Swaragini ff: 'YOU ARE THE ONE' CH 6 pg 20 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Really loved this start. They both younger and ragini and laksh elders. Super 1st time swara saw sanskar. Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gayu6

Really loved this start. They both younger and ragini and laksh elders. Super 1st time swara saw sanskar. Continue soon

Thanksss I'll update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HEYA PEOPLE I LOVED UR RESPONSES THANKS A LOT ALL.. KEEP READING


CHAPTER 1

COLLEGE
"Ragini lets do sme cultural program this year on annual fest" Saesha suggested. "Not a bad idea saesha" ruchi added, ragini was in her thoughts that how she ll handle her masi n mausiji today. Nikhil tickled her n she came to her senses. "Wat is this nikhil" ragini said laughing. "We asked smthng lost princess.
" wat I can't hear" ragini said n all giggled.LOL
"Abt cultural program on fest" ragini nodded fr her approval.
"But wat can we do being a group of 5" amar said suddenly entered laksh n gang to conference hall.
"We r 9 dude.." Laksh pointed to consider his group ( adhira, omi, niti ) being in fr programs.
"Then only 8" ragini stood up "I m offf it now" she took her bag n left.
Laksh never liked the way she treated him but he loved her straight forward n clear mindset."saesha baby this is very bd ur frnd always does tht" he complained.

'"Let her b its her choice" amar said.
'But ull b a part of it I'll make it sure' he thought n folded his arms.

SCHOOL
"Tumhe b kuch nai kha na unhone" sanskar asked swara n she ssimplynoded.
"NaBhaiai mere hote hue no way" uttara proudly said.
"Take care u bboth" sanskar said n left. He turned n smiled swara. Swara starred feeling smthng was tht infatuation bt whatever a start of wat was known as teenage love.
"Kya hua swara u OK" uttara asked "yea" swara simply smiled n left with her.

IN CLASS
"Class give me your notebooks for checking" said their Hindi teacher.
"Swara hv u done ur wrk" asked a frightened uttra as she hd not done her work." Ya I hv done " she smiled n handed her book to mam n went out.
"Yrrr u know miss warned me to complete my wrk by tomorrow I'll try to complete it any cost else I m gone." She said " don't wry ho jaega" swara holded her shoulder. Suddenly a girl came running to them " uttara uttara" both of them turned her rushing to them . " arey priya kya hua itna kyun bhag ri hh" priya was breathing heavily as she was running. "Tere Bhai.. Bhai ki ladai ho gai niketan se (niketan was the same boy with whom uttara involved in conflict). " wat kya bol ri h tu, is niketan ko to me" uttara clenched her jaws. "Uttara gusse se acha h chalke dekho kya hua h" swara suggested n both of them went to playground. They were shocked to see sanskar fighting with niketan blood was gushing frm his hand, it was a serious fight. Swara went scared as she has never seen such things. She was crying. Uttara too became frightened as it looked very serious.

Niketan punched sanskar, sanskar kissed the ground with a thud he stood up n pinched back to him. Ajeet (sanskar's friend ) also hitted niketan. Niketan got more angry he was abt to hit sanskar wen uttara shouted "bhaii ..." Niketan turned to see her. He clenched his jaws. Swara followed uttara unknowingly. Uttara hugged sanskar "Bhai theek ho ap" sanskar glared niketan wen he was abt to snatch uttara "dnt u dare she is my life smjha." Sanskar gave him I'll kill u look.
Niketan saw swara standing shivering opposite to sanskar n uttara. She was not in her senses niketan was fuming in full anger. There were teachers also but no one could ques either sanskar or niketan as both were trustee's kids.
He moved to swara n slapped her to reveal his anger as he wants to take off his anger, remembering uttara's words she is my bestie he did that.
Swara feel on ground.
"Swara" shouted uttara. Sanskar rushed to niketan to hit him so hard that he fell on ground. "How dare u touch her, she was innocent u pig I won't spare u now" he started beating him endlessly then ajeet held him."chor use sanskar bus" ajeet holded him.
Sanskar went to swara who was in uttara's arms crying. Sanskar came to her, he felt bad that without any reason she faced that. "Swara" she saw him n freed her frm uttara hug n was going wen sanskar held her hand "please listen" swara jerked her hand. "Ap... App bht bure ho" she cried n left running.
"Uttara I want to apologise to her" uttara holded him. "Bhai she is very sensitive, its natural" uttara consoled him.
But sanskar felt pitty he hd thought of it. The time he hd seen swara he couldn't believe anyone cn b that innocent.

