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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the PM and I loved this one. It was awesome as always.
I liked the phone call between this two. Every Swasan scenes is much appreciated due to the lack of such scenes in the show.

Office romance well I am sure I would like to see Sanskaar as a business man. I am sure he will not be too stone cold.

Mystery aspect as usual you have a knack for it. So far it interesting can't wait to see how it unfolds.

Can't wait for the next update. Do PM me when you update next part.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update Sakura!! The poison and elixir mix in the chapter was awesome.
I loved the analogies you used in this chapter. The Mahabharat reference was brilliant.
Hoping to read some Swasan office romance.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

WoW! This plot seems super interesting! Quite a lot of mystery gng on at present! My fav genre!! 🥳


Do cont soon... I'm kinda hooked to this now! 😳


PS: Btw luv ur UN! Cherry blossoms! 😳 Reminds me of my fav manga character! 😃

Thanks😃 It is my favorite genre too! I'll continue soon.
@ PS: Thanks again.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Thanks for the PM and I loved this one. It was awesome as always.

I liked the phone call between this two. Every Swasan scenes is much appreciated due to the lack of such scenes in the show.

Office romance well I am sure I would like to see Sanskaar as a business man. I am sure he will not be too stone cold.

Mystery aspect as usual you have a knack for it. So far it interesting can't wait to see how it unfolds.

Can't wait for the next update. Do PM me when you update next part.

Thank you dear😊
Yes he won't be stone cold, but he will be cold though. I'll update soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
So Boss fell in love with Swara. DP milaye jodi as part of taking the king out (with his queen?) wondering where devarji comes in? Did dadi really want Ragini to be Laksh's wife or was she talking about Sanskar but Ragz wanted Lucky
looking forward to the poisonous vile lifting and leaving behind only the pure elixir
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hmmm...so this was Ragini and swara's poisonous past--as you so aptly put.
With her grandmother's tone..I actually do not blame her for being so flighty.

The way you described, Swra tasting his name...rolling it various ways to suit herself...was great.,
"basketball nahi khelna hai.." ab ayi na biwi bahar.:)))

I loved the lion-cub analogy...and what happened to adarsh? another incident is obvio here.

So thats how sanky was swara's boss.

Very tightly written Saku...
Love ya..

--Medha.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Great update Sakura!! The poison and elixir mix in the chapter was awesome.

I loved the analogies you used in this chapter. The Mahabharat reference was brilliant.
Hoping to read some Swasan office romance.

Thank you dear😊
At the present the elixir is mixed with poison. Thanks for mentioning the Mahabharata reference you're hopes would be fulfilled soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight

So Boss fell in love with Swara. DP milaye jodi as part of taking the king out (with his queen?) wondering where devarji comes in? Did dadi really want Ragini to be Laksh's wife or was she talking about Sanskar but Ragz wanted Lucky

looking forward to the poisonous vile lifting and leaving behind only the pure elixir

Hmm, the PA is interesting we'll see what happens.
Devar Ji usually comes between Mia Biwi🤢
You'll see what Dadi wants soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'll check it now😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
That's awesome..
New plot..

So DP is the one who plants Swara in Sankar's life???
I guess some thing but i will it till myself!!!

Just Confused??
Why is swara refering Sanskar as her husband??
sorry if i m mistanken??

Continue soon..
Do PM me plz!!

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