Trial By Fire- A SwaSan 3 Shot - Page 14

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Yes, S- as Geeta says, on audit but she will be back early in the week! Me too missing her big time!

Btw guys, I'm away myself from 15 Dec to 8 Jan!! In the States so will be very irregular!

am stupid than swara ...sorry re saw ur pm but couldn't read dis stupendo fiction...i can say i was busy ...but i was really stupid to ignore dis once again sorry

brilliant effort it's related to the show which made me more happy ...do write more nd pm me ...will pakka read the moment i see them

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Yes, S- as Geeta says, on audit but she will be back early in the week! Me too missing her big time!

Btw guys, I'm away myself from 15 Dec to 8 Jan!! In the States so will be very irregular!

wow !! simply amazing..
loved it !!

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

Shru, what a brilliant piece of writing! I'm in absolute awe of it 👏

Part 2 was exactly my type, full of angst. You know how much i enjoy those chapters and you didn't disappoint The dramatic showdown and Swara's realizations throughout it were mindblowing. Loved how she finally saw the light abt Ragini and Laksh, Sanskar's pain didn't go unnoticed by her too ❤️

In awe of Sanskar's unmoving trust. He was in so much pain as an instant reaction towards those pictures and CD, yet he could compose himself and see thrgh Ragini's plan. Brilliant, thats so like my Sanskar

My favorite part of the chapter thgh is wen Sanskar asks Swara to trust him with his decision of seperating for sometime and she does 😲 while thinking that she is finally driven him away. Can't describe the beauty of this scene! Wish we get something like this soon on the show too!

Coming to Part 3, how beautifully you described Swara and Sanskar's pain at the seperation. Aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi thi ❤️😆

Sanskar's plan was smart though. He led Ragini and Laksh to believe that they had achieved their means so they let their guard down which they did. Perect! 👍🏼

When you brgh Uttara into the picture thgh, for a while, I was confused due to the recent spoilers that she had a hand in the kidnapping, but she was just there for her Bhai and Bhabhi...Aww 🤗

And then a determined Swara was out to get her love. Oh how I loved that part!

Sanskar's surprise and concern over Swara being there was so beautiful and so was his shock at Swara's love confession 🤣 I swear, all you forum writers have increased my expectations of this scene so much 😆

What followed was ☺️☺️☺️ I loooved it! 😆

The morning after scene was so cute and romantic too. Sanskar had to get back to his plan but Swara was in such a bliss. Tidying arnd their apartment and planning to cook for her hubby, awwh ❤️ Can they please move out of the MM madhouse for atleast a while on the show too?

Laksh ji then arrived thgh to burst Swara's happy bubble. Ugh! Ghatiya insaan! 😡 But i loved how Swara was jhadofying him! 👏 But then his harqatein 🤢

Thank god, my Sanky came on time like a hero and gave a well desrerved punch to that 🤬

SwaSan hug was so romantic

Lastly, enjoyed the MM bit. The entire revelation, Sanskar's decision to press charges, Swara's support, that little DP-Sansku moment and Sanskar finally giving in for his taklu and Swara. 😆

The ending was so happy happy, glad that they moved back to the apartment! I can imagine the rest 😉

Overall, you nailed it again, Shru! Waiting for your next work 🤗

Originally posted by: Anglaise

Amazing.. Loved it..
Superb!!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

brilliantly written!

Originally posted by: Sehru_life

absolutely love it

beautifully written 😳👏

Very nice work

Originally posted by: misaki

Shruts! What an amazing start to my day 🤗🤗

This story was the first thing that came to my mind when I woke up - I hoped that the last update was posted. I was happy to see that you indeed did. What a fitting ending to a truly wonderful story. I loveeedd it❤️ Firstly, the part where Swara takes the initiative (of course she got the push from Uttara however it was understandable that she needed it) to make her feelings known. I absolutely loved the way she couldn't help but tell him everything she felt for him at that moment, even if she thought it was embarrassing. It was perfect! My Sanskaar finally got his due. Ah! Mere dill ko kitna sukoon aur kushi mili seeing him so happy and content.🤗I loved what came next obviously, very very subtly and beautifully written.😳 ❤️

The title to this part - Inferno! - So damn Perfect! 😃 My favorite part easily of the three since it clearly brought out the journey from pain, regret and suffering to atonement and salvation👏 It was beautifully done Shru!❤️

And you were so right!😃 I absolutely loved the treatment that was dished out to Laksh from Swara and Sanskaar.(That guy deserves far worse😡)I knew there was no danger of Swara getting hurt., not with Sanskaar around. I was grinning the entire time Swara was tellin him to stuff it and get lost! 🥳Now if only we could see that happening on the show. (I still have my hopes on that one) The best part was that powerful right hook from Sanskaar! That disgusting creep had it coming and the fact that that one punch completely took him out had me feeling so very proud at my man *very very proud muh* and of course content that after everything the creep had done and said, Sanky could finally give it back.😃🥳

I of course knew why Sanskaar was doing what he was doing but the whole Ragini revelation and Laksh being her ally through every thing was very nicely done. We all have had so many discussions on where she gets the cash from😆 In your story at least, now we know.😛 I so wish the same thing happens in the show as well, but something makes me always think that AP really is behind all of it. I don't know why, I feel like she really is not what she looks like. But I still hope Laksh ji is behind all of it. What an epic revelation that would be huh? And mere dil ko sukoon milega seeing some people burn.😈 Ohh that would be so awesome!

That last part where Sanskaar refuses to stay back in MM made me really happy. After how AP and Suju completely berated Swara (seriously that was no way to talk to a girl, especially a bahu of the house. Suju I can still understand but AP? I was actually cringing hearing her say "woh ladki". No wonder Laksh is her beta - like mother like son🤢. Of course that didn't mean I felt bad for Swara - she really had it coming.Does that make me heartless? So be it! I didn't and that's the truth!🤔) So when Sanskaar just tells them off , disregarding their apologies the way he did, it made me really happy. Swara ignoring Shomi! You go girl! I seriously think Sanskaar should stay in his house with his wife away from all the mentaleshwaris, every one of them is a nautanki and clearly brainless.😵 That would make his life so very easy. But of course it ain't happening. Stupid MM wasis! Leave my man alone!😡

After all that blabbing, I of course cannot leave without telling you, once again that it's always a pleasure to read your works Shruts. Love 'em always! There is no way I wouldn't. 😃 And what's this I read on your replys?😲 No thanks ever required remember?😕 Jhappi though, I would take anytime. 🤗🤗

Love you always ! xoxo

Edit - OMG! I forgot to wish you on turning red!😲 Shru the color looks great on ya (or should I say on Varun!) 😆 😃 🤗