Swaragini ff: 'YOU ARE THE ONE' CH 6 pg 20 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting update Niyati.. swasan have feelings for each other.. very good.. continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

That's nice...

Ragini is good here...
sANKY FALLS FOR sWARA..
WOOOWW...


Thank you for the PM..
Continue soon

Thanksss I'll update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshsriti



interesting update Niyati.. swasan have feelings for each other.. very good.. continue soon

Thanksss ... I'll update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

COLLEGE

All were excited for play they had registered themselves for play as a team. Now ragini was also comfortable with laksh n gang. The rehearsal hall was filled with crackling laughter n chats.
"Lucky so lets start , u take ur position" ruchi told laksh to sit beside ragini as they were supposed to enact a scene. Laksh stood up n was slowly approaching ragini like a hero. "Hurry up dnt walk like newly wedded bride , we hv class in next 15 minutes" ragini said looking at her watch."mtlb u guys will leave then" laksh huffed. "So wat u thought" ruchi glared him. "Guys vese really not in mood of attending class na" amar sat smacking his head. "Oh hlo amar wake up, I m not gna miss class got tht" yelled ragini . "OK so tell me he many cn miss the class" lucky asked. "Baby wants so I cn" ragini simply huffed as she knew her reaction already. "Look people its
Your wish to stay or not but sorry I cnt miss out class at all" she picked her bag n was about to go.. "Rags wait m also cmng.. " ruchi followed her. "U guys carry on we ll see u after class bye" ruchi smiled to all. Amar n nikhil to followed them. Laksh being frustrated "Ragini u cnt simply take decisions for all" ragini saw him in disguise.
"I dint took decision. For anyone they came with me" she pointed to all "but u forced them" laksh yelled at her. "Stop shouting OK , I m not ur baby saesha that I'll look upon to ur orders , got it" they both were standing looking each other in full anger. "To enact something reharsalsr important. " from last 45 minutes u were wasting ur time in gigles then u dint remembered of rehearsals n all" she fumed in anger. "Really n rags. Bebs was sitting without saying a word no" laksh forwarded to her. "But then u u saesha k chamche" laksh almost lost his control his weakness was his anger he couldn't take bad words for her. He raised his hand to ragini but then then saw her two dark eyes n stopped his hand. Ragini was shocked and in tears "dude wat u dng control." His friend stopped him. "Get lost ragini GADODIA" laksh yelled n ragini left from there. "Are u mad laksh" ruchi said pointing to laksh . "u stay off it" ruchi smiled sarcastically "u know wat laksh we were neva a team n cn neva b, so u get lost." Ruchi yelled at him n left. "Saesha saw laksh " u cnt behave to my frnd this way" she said with tears n left. Ruchi hugged her n they went to see ragini who was in garden sitting dumply engrossed in books.
Saesha sat holding her ears "I m sorry rags" ragini saw saesha in tears she hugged her "u mad kya, u r my bestie pagl, laksh cnt break our friendship" ragini smiled to her. "Thanksss rags" ragini cupped her face "n I m sorry for wat I told to u" she pointed to that "chamcha" word. Saesha smiled n so ragini.

