The Best of Things - FF (RagYa, SwaSan) +16 Part 44 on Pg 145 - Page 7

Hmm...so the top spins back to its original position, Ragini and Lakshya at the turning point. This is the chance for Ragini if she wants to come clean, she just has to be honest with him that's all, but somehow I'm attracted to the way you portrayed her, always walking on egg shells, wondering where the trap is and what lie to tell, that is the gist of Ragini we have come to know so closely.

Hello dear..I am Naina..😃

I loved this Ragya story..Read all parts and I am already attracted to the chemistry between them..

Lakshya is acting like a sensible and mature person..that is the main beauty of this one..👏

But Ragini is the same.. Hope she also transforms into her innocent former self after she gets Lakshya's love and care..

I am eagerly awaiting the next part..PM me if possible, dear😊😊

Hi Dear..
Lakshya in mature and wise form.. loved him here.. hpe ragini will turn positve.. I missed Swasan here!! but loved the way you took Ragya.. Awesome.. I need pm plz.!!
The plot seems interesting!!
Eagerly waiting for next.. Cmon ragini speak d truth!! Update soon.. TC

Lovely update

I read all the 4 parts in one go.. awesome work... 👏

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Bubble...

Thanks for the PM. Read all the 4 chapters today and I really liked this different take you have spun on the serial storyline. A relief to see a Lakshya being more than putty in someone's hands, always being the ever impulsive, brattish juvenile persona he is shown in the serial.

The ending of part 4 was a trifle tantalizing. Lakshya has come to realize what Sanskaar and Swara mean to each other; has that impelled him towards taking that final step towards consummating his marriage with Ragini? But in chapter 3, he was feeling relieved that he could be free of her...so wondering what was the catalyst that led him to this decision.

Look forward to chapter 5. Do keep PM-ing me for your updates.

Cheers

Viji

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hmm...so the top spins back to its original position, Ragini and Lakshya at the turning point. This is the chance for Ragini if she wants to come clean, she just has to be honest with him that's all, but somehow I'm attracted to the way you portrayed her, always walking on egg shells, wondering where the trap is and what lie to tell, that is the gist of Ragini we have come to know so closely.

Then Lakshya, he is going beyond my comprehension now. What does he want to do? Know her truth demand her truth and then what? What will he achieve by knowing her truth? How can he know if she's not entangling him in to a new lie somehow?

Well I'm deeply engrossed in the story, continue soon!

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Hello dear..I am Naina..😃

I loved this Ragya story..Read all parts and I am already attracted to the chemistry between them..

Lakshya is acting like a sensible and mature person..that is the main beauty of this one..👏

But Ragini is the same.. Hope she also transforms into her innocent former self after she gets Lakshya's love and care..

I am eagerly awaiting the next part..PM me if possible, dear😊😊

Originally posted by: Anglaise

Hi Dear..
Lakshya in mature and wise form.. loved him here.. hpe ragini will turn positve.. I missed Swasan here!! but loved the way you took Ragya.. Awesome.. I need pm plz.!!
The plot seems interesting!!
Eagerly waiting for next.. Cmon ragini speak d truth!! Update soon.. TC

Originally posted by: alisha17

Lovely update

Can't wait for next part

Ragini n Laksh r gna talk things out, can't wait to find out what they decide