COLLEGE

Ragini was in garden completing her notes for next lecture. When laksh came n sat beside her. "Hi rags" ragini saw him n turned her face n continue ued her work. Laksh sat on the grass to face her " ohooo itna ignore bebs pura college lucky pe Marta h" ragini saw him closed her books "bus tum Hi nai marte" she stood up "yrrr tum bezti kr deti ho" ragini smiled not facing him. "Tumhare kam Hi aise h" she faced him. "Acha plzzz participate in program" ragini twitched her lips "no way I m not interested." She was abt to go wen laksh came in her front "please we need u for our programe" he sat on his foot begging her. Ragini felt embraced the way he was reacting.
"Laksh get up, kya kr re ho" she said making him stand. "Rags pehle to call me lucky n say yes " ragini looked at him "okkk okkk bt ull behave OK" she showed him finger he entwinged his finger to her "done" ragini jerked his finger n left.

GADODIA mansion

Swara was in her room still in shock of wat hpnd in school. Just thn her masi entered.
"Swara chal bazar se saman le aa" she handed her lost. "Nai me nai jaungi" swara buries her in bed. Her aunt fumed in anger n holded her shoulder n was abt to slap her wen ragini shouted "masi kya kr ri h ap," she threw her bag on bed n took swara in her arms. "Apki himmat kese hui meri bhn ko hath lagane ki" she widened her eyes. "Bhulie mt ap hmari or business ki bus caretaker h jb tk hmari shadi nai hoti , to yaad rkhie frm now don't even try to touch my sister" ragini showed her aunt to go out.

She made swara sit. "Shona kya hua," swara hugged her sister n cried alot. "Shona kya hua masi ne kuch kha kya" ragini cupped swara's face, to which swara nodded in no. "Fr kya hua" she asked with concern. Swara narrated her everything. Ragini clenched her jaws. She was very protective for her baby sister , she had neva touched her n so she cnt bear anyone hitting her. " u r gone niketan n sanskar" she murmured n hugged swara.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
That's Nice..
Poor Swara..
what will happen next??

Ragini's confort Sanskar???

Continue soon..
Thank you for the PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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poor swara.. very nice Niyati.. continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

That's Nice..

Poor Swara..
what will happen next??

Ragini's confort Sanskar???

Continue soon..
Thank you for the PM..

Ohhh thanksss I'll update asap
Love
Niyati
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Poor Swara 😭 Niketan shouldn't have slapped her and her masi got angry with her 😕
Continue soon Niyati 😳
Edited by Smilelicious - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Poor Swara 😭 Niketan shouldn't have slapped her and her masi got angry with her 😕
Continue soon Niyati 😳

Thanksss for a reading .. I'll update asap😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

MAHESHWARI mansion

All were at dinner table.
"Kya hua sanky itna sad" asked laksh to sanskar was in his deep thoughts.
"Bhai vo ..." He stopped thinking of swara's crying face. His heart panged every now n then at her thought. "Nai nothing" he left without having his food.
Uttara saw him in disbelief , she knew he was upset bt nothing very serious fr hum could upset him that to ignore his fvrte daal baati.
"Lucky Bhai" laksh saw her "Bhai bht upset h" n she narrated today's incident to laksh.. "Niketan saesha ka Bhai" he exclaimed. "Hann vai" laksh shudered in disbelief.
He went to sanskar's room. He was going through laptop. "Isme kya dhund ra h" he sat beside him. "Bhai vo swa..." He realised he was still thinking abt her."kya"asked laksh. "Acha ye chor bta Teri kavita kesi" he teased him with her girlfrnd's name. The very moment sanskar realised while day hw had not even talked to her being upset cz of swara.
"Thanksss Bhai yaad dilane k lie" hd hugged laksh n searched for his phn."ek bt bta kiskd yaad me tu kavita ko b bhul gya" sanskar couldnt make out why he was unable to forget her crying face.

Next day in school.

Ragini went to principal to complaint about sanskar n niketan.
"Mam this is not the way , niketan slapped my sister without any reason, ap log kuch action ni lenge," she angrily said.
"No miss. Ragini not like that ," she took the phn "let me call here elder brother n sister" after 15 minutes laksh n saesha came along with niketan n sanskar n
Uttara n swara were also called.

