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Jamina Mohammed

@Snowflakes.

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Interesting

Kavita entry awesome looking forward to story unfold

Edited by -Jamina - 10 years ago

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Interesting twist

Ragini is such a b@#ch(no yaar female dog ki insult ho gayi)

Anyways the update was awesome

Kavita is back God knows what she wants now

Did Swara see Sanky and Kavita's photo

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Hey,

What to say about this fanfic now? You've got me gripped again!

Your character portrayal has always fascinated me. The way you've shown Adarsh in this fanfic actually made me feel good. Thank you for providing him with brains 😛 He's one of the characters that's got a lot of potential and should be exploited. You've done that.

Lakshya ke liye I'd rather not comment. His character in the show is so annoying that I've stopped considering him anywhere at all. *sigh* He used to be really awesome, they've just butchered his character.

Coming to Swara and Sanskaar.! I am absolutely loving them! You've given such sweet and heart warming moments between the two it made me sooo happy.! (For a second while reading the previous updates I thought Swara would remember some memories that would lead to misunderstandings between her and Sanskaar!!! Thank you for not doing that! I felt such relief when her first memory recovered turned out to be that particular one). I really loved that 'I-can-read-your-eyes-scene'!!

Ragini! I love her. I don't know why I just do. Even though she is one of the negative characters.

I'm a little confused as to how Kavita is Sanskaar's Bhabhi considering Adarsh is married to Parineeta. (I went back to the previous chapters to check 😛)

Anyhow loving your frequent updates. Awaiting the next one with bated breath. Please update soon :)

Thanks for the PMs.

-V

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#284

Amazing as always. So Adarsh married Kavita - had thought he was married to Pari earlier (nice confusion creation there 👏 ) it did seem as though Adarsh had gone after Sanky's love before and won. but Kavita was a willing participant and using Sanky for her own purpose. This doesn't bode well for Swara. Now she had Rags and Kavita both to contend with. Sanky is going to have a tough time protecting her from them + laksh. One more reveal happened here - it was different (happy that it was) - the secret behind the marriage not being forceful revealed along with no choice choice. looking forward to the next update. 👏 👏 👏

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Wonderful update loved it a lot👏👏👏

Do continue soon dear😊😊

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Loved the update, it's amazing.

Ragini tried to threaten Sanskaar? That's not very smart of her and here I was thinking that this Ragini is more intelligent than the one on the show...

I loved that Sanskaar told Swara the truth abiut his plotting and I am now looking forward to reading about their bond developing after this revelation!

So I was correct and Kavita was Sanskaar's first love and Is now Adarsh's wife? Is she in cahoots with Ragini and did she come to break SwaSan up?

I really hope that Swara is strong enough to stand against this new entry!

Looking forward to reading the next update.

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: ketty84
Love it update soon

Thanks dear😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: harshsriti
saku.. first of all sorry I just finished part 6 now.. very late to comment. . but I must say part 6 is the most interesting update on this ss.. omg lakshji.. what a pathetic guy.. he pretend to be in love with ragini and then cheated her.. here lakshji is cheaper than onscreen. . here I can't tolerate him.. he cheated ragini.. whatever she is better than this creep.. I just can't believe it. . loved that slap. . sanskar have feelings for swara na.. I think so.. I'm writing all about poison part .. I loved it very much.. boss and PA are outstanding. . loved their interactions. . I loved the introduction of this part.. about dreams and hopes.. superb dear.. you are just amazing. so we can see laksji as obsessed lover.. oh . he is.. how rudely he talked to sanskar.. how dare he.. saku. now I'm going to read the next part..will comment soon

It's alright Jwala dear😊

Part six, hmm...yes Ragini deserves much better but what to do, love is blind na?

Sanskar has feelings for her, I mean who wouldn't when she's so cute?

The poison is important so I'm glad you liked it better, hope you'd like the next part too😳

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: manasie23
Though I think Sanskaar deserved her slaps I felt so bad for him... Love and revenge can sometimes make people blind to others emotions and did Swara meet with the accident before they ever confessed their love??
Also is Kavita Adarsh's wife in this story??
This part is actually very well written I could really feel Sanskaar's & Swara's pain while reading it...

Manasie, thanks dear😊

I really didn't want to slap him broke my heart too, but what can I do he deserved it. Yes, the accident happened way too early but don't worry we have elixir right?

Yes, she is Adarsh's wife.

Thanks again😳