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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: medhasankar
Hmmm...so this was Ragini and swara's poisonous past--as you so aptly put.
With her grandmother's tone..I actually do not blame her for being so flighty.

The way you described, Swra tasting his name...rolling it various ways to suit herself...was great.,
"basketball nahi khelna hai.." ab ayi na biwi bahar.:)))

I loved the lion-cub analogy...and what happened to adarsh? another incident is obvio here.

So thats how sanky was swara's boss.

Very tightly written Saku...
Love ya..

--Medha.

Hi Medha🤗

It was a part of the poisonous past. Dadi would make anyone flighty.

I love lions glad you liked it dear. Nothing happened to Adarsh, Adarsh happened to someone else.

Yes, they are boss and PA at the moment.

Thanks Medha, Love you too🤗

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Sakura i'm very glad that you are back with another story otherwise i was going to miss your wonderful stories 😳
So Swara lost her memory? Sounds interesting. Ragini is the same 🤢 Such a cruel woman she is.
And Laksh, better not speak about him 🥱
Very interested to know how will Sanskar deal with her 😆
The 2nd chapter: another superb update Sakura 👏 Ragini caused Dida's incident and DP agreed to help Swara on a condition. Wow 😆 She will have to keep an eye on Sanskar. Eagerly waiting to read the next part 😳

Thank you very much dear😊

I don't wish to talk about Laksh either, can't help writing about him though. Then Ragini, I like her cruel. Swara's memory loss is genuine at least😳

Chapter 2

Yes, she is going to keep an eye on Sanskar, no idea how well that would go though.

I'll update soon😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
That's awesome..
New plot..

So DP is the one who plants Swara in Sankar's life???
I guess some thing but i will it till myself!!!

Just Confused??
Why is swara refering Sanskar as her husband??
sorry if i m mistanken??

Continue soon..
Do PM me plz!!

Thanks dear😊

And to ease your confusion. The parts that starts with the word poison are flashbacks of past. The parts that start with the word elixir are present situation.

Swara and Sanskar are married in the present where Swara has lost her memory because of some incident. That is why she calls him her husband, because he is.

But in past he was her boss and she was his PA.😊

Did you by any chance missed the first chapter dear?

I'll continue soon, and will try to PM you😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Shikha022
interesting !!

Thanks😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Very intriguing indeed, Saku. Loved the way you seamlessly shift from poison to elixir, past to present. 😊

So Sanskaar almost beat up Adarsh, huh? Any chance you could do me a favor and make him beat up Lakshya, like real badly, in a future chapter? 😆

Did you earlier watch IPK by any chance? The whole Sanskaar forcing Swara to marry him, putting a condition before Dida, reminded me of echoes of Arnav trying to force Khushi to marry him/ stay with him, when he could very well have tried a gentler, romantic approach. But of course, you would reveal the circumstances in your story like a beautiful gift being unwrapped. 😊 There seems to be a clue that the marriage here wasn't entirely forced, since Sanskaar tells Swara in the present, that he didn't compel her.

I found the inter-meshed relationships fascinating. Ragini's alliance was first proposed for Sanskaar...and at that stage she and Lakshya were apparently in a relationship. So at that stage, with Swara joining as Sanskaar's PA, really curious as to how Lakshya detaches himself from Ragini's orbit and gets fascinated by Swara.

Thanks for the PM, but as is my wont, I had already read the chapter before I got it. 😉 Can't resist, you see!

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago