty helmet in her hand..i predicted ''she was joining back in her office'' its naturally strange for a married woman to join the office the next day of her marriage but it wasn't strange for me cuz she is my rival and i dont care!!

😲 😲 😲 she dashed the door getting out of my house to go to her office..i felt relieved but i would be more relieved if she left my house for forever!! after she left, i bathed,got ready for my office,then proceeded to go to the dining room to search for some food " i expected the lioness to cook breakfast for me but my sixth sense told me 'no chance sanky!you aren't so lucky' and i declined the thought"oh no guys! she left food for me..some waste breadcrumbs with ants on it...marvellous!! omg! i thought she didn't even clean her plate..bad girl! i mumbled by making faces

i am a very bad cook but somehow i managed to cook '' tasteless maggi ''. Then i left for work thinking about the miserable moments with my witch wifey swara...

Next chapter soon till then keep commenting
ESHA 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice start ,loved reading it do continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Thank you @carpedeimrose yes will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start .. fresh story 😊 loved it

continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: butteru

Nice start .. fresh story😊loved it


continue soon😳



Thanks dear...really happy 😃
Yes I will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you deary 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Wow nice start ,loved reading it do continue soon😃



Thanks thanks and many thanks 😉 !! Glad u liked it 😃
Will continue soon ⭐️

Esha 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 thanks for your awesummm comments 😆 😆 😆
Glad u liked it 😉
Esha 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice..

The story is same as the Tamil Movie Raja Rani??
M i Right!!!

Continue soon..
Waiting for the next part..
A long one!!

Do Pm me

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