Sab iss dil ki hi toh mushkil hai(a RagLak SwaSan ff)

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Jwala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

loved the update neha.. continue soon.. Please pm me..

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yusu1993

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

wowww

another swaragini story...

too god.. ragu is too sweet show laksh ki entry.. yayyy

sanky ki achi thi bht

continue behna

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radha 🦚

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Thank you friends for giving me such love n support. .
Chapter 1
Ragini- Swara tum chaho toh hum dhoondhte hain tumhare liye..socho kaise woh tumhare haathon mein rose pakdayega..tum ye sab dekhke emotional ho jaaogi aur woh tumhare aansu pochhega..haayee
Swara- stop it Ragini bohot bolne lagi ho tum..Vaise mera toh baad mein dekhenge tumhe apne woh kaise chahiye..
Ragini(smiles shyly)- tum hume chida rhi ho? Jaao hum nahi bataayenge..
Swara- arey batao na plz..
Ragini- aahaha batao na plz(imitating Swara) bilkul nahi
Swara- achcha sorry..abb toh bata do..
Ragini- hume koi aise chahiye jo dil ke bohot achche ho..

In kolkata, India
A boy to a bleeding man-dil ke achche hone se sirf nuksaan hota hai..

Ragini- Ladai jhagde se pare. .

The boy punches that man..
The boy-meri maa aur papa se door rehna..kisi aur par hamla krne ka plan banana..

Ragini- hamesha bhagwan ka shukra manaye

The boy reaches home n his mom hey bhagwan ye chot..
The boy- maa mere saamne uss bhagwan ka naam mat lo..

Ragini- Pyar ke liye kuchch bhi kr jaaye..

The boy to himself- pyar krne ki koshish ki thi par kya karoon kambakht dil kehta hai pyar vyar kuchh nhi hota...

Ragini- ladkiyon ki izzat kare..

The boy deletes a pic of a girl - laksh ki zindgi se yeh 8th ladki ko b-bye...

Swara- bilkul sapno ka rajkumar..kitna sweet hai tumhara sapna. ..

Maheshwari mantion
Laksh- bhai main aa raha hoon..tujhe waapas lene..london
Durga prasad(standing at the doorstep of his room)- tum kahin nahi jaaoge
Laksh- main jaaunga papa
DP- tumhe humari baat maanni hogi
Laksh- jab maine sanskar ke liye aapse request ki thi aapne mana tha..main toh jaaunga...
Hope u liked it..

.. .precap..
Laksh going london..swasan first meeting

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ShiriHoonMain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Yipee!! Me first!!🥳

Loved it.. Read in One go!

Swara getting all she wanted and Ragini gonna struggle for her prince!!

The amazing concept!!

Jaldi jaldi charon ka meeting karaying..

Me waiting badly!!!

I am loving all the 4 characters...

Swara's chearful love, Sanskaar's innocent love...

Ragini's Struggling Love and Lakshya's Painful Love..

I want All this!!!

I am also in Love with the title.. ( my punarvivah memory)

Thanx for the PM

Love,
Shirisha😊

PS: Mene itna lamba comment diya, tum mere time me kanjoosi mat kario😆

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago

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Jwala

@LoveSriNal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

superb neha.. poor ragini.. laksh is just opposite to her wishes.. hope ragini's love will alter him.. very interesting dear.. continue soon..

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radha 🦚

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

@harshsriti thanx di..

@shrishateddy... thanx yaa...pakka jaldi milaaungi

But ek baat bataaun?
Mera first ff hai.. no seedhi simple love stories..
Both the stories are complicated

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yusu1993

@yusu1993

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

yeh kia? laksh itna opposite?

well the concept is damn interesting...

can't wait kai north and south

ragini aur laksh kaisay miltay hain

do update soon

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princess369

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

really nice comcept
update soon next prt
waiting...

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

This was awesome

But bda update de yrrr

Update asap

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Thanx guys. ..
hell happy..no no heaven happy.. thanx for the appreciation. .[<:P]

Chapter 2
Laksh was sitting in his room. . He was lying on the bed thinking about his life his brother SANSKAR...

Flashback
Laksh was 6 yrs old and sanskar was 9..
Laksh- bhai meli(meri) gun dede...
Sanskar- gun chahiye lucky toh aake le le
Laksh- bhai dede na...
Annapurna n sujata was on the terrace drying the red chillies...

Laksh- maa Chachi bhai meli gun nahi de laha..
Sujata- sanskar dede na bhai ko..kyon pareshaan kar raha hai use..
Annapurna- oho Laksh Sanskar tum dono ek pichkari ke liye lad rahe ho. .
Sanskar- ye le lucky le le apni gun..
N sanskar hurriedly runs n hugs annapurna-main toh maa ke saath rahunga..
Laksh- maa
Sujata- haaye mhara laksh. .tu atthe aa ja. .
Laksh goes n hugs sujata. ..
Sanskar- Mom..
...
Present
Laksh giggles remembering all that with a photo of his n sanskar. ..
He also remembers the words sanskar said b4 going-lucky tu mere liye kisi se nhi ladega. .

