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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: Messi2
awww...will rant tom pakkaaa

tomorrow aake chala gaya Jessi😆.

Still love ya girl.🤗

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: Cinderella3
Hey Nimmi...
Ashi..
🤗

I had a big smile plastered on my face as I read the chapter. But as I moved on to the later portions, it turned to me a serene and calm one. It was beautifully heart-rending. The kind which tugs at your heart strings. The emotions were not blatant, but still it was so poetically beautiful! ❤️.
aww this is so beautiful Ashi..
thank you girl.

Gabriel is right. She is an enigma! You unfold a different shade of her with each update of yours. She truly deserves respect for the person she is.
I am really happy that you liked her character dearie.

Okay! Coming back to the beginning of the chapter. I was giggling continuously at the interaction of Swara, Gabriel and KC; and the later conversation of Gaby and Swara. Keys and notepad in the fridge! And she even went on to look for her shoes in the fridge! This girl is seriously crazy! She would never fail to surprise Gariel! 😆.
and He hates surprises.. poor guy would not know what is gonna hit him next while it comes to this girl.
she is indeed crazy.

Gabriel is stupefied by her innocence! And yes, her innocence is the only thing that would crack the cold walls around his heart. Innocence is the one thing which is present nowhere in his world. Her warmth will surely melt him. And with that will come a sense of responsibility and protectiveness towards her. .
wow.. beautifully said again. hopefully i really could justice to this.

Wow! This journey is going to be awesome! I can't wait to get my hands on the rest of the story! Update soon Nimmi! Super-soon!!! Can't control my eagerness! 😃.
fingers crossed.*
love ya Ashi..❤️.
updating super soon.

Thank yo so much for the pm buddy!

Love,
Ashi 🤗

Lots of love girl..
🤗.. Thank you so very much buddy.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: mayasingh
Chapter 23... Swara and Gabriel interaction... very interesting...
so while he is healing getting interested in our girl...

I loved the portion where she said she is responsible for his life now :)
Gabriel was knocked out of his feet..
Ha ha Gabriel is feeling protective for our girl...
Waiting for next chapter eagerly...

Maya..
🤗

Thank you so much girl for liking the update and this lovely comment.

psstt... protective towards our girl.. this is just a trailer. picture abhi baaki hai mere dost.

thanx again dear.
me updating soon.😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: bhshre95
Amazing update👏
Loved Gabriel swara interaction😳 looking forward for more of it n aww Gaby is stunned by swara's innocence😳 n maa baba Part was really emotional
N lol swara keeps keys n all in fridge😆
N every time swara does something Gaby says answer is still no😆 hopefully he agrees soon
Plz update soon😃😃

Hi..
🤗

May i know you name please if that's ok with you?

thank you so very much for reading the update, liking it and this lovely comment.😳.

He may agree soon.. or then he may not.. will update about it soon.

Thank you once again dear.

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hrni

@hrni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#635

Waiting eagerly for today's update since afternoon...update soon...

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: Cintila
I'm back..!😎
I dont know what to say...you've left me amazed. How do you write so well ? The fridge part was soo damn hilarious man..!!🤣 loved it. I love Gaby and his attitude 😎 and swara is such a cutie..!😳 Her maa-baba part was so emotional. No wonder gaby was surprised at her innocence. I cant wait to read further. The swasan KC conversation was awesome !!😆😆 I love this ff. Don't leave me hanging...please update soon😳😆

Okay so now that i'll be commenting on your works regularly, we need to have a formal introduction right ? So..Hello, I'm Tuhina. You can call me Tuhi 😉. I guess you remember me...I'm the same one who kept posting crap gif's on the 'swara's I LOVE YOU ' thread 🤣

Tuhi..
🤗.

good to have you back.

Thank you so much dearie for reading the updates and enjoying them. i am really so happy about it.

for formal introduction.. hey I am nimmi. great to meet ya. *hugs*

of course i remember you and your pure Epicness wale Gifs Tuhi. you inspired me post mine too🤣.
Man that thread was fun.

really happy to have you here buddy.

and nope won't leave you hanging at all. updating soon.😳

love.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: hrni
Waiting eagerly for today's update since afternoon...update soon...

wow this is so sweet dear.
thank you so much😳.

updating in a moment.

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#638

Nimmi 🤗

Sucha cute update!

KC makes an appearance again. 😡 I have feeling he's going to make Swara's & Bozo's life hell. Swara, you spoke for all of us with your lovely & thoughtful gesture to his departure. ⭐️

I love how Gabriel doesn't hide himself from Swara. His real self. He doesn't water down the darkness associated with him. When he says that knives are way more fun and continue to play with them even when she's in front of him, potentially in danger. As much as this girl puzzles Gaby (and me 😆), I guess he does know that Swara can take care of herself & that she's one of a kind- her honesty & goodness to someone like him is what's mesmerising him the most. Maybe he's seen kindness & virtue in many before, but I bet this is the first time it is being showered up on someone like him, whom most people would say doesn't deserve it.

He loves teasing her doesn't he? 😛 Haawww Kitten is soo sweet! He's so right, the name would be perfect for her. And he SAID she's cute. Omgjfngkj. 😃😃 It was all thoughts first, now it's all talk.. what's next?😉

Gaby is losing his focus! Uh-oh! I guess it was bound to happen. Swara screams purity to me- although it doesn't make her perfect in anyway. All her emotions & actions come straight from the heart. I guess that was bound to shake someone like Gabriel a little bit. It's so different from what he's used to- deceit & corruption.

I honestly have no clue what's going to happen next. I wish this was a book... I really just wanna turn the page!⭐️

PS: Gaby will give her the story won't he? He will spill everything. But is she going to use it? That''s the question.

EDIT: Wanted to ask this in my last comment... Has Swara really found peace with her Baba's death? She waved off Gaby's apology for bringing the subject up.. but she still hasn't renovated Pixie. I know people often holds onto things they find hard to let go.. is she still holding on? Is she trying to find closure by helping Gaby out? Am I sounding like a loony asking all these questions?😆

Edited by -Ros- - 9 years ago