"Mam niketan cnt do tht I think ragini ko koi galat femi hui h" ragini fumed in anger n so sanskar.
"Acha apko bht pta h me tha vhn " sanskar turned to principal "mam he hd slapped swara" sanskar pointed him n shared an emotional glance with frightened swara. "Sanskar tu chup kr" laksh indicated him to stay off the matter.
"Niketan that was total nonsense wat u did, u r suspended n I'll make sure ur father wnt say anything." Shouted principal n came upto swara "never be scared ur sister loves u like anything g" she shared a smile with ragini. They all went off the office.
Niketan was abt to leave "wait niketan" said ragini. "Never ever dare to touch my sister" she glared him with anger. "Else I won't spare u" saesha came fr her brother's defence "ragini I n sorry on her s behalf he won't repeat it, I'll make tht sure" she tried ragini to get calm "he better don't n she left in anger instructing swara to go in her class.

Lunch break.

Swara was bit normal now. She was hanging out with uttara n priya. They were sharing light chats wen sanskar cme with ajeet n his other frnds including kavita. He was holding kavita's hand.
" uttara tu b na" swara laughed out loud at uttara's joke that grasped sanskar's attention he saw tht angelic smile that almost took his heart. He loosened grip on kavita's finger n sat on a table right in front of swara's n sat cupping his face constantly glaring her. Kavita sat beside him "wat hpnd sanskar" "nothing eat u want for lunch" sanskar changed the topic. "Anything" she softly said. He told his frnds to get coffee. Uttara saw him nn called him to join thm. Swara felt uncomfortable bt remained queit. "Arey uttara aj bht khush lg ri h" actually question was fr swara frm sanskar. Swara held her head down. "Han Bhai finally vo niketan ko punishment mile or kya chahie tha" uttara smiled to sanskar. "Excuse me" said swara n took her bag n was abt to go. "Khn jari h" asked priya. "Vo mera music rehearsal h hv to go ," she bid a good bye n left. Sanskar knew she was frightened cz of his presence. He wanted to remove that at any cost. "Uttara wat music hn" he asked to uttara. "Arey vo she is lead guitarist n singer fr annual fest of excel. " ohhh " said sanskar , he dint knew she was so talented. "Bhai apka basketball ka practice ho gya" ( sanskar was a basketball frwak n was captain if school team as he was supposed to present the school along with team for an competition after 2 days, so uttara asked him. ) "shit! Not yet , thnkss fr reminding me" s
He left rushing through corridor.

COLLEGE

"So decided we I'll do a play on devdass" said excited niti. "N devdas will b my lucky n me paro" said saesha..
"Fr to ye ho gai devdas" ragini whispered others giggled. "People I was telling ki it will b better if paro ragini will play" laksh winked to ragini she stared him in shock. Saesha glared him "baby paro to dur ho jati h na tu to meri chandramukhi h" she smiled n hugged him. "Kitna bda beshrm h ye laksh" said ragini to ruchi. "I agree bht bda" ruchi added. "So paro.. I mean ragini script likhna start kre" said laksh with his naughty smile. "Lucky I'll throw off u frm here" she said being disguised "I not be paro" laksh laughed u ll b paro" he teased her "paro! Paro! " ragini ran behind him n he made her cover whole of the loby bt at one level she tripled on him. Their eyes met. Laksh was lost in her beauty.
She hit him n got up. "Tum na lucky.. " both burst in laughter.
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SCHOOL
"chal na swara ab to rehearsal's b khtm na plzz Bhai ki practice dekhte h" insisted uttara . "no tujhe Hindi ka homewrk dena tha na" she reminded her. "Arey idiot mam is absent" swara felt trapped as no option was left fr her to escape, she simply noded n went with her to view practice.

Basketball court

Sanskar was in black vest n trousers , girls were going mad over him. Swara saw him , she couldn't deny tht she was attracted to him bt according to her he was "bad boy". So she controlled her emotions.

Kavita sat in front to cheer her bf. " hit it sanky " she flied kisses to him sanskar turned at her action n was numbed to see that angel there. She was sitting folding her arms, not facing anyone.
He unknowingly flied kiss in her direction luckily no one noticed expect him. "Yrr m I gone mad kya" he smacked his head. "Sanky come-on man its gonna start focus on practice" he said to himself.

PRECAP: RagLak fight , n SwaSan frst love moment.

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DONE
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Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
That's nice...
Ragini is good here...
sANKY FALLS FOR sWARA..
WOOOWW...


Thank you for the PM..
Continue soon

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