Laksh- sorry bhai tujhe laane ke liye main kisise bhi lad jaaunga...
...
Laksh- aaj shaam ki flight hai lucky packing kar leta hoon.. .

London
SwaRagini's house
RAGINI- Swara tumhe pata hai ke aaj joseph hall mein ek shayari concert hai..
Swara- nahi mujhe nahi pata tha..
Ragini- aur hume aise functions kitne pasand hai..
Swara- haan. .toh matlab aaj tum jaa rahi ho..
Ragini- Swara hum zaroor jaate par aaj hume sharren ke saath ek college project banana hai..
Swara- awe so sad..koi baat nahi agli baar chali jaana
Ragini- kaisi behan ho tum Swara..tum yeh bhi toh keh sakti thi ki koi baat nhi Ragini main chali jaaungi...
Swara- tum chahti ho main jaaun?
Ragini- haan.(with a super cute smile)
Swara- so ms. Ragini Gadodia my answer is ..
Ragini- thank u Swara thank you thank you thank you
Ragini hugs her..
Swara- you are welcome Ragini but my answer is NO..
Ragini- haan jaante hain ke...ek minute ek minute. .no? Kyon...
Swara- main wahaan jaakar karungi kya?
Ragini- Recording..
Swara- Recording?
Ragini- haan hum toh wahaan honge nahi toh tum record kar lena. ..
Swara- Ragini par...nahi main nahi jaaungi..
Ragini- pleeease Swara.(she blinks her eyes constantly)
Swara- bas bas stop this melodrama... main jaaungi..
Ragini- thank you Swara..
Swara- abb samajh mein aaya baba tumhe dramebaaz kyon kehte hain..I thought tum bholi bhaali ho par yaar tum dhamaaka ho
Ragini- hum toh seedhi saadi nanhi se, pyari se swami type ladki hain..(she speaks with sweet innocent childish face)
Swara- hmm sab pata hai mujhe. ..

Sanskar's house
Door bell rings..
Sanskar- oh mr. Dawson come come in
Mr. Dawson- hi mr Sanskar. .I actually came to give you this
He handles him some passes
Sanskar- what is this mr. Dawson and why for?
Mr. Dawson -this is a pass of a concert..
Sanskar- concert?
Mr. Dawson- yeah there's an indian poetry recitation. n I don't know hindi..so?
Sanskar- yes mr. Dawson I ll go..
Mr. Dawson- that so sweet of u ..so I shall go..
Sanskar- yes sure...

SwaRagini's house
Swara- Ragini main kya pehnu?
Ragini- aaj hum tumhe tayyaar karte hai.

She starts readying her..

(Jeevan ye suro se sajaati
Rishte ye suro se banati
Bajti hai toh pyar ki dhun. ..
Ek dhoop chanchal hai ek chandni
Phir bhi hai ek dooje ke liye bani
Dilon mein hai pyar bhara
Suro se saji hai Swara
Raago se rachi hai Ragini)

Ragini- Swara yeh dekho khudko aayine mein..
(Swaragini swaragini swaragini swaragini)

Swara was in black long sleeveless gown (not shoulderless) diamond earrings n neck piece..her hair tied in messed bun..that flicked on her face..her eyelids were perfect pink with black corners. .
Ragini - bilkul pari lag rahi ho tum Swara...

Sanskar's house
Sanskar was dressed in black suit white shirt and black bow tie on it..he was looking a total gentleman. .

India(kolkata airport) at 7.30 pm.
Laksh- aadhe ghante mein main apne bhai ke paas jaane ke liye flight mein baithunga..

Hall..
Swara n sanskar reached at the same time and also parked their cars beside each other's... Sanskar came to another side of the car n took a bouquet from the passenger seat..meanwhile Swara came out from the same side... on the phone
Swara -haan Ragini main pahunch gyi

Sanskar shuts the door and goes..
Swara hangs up the call and is about to go when she realizes that her gown was stuck b/w the door of the car beside..
Swara(shouts)- Hey..hello..u mister..suno..

But he doesn't listen..he was far enough so he couldn't

Inside the hall.
Sanskar puts his hands in his pockets
Sanskar- mera phone ..shayad car mein. .abhi le aata hoon..

He sees a beautiful girl standing..
Swara- thank god tum aa gye maine kitni aawaz lagaayi..
Sanskar- par kyon?
Swara- mera gown.. tumhari car mein. .
Sanskar-oh sorry..main abhi nikal deta hoon..
Swara- ji thank u..bohot meharbaani..
Swara moves n loses her balance and falls..Sanskar holds her from her waist..
Sanskar- sambhal kar..zyada gussa karne se kabhi kabhi ye bhi hota hai..
Swara laughs n again takes her position..
They both laugh
Swara goes. .-bye..

Sanskar- ajeeb ladki hai par sweet hai yeh... iska naam toh poochha hi nhi. .chhodo..
He takes his phone n goes..

Meanwhile Laksh reaches at london airport..

PRECAP
shayari jugalbandi b/w SwaSan...RagLak first meet..

Thanks. .

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