FF: Angel. (Request : Page: 140) - Page 63

Originally posted by: simsen23

nimmi...superb one...gaby is so handsome...swara was chkng on him...haha...loved d way gaby replied KC..really..dis KC type guys r der in dis world...n wat a awesome convo of swara gabriel...wating fr ur next update...dear

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Mindblowing update dearie👏👏

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

So Gabriel found his match in swara

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

The answer is still No...

😆

Loved the conversation..

Sanskar saving swara from KC..

The count is 2 now...

😆

Poor swara...

will Gabriel Say yes for the interview!!!

Thank you for the PM..

Continue soon..

Originally posted by: Nusrat-kabir

Waiting for more.. 😃 ⭐️ .actually can't wait ..you know that.. 😉 😉

Originally posted by: dimaag

Hey Nimmi 😉
I was so taken aback when kc knocked the door and swara opened it. I thought maybe bozo had called the police for swara's safety and security. I had my fingers crossed 😕. But when u mentioned he is swara's ex bf then it was like 😳. Let's see what Nimmi has for swara's past. When she was repeatedly saying no... I thought maybe Mr. Gabriel could be of some help for her in case matter worsens. And yuhuu! You made Gabriel her new bf. The way he talked with kc was so confident even swara feared if he is really gonna crush this kc the next second.

After that, keeping important things such as the car keys and notepads in the fridge..was 🤣. And that person whom she is asking for her belongings is none other than a famous assasin. The questions asked by him were needed to be answered for a person like him but here also our girl knocked him down with her answers 😃.
Lastly, she said I'm responsible whether you like it or not. Deal with it. Me too was 😕 dumm hai yaar ladki mein.
Thanks for the pm and thanks for updating soon my girl friend 😛.
Lots of 👏
-N (dhisum dhisum) 😉

Originally posted by: abika

Nice update

Con soon

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Thanks for the PM Nimmi,

I loved it, and as usual i didnt want it to end. when i reached the last line i was little sad it was over .

So coming to the chapter Gabriel and Swara interactions make my day and i know Gabriel will say yes but i like that he is not taking the decision so soon.

Also liked how he started to understand Swara and her intentions . While he know her being overly nice is for the interview , he also knew she is genuinely a good person too.

Do continue soon and let me know Nimmi .

Originally posted by: foresight

I have to give it to this swara for her persistence. she is a tough girl...and hearing about maa and baba, i guess she needed to be. she may have once been scared of him, but now she isnt shy and worried in any way to give him back. she is blunt with him and there is some attraction there going on as well,

they have gone into a sort of friendly comraderie even...one that i would like to see more off.

for his part, he has definitely been more than intrigued by her...and i feel not just by her innocence, but also her upfrontness in telling him she would have gone to the police. i am looking forward to the day he opens up to her...and she wants him to...not for the story but for themselves.

loved how he protected her when it came to KC, though i do agreed with swara, she didnt need protection, but with gabriel in the picture, KC isn't going to even think of his selfish way hopefully for some time...at least directly expecting it from swara...though i do wonder and feel that there will be a time when he will be the guy who blurts their location to the enemies and makes then run.

looking forward to the next part

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Nimmie! 🤗

Meri Ros..
🤗

First of all... ☺️.. for shirtless Gaby. I'm already on drool mode after seeing Sanskaar looking so dapper in yesterday's epi & this has just added fuel to my fangirling.
Same pinch. Black and white.. he is HOT or what! what a deadly combo. he sure looked so dapper.
*blush*

He knows her does he? And he can read her? .. I'm not saying anything... *smiles gleefully*
her thoughts at that time would scandalize him may be..gee.

KC. 😡 He's the first character I've come to dislike in your story. I hate arrogant, dimwits like him. 🤢 He's trouble and nothing else. Would he use anything from their relationship against Swara in the future? He sounds like the sort who would do just that!.
KC is an idiot alright.
but nope.. not telling anything more now. naaa.

Go Gaby! Defending his girlfriend whom he is living with (what? he didn't deny it. 😛). I wish KC didn't accept defeat so easily and gave himself an opportunity to be flung down from the balcony. 😔.

He actually admitted living with her😆
hhaaha. balcony part.. man we are so evil.

Swara & the Fridge. 😆 One could write a set of short stories on this.

Nimmie, you just made Gabriel ask all the questions that's been running through my head! So we finally got to know the method behind her madness.

thank you darling. i will always try to keep a pattern in my chaos. at least in creative land. if not in real.😳

Gabriel stared at the girl standing in front of him for a long moment. She is the girl who could jump into sea risking her life to save a stranger; a girl who barges in the middle of a violent war oblivious to the dangers; a girl who could make deals with a devil i.e. an Assassin like himself. Yet she is same girl who believes that her parents are watching over her from heavenly abode with a child like innocence.

And lives by their principles even when they are long gone.

Who is this girl?

How wonderfully you've penned this down Nimmie. ⭐️ Even I was in awe of Swara, just like Gaby. She's defo a pineapple & Gaby is a coconut for sure.. he sympathised with her loss & his emotional side is slowly peeping out. This girl is going to keep fascinating him with her against-the-norm nature. How ironic was that he thought he had her all figured out & now he's ended up with even more questions. Maybe he should search the fridge? 😉.

Thank you once again Ros.. i so love your Pineapple description.

🤣 fridge comment. girl! you do have kick ass sense of humour.

The answer is still..? 😲 I honestly have no clue what is going to happen next. I'm not getting anything.. waiting for next update Nimmie!!! 🤗 .
hopefully you will like all the answers buddy. *fingers crossed.
Hugs back.🤗

PS: Re your reply, I can't write a story to save my life. 😆 I'm just not patient enough & can't weave words together like you and the many wonderful writers in this forum can.
are you kidding.
i can collect all your comments in collector edition. they are that good. and you say you can't weave words together. pffttt!
Go ahead give it a try. you ARE good.

Oooh new guyyy 😲... I'm even more intrigued, if that's even altogether possible!

I so want to spill everything about this guy.. but sigh! i have a story to tell. so soon maybe.

Big hugs Ros for this wonderful comment.
love ya..🤗