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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: princess2791
What an power pack action full chapter it is. Gabriel moves is flawless swara is really fighter. I hope swara's angel will be come as kinght for swara. Kitten what a cute and unique name for swara. Eagerly waiting for next update. Please update soon next part. Waiting waiting waiting.

Princess..
🤗

thank you so much dear.
Both our guy and girl are fighters in different ways. let's see how their worlds meet.
Angel and knight.. love the way you said.

updating soon.
Thanx again girl.😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: -Ros-
Res 😛

Katti😡.
😛

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: bhshre95
Nimmi🤗
Such an action-packed chapter⭐️ loved it
But you ended at such a crucial moment😭 not fair😆
Gabriel is surely a very sharp hunter😳 n he really loves his weapons😆

N I had one doubt about rp, doesn't he have any wife or children?? N is laksh's mother alive or not??
I know silly doubts😆 but just came into my mind so asked😃

N continue soon...😃 I m waiting desperately to know what happens next😃

Shreya..
🤗

Thank you so much dearie.

gee.. showie about being so mean. will make it upto ya. soon.

RP.. and Laksh's mom.. there is little story there. will post it as the story progress. pakka. Not silly doubts at all. please keep asking questions so that i can improve the story.

updating soon.
thanx again girl.
love.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue
Hey when will you update this one I'm waiting to read it do try updating soon..

Kashmi..
🤗

Updating in exactly 10 min😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: Cinderella3
Nimmi... Update! Update! I'm waiting waiting!!!

Ashi..
🤗

updating asap. 10min max re.

love ya girl.

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#756

Nimmie...!!! 🤗

I'm in a super-awesome mood today! And your stupendous update was a cherry on the cake. I was giggling continuously from the beginning to the end of the update. 😆

So finally Gabriel reached his kitten! And what an entry it was! I like the way he calls her kitten. 😛

I really love Swara here. She's still maintaining her calm even in such an adrenaline raising situation. 👍🏼 I too love strong and independent heroines. Her monologues were funny! But in all the chaos she got a chance to drive Gaby's car; his most prized possession! Wow! I don't think in any other situation he would allow anyone to touch his baby. Lucky girl! 😉

Bozo and his responses! He cracks me up!

"She loves me!" Bozo declared loudly in panic. "She totally adores me. She would be heartbroken if anything happens to me. So don't you think of throwing me out!" 🤣

Gabriel was totally calm and composed until they started shooting his car. His rising anger was amusing me to no end! And finally he lost it! Wow! What a perfect aim! One bullet fired, and five men finished! Cool! 😎

Girl! You have turned me violent! I'm smiling reading about cold blooded murders and death! 😲

Thank you so much for gracing us with awesome story Nimmi! Love you lots!!! ❤️🤗

Ashi.

Edited by Cinderella3 - 9 years ago

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: foresight
waiting...

updated😳

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#758

Hi Nimmi, You updated it 🤗

So Swara saw Gabriel in action and poor BOZO must be scared out of his wits. Yep he continues to be Spot on with his reactions . I loved his reply to Gabriel when he threatens to throw him out. 😉.

" Missed me Kitten" and "You had any doubt about my coming kitten? Tsk! Tsk! I am so hurt!" Really Gabriel knows how to start a conversation 😆😆. I dont have to say how much i loved his entry in his Sports Car.

Poor SUV guys will be always be remembered for being dumb enough to chase Gabriel 😆😆. Gabriel kills the SUV guys for blasting his Side view mirror , Poor Lakshya i am worried for him .

It common for Swara to be Shocked but it surprising that Bozo was offering her support and not the other way around , i thought he would be more terrified seeing Gabriel in action.

P.S- Looking forward to the next update Nimmi, Do continue soon and let me know

Edited by NitaMikealson - 9 years ago

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#759

👏 👏 👏 fantastic. bullseye in one shot. he uint the best assassin for nothing. you would think the dumbo goons would have more brains...but then again they are now lash's men. so gabriel has now shown his halwa to swara and scared her...she will be thankful for it soon as well. crazy bozo!! he is going to find himself in tough soup if he doesnt keep his mouth shut. brilliant writing and amazing part as always

Edited by foresight - 9 years ago