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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow a totally action packed update..
The heroic entry by Gabriel in the form of a saviour for Swara and Bozo.. Their momentary shock totally justified as they were doomed for a moment and then Gabriel arrives out of nowhere..

I love how he gives smart-ass retorts to Swara and she chooses to keep shut because it's her neck which will be slayed..

His slight teasing ahhh that man slays me with his attitude hehe.. I love it when he calls her kitten..

Bozo and Gabriel's conversation inspite of the chaos and impending danger was a bit funny with Bozo hanging on to dear life and Gabriel Shrugging his fear off nonchalantly..

Then the killing and action that followed was something which I've seen happen only in movies you wrote it really well..

Why such a short update though please write a lamba waala no??

Loved the update in all and I already am waiting for the next one.. So update soon..

Love,
Kashmi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Who oo that's was awesome yaa...
I know he would come to save her
I love Gabriel attitude
Bozo he is funny ya.. 😆
My sweety swara 😳

Okay now I wanna read next chapter now!! I can't wait at all nimmi
Update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sooo...Gaby saved Swara and Bozo...
Stunting entry of Gaby boy...
Bozo fear he...he...he...
Swara loves Bozo...to save him ...throughing out..
Goons damaging his...car...hate it...
Whole ..chasing was tooo good re...
Wow ...Gaby's stylish...single shot...one stone..many birds...fantasticly written. Machi...

Feeling dizzy ..re..mesmerised by your writing and...by OUR GABY...BABY...




Loads of love...


Kamila
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmie.. 🤗
That was just fantastic!!
Awesome awesome Update as always.
Kya bath hei?!Wat an entry 👏.im dead!!Aww "Missed me Kitten?" Finally Gabreil back with swara ⭐️ Im duper excited and so so happie..lub ya🤗
poor swara didnt xpected such an entry by her anjel she seems in shock,surprise and disbelief! compose urself babe. lots of things on the way! omg bozo😆seems really buzy with his mantra(we are gonna die) 🤣 Loved trio convo. lol the way bozo snapped gabreil claiming swara loves him in a quick fear of gabreil threatinig🤣.Loved the way Gabreil fired XUV and explosion 😈.
Me loved everything re. Each and every update is so special! Interesting! Update soon.. TC 🤗 🤗
Edited by Anglaise - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update with lots of humour in the dangerous situation...totally ROLB my self throughout the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi..
Just one word for you MINDBLOWING .. 😉
and you are The Action Queen ..of this forum ..
I mean how perfectly you have described the scenes ..i was enjoying the car ride..in real
"kitten !!missed me"..aww cute 😆
And the most imp character of this chapter was BOZO.. 😃
He is a cartoon...LOL
Plz update soon...i am eagerly waiting for your next update
..love
simi 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update..!!!
Gabriel is always there for Swara...
Gabriel's Kitten and Swara' Angel.. <3 so cute.
OMG...Sanskaar's entry was just perfect, totally loved it..!!!
Bozo's reply on Gabriel throwing him out of the var was hilarious..
Gabriel's skills are just worth praising.. His precision..he only needed one bullet to confront all those men in the SUV.
Continue soon, waiting...
Thanks for the pm...

Aksh xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome...
"Missed me Kitten.."
Of course dude she missed you..
How will she forget you when she in such a horrified situation..

Swara says "Angel"..
wow guess like both missed each other..

Bozo's reaction while Gabriel was driving so fast..
Swara too was amazed at the speed...

Ohh God, Bozo!!
"She loves me!" Bozo declared loudly in panic. "She totally adores me. She would be heartbroken if anything happens to me. So don't you think of throwing me out!"

I was laughing very much like reading this..
And finally came the Rohit Shetty film scene..
SUV crashed after loosing the control..

Swara scared at the horrified scene she just saw..
Poor girl was shaking so badly..
Bozo was trying to support her..

Hope Gabriel does some thing to calm her down..

Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thank you for the PM,...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmie
Superb.👏
The action sequences,the way you have described them is so easy to imagine.
Yes Gabby is the person who cannot speak straight,and that's what we love him.
Dhamakedaar chapter and waiting for more.😃
Edited by rose1998 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi

Just finished reading all the parts.wao ur story is just amazing and ur style of writing is jst marvelous. U keep the readers hooked up to it. N best part being u update almost everyday.waiting fr the next part. Plz update it soon

Ayushi

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