Sab iss dil ki hi toh mushkil hai(a RagLak SwaSan ff)

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Hello friends.. I am Neha..I am a die hard fan of RagLak n love SwaSan too.. this is the first time I m writing a ff so bhool chook ho toh maaf karna..haha
Sab Iss Dil Ki Hi Toh Mushkil Hai
I hope I could write at least half of u all..


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PROLOGUE

Radhe krishna ki jyoti alaukik tee no look mein chhaye rahi hai..bhakti vivash ek prem pujarin phir bhi deep jalaaye rhi hai...
"Beta, shayad tum hi ho yahaan jo iss mandir ki shaan ho..aur maine pehli aisi ladki dekhi hai jo iss paraye des mein bhi apne sanskaar nhi bhooli"said the priest of the krishna mandir..
Ragini- Baba, hum london sirf padhne aaye hai apne sanskaar hum nhi chhodenge..aur baba hum har Sunday aate hain aur aap har baar yahi kehte hain..aap prasad khaayiye..

She looks to the garden beside the mandir n calls- Swara
Swara was listening to music while jogging...so she didn't hear
Ragini- yeh ladki bhi na..
She goes to Swara n holds her hand..
Swara- Ragini kya hai main jog kr rhi thi..
Ragini- pata hai hume.. hum bas tumhe prasad dene aaye the..
Swara- oh prasad do na..
Ragini gives her that n Swara eats it..
Swara- vaise Ragini mai yahaan jog kar karke apne aapko fit rkhna chahati hoon par lagta hai tum mujhe mota karke hi chhodogi..
Ragini- tunnel khud khaya hai prasad humne nhi khilaya..
Swara- achcha meri pyari chhoti behan ghar chalte hai..tumse behas mein koi nhi jeet sakta..
Ragini- Swara!!!
Swara drags her- chalo..

At their house..

Swara- Vaise Ragini woh el baat kahoon..
Ragini- haan bolo
Swara- woh john hai na
Ragini-wohi humare college ka nerd...
Swara- usne aaj mujhe propose kiya
Ragini- aur tumne haan..
Swara- pagal ho kya..mujhe jaisa ladka chahiye vaisa toh iss duniya mein bana hi nhi hai..
Ragini- achcha kaisa ladka chahiye tumhe?
Swara- aisa jo laakho mein ek ho..handsome..
At the london airport. .a boy in a brown leather jacket n black goggles comes out of the airport..he twirls his bag from his hand to his shoulder in a total stylish way..

Swara- jab aa ye toh ladkiyan mar jaaye

The boy walks in the street of london n every girl was just looking at him with awww face..

Swara- apne baalon ko hilaaye toh hawaayein chalne large

The boy passes his fingers from his hair..

Swara- par dil ka utna hi achcha ho

The boy sees a kid who asked," for god sake plz give me something to eat..I m hungry for so many days(the kid was in london so he spoke english)..he hugs the kid and buy him some food..and smiles..kid thank you mr..?
Boy- Sanskar..
Kid- thank u mr. Sanskar.

Ragini- sach mein aisa ladka mil na mushkil hai par milega zaroor..

Hope u liked it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character Sketch
GADODIAS
Ragini: A very traditional girl with modern thinking. She loves her elder sister and family very much. She can sacrifice anything for them. Right from childhood, burdened under family's reputation. Hardly gets angry but if gets once then hard to convince. .only her sis, Swara, can convince her.





SwaRagini: Swara and Ragini together..Swara is the child of shekhar and sharmishtha..and Ragini is the only girl of shekhar and Jaanki, shekhar's second wife..shekhar n sharmishtha got seperated because of some stupid family norms..Later their incomplete love story is completed by their daughters Swara and Ragini..






Shekhar n sharmishtha: parents of swaragini..




Parvati aka dadi maa: A stiff on decisions lady..Believes in social norms much..always wants to get control over everyone...very nice from heart..loves her family n laado(Ragini).very much..doesn't like Swara n sharmishtha..but yet love them a lot from heart..




Deendayal:Dada ji: grandfather of swaragini..


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BOSE
Shobha:Nani maa/Dida: mother of sharmishtha


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MAHESHWARIs
Laksh: A spoil and arrogant boy of durga prasad maheshwari..loves his brother very much. .can do anything for him . It is okay for him to play with a girl's feelings..



Sanskar: A very good boy..respects his elders very much but can't live without his love, kavita..left heart broken after kavita's death..decides not to fall in love again..can't give kavita's place to anyone.




DurgaPrasad and annapurna: parents of Laksh.







Sujata and Ram prasad: parents of sanskar..

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Adarsh: elder son of Durgaprasad and annapurna


Parineeta: wife of adarsh



Uttara: daughter of ramprasad and sujata


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ROYs
Kavita: love and lover of sanskar..died in an accident but whole story revolves around her.

scroll down to get pic.😊




That was the character sketch of the members of my story. .
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Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyx..awsum..plzz continue soon.will be waiting fr da first part.. n keep it looonnngg plzzz wid SwaSan Scenes. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome...
Hayye...
kas me bhi london me hoti ...

Loving it..
Hey is swara also sanskari but also matches with the world??
i wish to see her like that!!

Contiue soon..
Do PM me while updating..

And yes loved the title..
"Punar Vivaah 1" Title Track!!!
Love this song..

M I right???


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Awesome...

Hayye...
kas me bhi london me hoti ...

Loving it..
Hey is swara also sanskari but also matches with the world??
i wish to see her like that!!

Contiue soon..
Do PM me while updating..

And yes loved the title..
"Punar Vivaah 1" Title Track!!!
Love this song..

M I right???



Actually I loved punar vivaah a lot..
N yes Swara is also sanskari.this was jz the prologue..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wah wah wat an amazing prolouge...
Neha hitted it
Lovely lovely👏
Ragini is so traditional n lovely hahha swara the health freek😆
Wow awesome entry sanskar ...
Laksh nai dikhaya jaldi continue it
Waiting waiting
Love NIYATI
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Posted: 9 years ago
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She is our beautiful kavita..of course beautiful yaar. ..sanskar ki choice hai..n she is actually beautiful. .
Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini

Wah wah wat an amazing prolouge...

Neha hitted it
Lovely lovely👏
Ragini is so traditional n lovely hahha swara the health freek😆
Wow awesome entry sanskar ...
Laksh nai dikhayajaldi continue it
Waiting waiting
Love NIYATI


Main laksh ko bhi prologue mein hi dikhane wali thi par maa called..




~~INDEX~~

Prologue on page 1

Chapter 1 on page 2

Chapter 2 on page 3

Chapter 3 on page 5

Chapter 4 on page 6

Chapter 5 on page 9

Chapter 6 on page 11

Chapter 7 on page 13

Chapter 8 on page 15

Chapter 9 on page 16

Chapter 10 on page 20

Chapter 11 onpage 21

Chapter 12 on page 23
Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove


Main laksh ko bhi prologue mein hi dikhane wali thi par maa called..


Hahaha me smj skti hun mere sth bht hua h jb me AsYa FF- likhti thi😆 mom used to spoil my feel of framing the story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini



Hahaha me smj skti hun mere sth bht hua h jb me AsYa FF- likhti thi😆mom used to spoil my feel of framing the story


Ha ha..😆

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