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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey hi peeps! i am really very sad this time cuz u ppl didnt give any reviews..please even if u are going to criticise me then surely do it don't hesitate'it will help me to improve'..and regarding the coding mistakes - its really not my fault its something with the website that its showing the right thing first and then making it wrong ''so please understand''..this chapter mainly includes ''swara-laksh'' and very little sanskar in it ...

Chapter 5 : swalak meeting

recap: an unknown person tries to help laksh..

'excuse me? sorry i heard everything! my father is the trustee of this college..may i help u to get an admission?'

*laksh is shocked*

la: you? ( frowns)

'Hi! my name is swara sengupta..sorry for my rude behaviour! actually i wanted to ask ''may i help you ? '' '

la:(harshly) miss swara..i'm sorry for that accident, but don't think for an exchange of your sweet words! i'll greedily take your help! your money can buy some poor people like me but not forgiveness or happiness..so,stay out of my business!

* laksh also silently weeped for taking out his frustation on her...but he didn't knew the most hurt was swara ( who was attracted to him ''love in first sight! you know?''..he made her cry profusely.. but both ( swalak) didn't know that the whole conversation was heard by swara's daddy..

and yes! swara ran away crying after laksh went..

arindam sengupta : hello mr dey ( principal of the college): there's boy laksh...'yes laksh i know him'- principal ...so you also know that he is a brilliant student...'yes! but does'nt have money or the formalities'-principal...so what? i ll give his fees,just give him admission!! ..'sure ok! sir'-principal

after hearing laksh has got admission, his friend kuku ran up to him..to give him the news!!

kuku: lucky! oye lucky! mere bhai! you've got admission... yay! now no need to beg ur father for money!! chal ek jhappi toh banti hai!! :-)

they hug tightly... laksh cries happy tears and thanks his friend..his friend leaves

laksh knew it was swara but he decided to not thank her...she was his ''distraction''...why? u'll know later!

next day-

in- deshbandhu chittaranjan college of media and technology - pankhra,darjeeling

note- swara and laksh are both mass.com students

laksh and his group arrived..his group included - his best friend ''kuku'' and other friends babul,aatish,tabrez and mayur
from the opposite side
swara and her group arrived..her group included-her best friend ''julia'' and other friends preeti,somi,madhurima and kajol

swa: so finally you've got your admission! great! congrats.. :-)
la: thanks! btw my name's laksh! sorry for behaving so rudely yesterday..i was angry at something else..bye!
swa: oh i understand! ok no worry! dont you want to say anything else?( she was expecting for a ''Thank You''as she knew she was the reason that he got the admission..)
la: No!(he understood what she meant) nothing! bye! catch u later..
* laksh left * and * swara snobbed *
swa:(in her mind) omg! he doesn't know! what i did for him? oh no! how
will i be friends with that snug then? hmmm...

julia: what happened swara? where are u lost? come lets go

swara nods



Meanwhile in the hospital

sanskar chuckled on hearing such a silly meeting of swalak...

san:ok! swara I'll leave now but I'll be back in an hour or so! but be ready to tell me the whole story..bye!

he left

swara just nodded

swara: ( in mind) he ( sanskar) finds it amusing..but later will he realise how much in pain i am!

so peeps! this was my chapter 5 ''hope you like it''
precap:swalak romance
Esha 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Nice..interesting concept.. Update soonsoon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
hey waiting for ur story..
when r u planning to update ???
curious abt swara's past !!
tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: eshat.k

He stood there,Holding the award...staring at me with a wicked smile on his lips..i went on clapping and congratulating him with my eyes...

HI PEEPS,I HAVE BEEN BORING PEOPLE WITH MY WIERD FFS AND OSs,BUT A MARVELLOUS PLOT HAS POPPED IN MY BRAIN.IT IS ACTUALLY BASED ON A BENGALI SUPER HIT FILM..BUT I'VE TWISTED IT A LITTLE MAKING IT MORE INTERESTING...PLEASE PLEASE READ IT AND COMMENT BELOW...ANYTHING:ANDE(EGGS),TOMATOES,SANDALS "SAB KUCH CHALEGA"PAR KUCH TOH DE DO :-)
Character sketches
mr.sanskar ram prasad maheshwari:a drunkard,arrogant,selfish man who treats his wife as a curse...has a dark past(to be revealed later)
mrs.swara sanskar maheshwari: a sick woman,hates her husband,good natured but brave...has a dark past(to be revealed later)
mr.laksh shah: alive or died ( to be revealed later) a bright student,good natured,poor,lover boy,swara's first love...has a miserable past(to be revealed later)
ms.ragini dev:a bubbly,chirpy girl,orphan,sanskar's first love...died ( reason to be revealed later)
so people,this story is surely going to impress you..cuz this movie was amazing for me...there is a lot of tragedy as well as some comedy scenes but has a nice ending...so please keep commenting and i'll continue 😊 😊
ESHA 😳

index
chapter 1 on page 1; scroll down
chapter 2 on page 2
chapter 3 on page 4
chapters 4 and 5 in page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
i saw the film in telugu as it is dubbed frm tamil that is RAJA RANI
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Read 4 n 5 in one go. Loved it pls continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Pls continue soon and Pls pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome concept
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Thank you all will continue soon...asap 🤗 but after i complete my new SS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story still waiting for part 6...wow lakhs hey...
Like the way sanskaar has competition please update when you can...

Thanks

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