New swasan FF:Be mine sanskar...(Chapter 5 updated in pg 5)

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Esha

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Posted: 9 years ago

He stood there,Holding the award...staring at me with a wicked smile on his lips..i went on clapping and congratulating him with my eyes...

HI PEEPS,I HAVE BEEN BORING PEOPLE WITH MY WIERD FFS AND OSs,BUT A MARVELLOUS PLOT HAS POPPED IN MY BRAIN.IT IS ACTUALLY BASED ON A BENGALI SUPER HIT FILM..BUT I'VE TWISTED IT A LITTLE MAKING IT MORE INTERESTING...PLEASE PLEASE READ IT AND COMMENT BELOW...ANYTHING:ANDE(EGGS),TOMATOES,SANDALS "SAB KUCH CHALEGA"PAR KUCH TOH DE DO :-)
Character sketches
mr.sanskar ram prasad maheshwari:a drunkard,arrogant,selfish man who treats his wife as a curse...has a dark past(to be revealed later)
mrs.swara sanskar maheshwari: a sick woman,hates her husband,good natured but brave...has a dark past(to be revealed later)
mr.laksh shah: alive or died ( to be revealed later) a bright student,good natured,poor,lover boy,swara's first love...has a miserable past(to be revealed later)
ms.ragini dev:a bubbly,chirpy girl,orphan,sanskar's first love...died ( reason to be revealed later)
so people,this story is surely going to impress you..cuz this movie was amazing for me...there is a lot of tragedy as well as some comedy scenes but has a nice ending...so please keep commenting and i'll continue 😊 😊
ESHA 😳

index
chapter 1 on page 1; scroll down
chapter 2 on page 2
chapter 3 on page 4
chapters 4 and 5 in page 5

Edited by eshat.k - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

interesting...I am silent reader...like the start...update soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi...i guess i know d mve😆... dat was jus an amazing mve...awesum stry...continue soon..wud like t read ur take 😉...continue soon...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey...continue
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Esha

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Posted: 9 years ago

note: peeps! i will be writing as sanskar...so whenever "I" is used it means it is sanskar!!
Chapter 1

😆 😆 😆 excited!!
I WAS GETTING READY FOR THE MOST TRAGIC DAY OF MY LIFE; MY MARRIAGE.I DID'NT EVER THINK I COULD DO THAT WHEN THAT ACCIDENT HAPPENED AND SHE DIED "MY LOVE DIED"...MY CHILDHOOD BUDDY AMIT WAS CONTINUOUSLY PURSUING ME TO FORGET THAT TRAGIC INCIDENT AND START A NEW LIFE..I DON'T KNOW IF I AM READY TO MARRY THAT GIRL SWARA..I MEAN I DON'T KNOW HER !! AND I CANNOT FORGET ''RAGU";YES MY RAGINI!! SUDDENLY THAT ACCIDENT FLASHED ON MY MIND:-( ''I WOKE UP WITH A START! MY FRIEND AMIT WAS STANDING INFRONT OF ME WITH HIS HANDS ON HIS WAIST,LOOKING AT ME FIERCELY...HE LOOKED DANGEROUS!!
Amit: what the hell are you doing? you are sleeping at your own wedding? it's late!
Sanskar:was taking a little nap what's so embarrassing about that? ok come on let's go! ( yes! Yes! I agreed to his persuasion; he is a Nagger"and I don't like that)
*We REACHED SWARA'S HOUSE...I WAS'NT TEMPTED FOR MY MARRIAGE AT ALL!I STILL LOVED RAGU...BUT NOW I WAS GOING TO BETRAY RAGU AND DESTROY SWARA'S LIFE FOREVER..I WAS WELCOMED BY SWARA'S MULTIMILIONER DAD ''MR.ARINDAM SENGUPTA''.HE WAS SO HAPPY BUT I WAS'NT ..SEEING MY SAD FACE AMIT PINCHED ME AND TOLD ME TO SMILE.''I FAKELY SMILED''THEN WE WENT INSIDE;ALL THE RITUALS WERE PERFORMED,BRIDE WAS CALLED ''I WAS EAGER TO SEE MY 'SO CALLED BRIDE',''SWARA''..SHE CAME IN HOLDING BETEL LEAVES ON HER FACE (THAT RITUAL IS CALLED ''SUBHO DRISHTI '' IN BENGALI,IN WHICH THE BRIDE AND THE GROOM NEED TO STARE IN EACH OTHERS EYES FOR SOMETIME) I WAS WAITING TO SEE HER AND SHE WASN'T OPENING THAT HELL ''LEAVES''..THEN SHE FINALLY OPENED AND EXPOSED HER GLOOMY FACE..''BUT IT WAS BEAUTIFUL''I WAS SHOCKED;I HAD A REASON FOR BEING SAD THEN WHY IS SHE GLOOMY?IS IT A FORCED MARRIAGE FOR HER TOO?WAS I UGLY? THESE QUESTIONS TICKLED MY MIND BUT I STAYED CALM..WE STARED AT EACH OTHER'S EYES RELUCTANTLY BUT WE DID...THEN SLOWLY ALL THE RITUALS BEGINED AND ENDED..BUT IN ONE RITUAL WHERE THE BRIDE AND GROOM HAVE TO PUT RICE ON THE FIRE BY HOLDING EACH OTHER..SHE SUDDENLY SHOUTED ''LAKSHHH'' AND THEN HER FATHER FAINTED..WHAT WAS HAPPENING ''I WASN'T UNDERSTANDING''..SHE RAN TO HER FATHER SOBBING..
swara: sorry! baba i am very sorry! i won't repeat it again!! please baba wake up!! ( continuosly sobbing) please baba i am sorry!
A DOCTOR WAS CALLED;AND YES MY FATHER IN LAW WOKE UP..IT WAS A SHOCK FOR HIM! BUT WHY WAS THE NAME ''LAKSH'' SO SHOCKING? WHY DID SWARA SCREAM 'LAKSH'?WHY DID HER FATHER FAINT?..THESE WERE MY MORE SET OF QUESTIONS..
then finally we got married!! yes we were!! then,after taking everyone's blessing..we proceeded to go to my home..she was crying profusely,and,i was tensed!! then we reached.i opened the door to our new Paradise ( which was rather a hell for us both)..she walked in and i walked in too.there were no parents of mine to do the ''kalash rituals''...
next chapter soon!! till then keep commenting!! :-)
ESHA 😳