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princess2791 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gabriel is really angel for swara. What a perfect he is in his work. Waiting for next chapter. Please update soon. Take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nimmi where are you? any new update today?
Banjaaran25 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

nimmi where are you? any new update today?



Showie Sapna..
network acting weird..
tomorrow pakka.

love ya girl🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi 🤗
Superfantabulous update!!!

Tune maari entriyan re
Dil mein baji ghantiyaan re, Tann! 😉
aaand he's here to save the day! I guess he's her angel... her guardian angel. Gaby just needs to save Swara once more & the score is even.

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

"Now pull your f***ing selves together. And focus. We are about to create history."

"Or we will become history." A guy muttered from back seat. "I so didn't sign up for this."


Nearly choked on my food reading this! 😆 Knowing Gabriel, you can guarantee that it's going to option number 2.

Bozo is just.. 🤣 Although I'd love to say I would be as cool as Gaby or at least be trying to subside my fears like Swara, I can only see myself screaming at the top of my lungs like Bozo was doing in such a situation. How well you've added a drop of humour into this intense, exciting chase & made it even more pleasurable to read. 👏
I knew Bozo will irritate his fav man to the core! 😆 Gaby won't be in Bozo's good books either... well he already isn't, but I'm more sure of it after their meeting. Can't wait to see more of this comical hate-hate relationship.

Swara's monologues are hilarious! Neither a ghost or the devil... he's a man.. and Angels appear on earth in the form of men. I know that's not what she meant, but lemme have this one.
And thanks for telling us there will be a next time Nimmi! Looking forward to it.

Gaby & his car! 😆 Swara got the privilege to handle his baby for a while... she should be honoured. I'm guessing Laksh is going to have to wait a little while longer since Gaby has Trouble & her accomplice to deal with.

Unresed chapter 26 as well. All caught up now!
Edited by -Ros- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update.
Gabriel is really an angel for Swara. Bozo was so cute here. I love his character.
Nw atleast the underworld people should know not to mess with Gabriel.
Eagerly waiting for a face off btwn Laksh nd Gabriel.

Ur writing is very good nd perceptive. I could easily visualise the chase sequence nd the car tumbling sequence.

Keep up the good work. Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cinderella3

Nimmie...!!! 🤗.

Ashi..
🤗


I'm in a super-awesome mood today! And your stupendous update was a cherry on the cake. I was giggling continuously from the beginning to the end of the update. 😆.

Thank you darling.
My pleasure😳. may your happy mood continue..


So finally Gabriel reached his kitten! And what an entry it was! I like the way he calls her kitten. 😛.

actually me likes this name. was deliberating between shona and kitten. kitten sounded cute and personal.

I really love Swara here. She's still maintaining her calm even in such an adrenaline raising situation. 👍🏼 I too love strong and independent heroines. Her monologues were funny! But in all the chaos she got a chance to drive Gaby's car; his most prized possession! Wow! I don't think in any other situation he would allow anyone to touch his baby. Lucky girl! 😉.

i doubt she even realizes how lucky she is. well i will remind her soon.😆.
waise she is khool.


Bozo and his responses! He cracks me up!

"She loves me!" Bozo declared loudly in panic. "She totally adores me. She would be heartbroken if anything happens to me. So don't you think of throwing me out!" 🤣.

Our good old Bozo! one of my favourite.

Gabriel was totally calm and composed until they started shooting his car. His rising anger was amusing me to no end! And finally he lost it! Wow! What a perfect aim! One bullet fired, and five men finished! Cool! 😎.

well that's our guy.
not for nothing he is the best assassin around. poor guys.


Girl! You have turned me violent! I'm smiling reading about cold blooded murders and death! 😲.

Same pinch girl.. i just realized i have such a violent streak in me.😳.


Thank you so much for gracing us with awesome story Nimmi! Love you lots!!! ❤️🤗

Totally my pleasure. in fact i got to know all you amazing girls thanks to this story.🤗.
Love ya back and more.❤️


Ashi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson


Hi Nimmi, You updated it 🤗

Nita..
🤗


So Swara saw Gabriel in action and poor BOZO must be scared out of his wits. Yep he continues to be Spot on with his reactions . I loved his reply to Gabriel when he threatens to throw him out. 😉.

" Missed me Kitten" and "You had any doubt about my coming kitten? Tsk! Tsk! I am so hurt!" Really Gabriel knows how to start a conversation 😆😆. I dont have to say how much i loved his entry in his Sports Car.

Our guy surely loves to make an entry.😆.
and has a knack to continue a conversation. let him chat with Bozo now. 😈.


Poor SUV guys will be always be remembered for being dumb enough to chase Gabriel 😆😆. Gabriel kills the SUV guys for blasting his Side view mirror , Poor Lakshya i am worried for him .

hahaa.. Bechara Laksh. kinda feeling sorry for him. and yes.. poor SUV guys. that's what happens when you have a dumb leader.
psst. car saga gonna continue. me thinks you will like that bit.😳



It common for Swara to be Shocked but it surprising that Bozo was offering her support and not the other way around , i thought he would be more terrified seeing Gabriel in action.

me lubs Bozo. hence trying to give him different shades.
but your tamanna will come true. he would be terrified.. in a moment. will update choon.


P.S- Looking forward to the next update Nimmi, Do continue soon and let me know .

yo dearie.
Thank you so very much Nita for liking the update and this comment.
love ya.
*hugs*








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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

👏 👏 👏 fantastic. bullseye in one shot. he uint the best assassin for nothing. you would think the dumbo goons would have more brains...but then again they are now lash's men. so gabriel has now shown his halwa to swara and scared her...she will be thankful for it soon as well. crazy bozo!! he is going to find himself in tough soup if he doesnt keep his mouth shut. brilliant writing and amazing part as always



Sapna..
🤗

Thank you so much girl for reading the update and liking it.
and this wonderful comment😳.

Gabriel surely put the fear of god in all who crossed his path. but hey ..that's our guy. The best assassin and bad-ass around.

Bozo..😆.
you should hear him talk now. updating about him soon. me thinks you will like Gabriel and Bozo's first chat.

Thanks again dear girl.
love.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Jamina

Wow you updated I was about PM you 😊
Love you nimmi 🤗 😳



Love ya back Jami..
🤗

That's some psychic connection eh😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Wow a totally action packed update..

Kashmi..
🤗

Thankh kuu..

The heroic entry by Gabriel in the form of a saviour for Swara and Bozo.. Their momentary shock totally justified as they were doomed for a moment and then Gabriel arrives out of nowhere..

Our guy surely likes to make an entry.😆


I love how he gives smart-ass retorts to Swara and she chooses to keep shut because it's her neck which will be slayed..
and our girl is surely smart. he does knows how to rile her up though.

His slight teasing ahhh that man slays me with his attitude hehe.. I love it when he calls her kitten..
gee. same pinch. between Shona and Kitten... kitten won!

Bozo and Gabriel's conversation inspite of the chaos and impending danger was a bit funny with Bozo hanging on to dear life and Gabriel Shrugging his fear off nonchalantly..

the continuing conversation will happen soon. hopefully you will enjoy the update too girl😳


Then the killing and action that followed was something which I've seen happen only in movies you wrote it really well..

Thank you so much dear.

Why such a short update though please write a lamba waala no??

aye! coming up choon.

Loved the update in all and I already am waiting for the next one.. So update soon..
Thanx again buddy.
lots of love.
*hugs*


Love,
Kashmi

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