The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145 - Page 9

Wiw...laksh has such a way with words. ..committing n yet not...m sure ragini will accept but will tht make her happy. ..more importantly will tht change her scheming nature. .will it make her likeable? ?,

Wow, nice update. Hard to believe that Laksh has matured in to a sensible person. But I like it, pls continue soon:)

Lovely update. ..I really liked this mature lakshya. ..but the last para was outstanding. ..oh ragini what have you got yourself in to...she sure is in for a rough ride which would be smooth on surface though...interesting. ...

Hi Bubble..
Matured laksh.. Loved how laksh giving his views to ragini.. Hope ragini get it in right sense.. loved the last convo..
Awesome ..
waiting for next dear!!

Nice..

Aw dat was a beautiful update

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Wow! Lakshya take a bow. Now this is what I thought this man was initially in the show. The gist of his old self captured here is so refreshing!

Now Ragini, the era of chasing the mirage is over now let's see what you do with the water you've spotted. How you keep what you have gained.

Love your writing as always!

Continue soon :)

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

A wonderful chapter, Bubble!

Such a pleasure to see a mature Lakshya, accepting that Swara is now out of bounds for him, that she doesn't have the least bit of interest in him any more.
The way he was drawing Ragini to be truthful with him, no mean task, given her propensity for deceit, was amazing.

I particularly loved, loved the last line. How he would treat her with respect, behave lovingly, but he can't promise to actually feel that love and respect. I guess he would tell her in no uncertain terms, that to make him feel that way about her, she needs to mould herself back into the genuine, caring person she used to be, or at least, had the potential to be.

Really like the way this FF is going. Look forward to the next chapter.

Originally posted by: sadhana.np

Nice update