SCHOOL

BASKET BALL GROUND

Match started with full pace. Sanskar was almost wet with sweat his body shined n swara was just drilling in him. Kavita was admiring her teenage love for sanskar.
Finally after the rehearsals all stood up to leave wen kavita ran to him n hugged him tight "well played love" sanskar hugged her back n kissed her forehead. Swara was still sitting simply discovering the new pang she was feeling. "Swara lets go yrrr its over" uttara shouted n swara came to her senses. She followed uttara. Uttara went to sanskar who was standing with kavita holding her waist.
Uttara hugged him. "Wow well played Bhai" sanskar simply smiled to her , swara n priya. "Ya sanskar that was really cool" added priya. "OK OK thanks stop appreciating me that much" he than saw a quiet swara standing next to them . "u dint liked kya" all looked to swara she saw him n others. When uttra said "Bhaiya swara lol u don't know kya she was champion till 5 in that all techniques everything , she could taught u but left it after 6" swara knew she played basketball only cz her late father likes it but after she left he dint continued it.
Sanskar was dumpstruck seeing that jeck of all trade. "So wana play a game." Kavita dint liked sanskar's instant reaction to it.
"No act.. Actually I left it long ago." She said being frightened. "At least u cn try." He huffed. "No I don't want" n she left. Sanskar was disappointed n so was uttara. "Koi bt h kya uttara" uttara nodded as she is not aware.
Sanskar kept staring going swara with his arms folded.
Swara went to an empty conference hall she was missing her maa and baba. She remembered her father's words.
"Shona tu mera beta tu mera naam roshan kregi" shekar's words echoed in her ears. "Tu apne baba k lie basketball ni seekh skti please" she remembered how much her baba Loved this sport he played it on state level but due to some major injury in his knees he could not continue it. Tears rolled down her cheek she took her Guitar n started playing with strings so well that everyone outside cane in to listen to her music.
She started "Laakh duniya kahe, tum nai ho" she wiped her tears all started cheering her. "Tum yai ho, tum yai ho she continued singing .
Sanskar , kavita, priya n uttara were moving frm the conference room wen heard some song being played.
"Arrey wow who is singing this soft song" exclaimed sanskar. "I think its swara's voice." Priya added , uttara nodded in yes n they all went in.
Swara was engrossed in her lyrics n the strings of guitar every string she played saanskar's heart skipped a beat. He couldn't believe how someone cn be so beautiful. He smiled to her. Swara finally completed her song n opened her eyes to realise that she was surrounded a number of people. She hesitantly stood up n was relieved to see uttara n priya between crowd she ran to them then realised kavita n sanskar were also there. "Wow swara that was amazing" uttara hugged her.
"U OK na" asked priya "ya priya I m fine n I hv decided to restart basketball for my baba" she smiled , priya knew the reason behind not continuing basketball. "Good" priya smiled to swara "wow that's nice" uttara added. "So wen r u cmng to learn basics" sanskar said being excited. Kavita ft irritated. Swara smiled. "My baba was a national level player. Since I was 3 I was learning basketball with him. I M well versed in it but ya may be my skills would hv faded I'll clear them" sanskar saw her with smile. "Thankss" she said to sanskar sarcastically.
"But then music" sanskar asked uttara n priya who looked really interested in knowing abt swara. His every question. Was making kavita irritated. "Vo to her mom was a classical Bengali singer n her sister continued it so she just joined them but is not trained in it." Uttara completed. N swara nodded that her frnds cnt shut. She fakely smiled. "Okk suno swara n priya u both hv to come to my house tomorow" uttara said making all surprised. "Kya h kal" asked sanskar , uttara slamed his head. "Bhaul gae na kal adarsh Bhai.. " before se could complete sanskar bit his tongue. "Ohh ya please u all join us Bhai ki sagai h" he completed. "I cnt promise I'll ask di" uttara glared her "dI will also hv to come n u both r coming no excuse." She raised her brow. "OK OK I'll talk to her" swara said n left.
As she left sanskar turned to uttara.
"Ohhh but she has a beautiful voice" said sanskar. Uttara noded. N sanskar turned to see kavita who was not around. "Arey kavita kahan chali gai" he looked all around. "Acha I'll join u later bye" n he left.

COLLEGE

laksh was on the roof "ye ragini jyada Hi akdu h" he ran his hands through his hairs. "Ise to sabak sikhana Hi padega" suddenly his phone rang it was Annapurna, "han maa" "kahan h jaldi aja beta kal adarsh ki sagai h bht kaam h tu or sanskar thoda help kra doge." Said Annapurna , laksh saw his watch n realised it was 7 now. He was supposed to leave by then so he took his bag n left.
"Wow lucky superb idea." He went down n called everyone from his n ragini's group.
"Ragini I m sorry I won't repeat it" he pleaded all smiled. "It's OK" she said turning her face. "So agr tumne mujhe maaf kr dia to tum kal mere ghr meri Bhai ki sagai pe aaogi" he turned all "n tum b" they smiled n agreed.

MAHESHWARI MANSION

"Sanskar laksh ye lo ye Sara saman andar rkhvo do" both shared glances. "OK ma" said together. N holded that n stressly took it laughing n running to see who will win. "Ohhh bhaiyo gir jaoge." Uttara shouted seeing them running like idiot with bskets of fruits.
"Uttara me Hi jitunga" shouted laksh approaching to temple. "Acha dekhte h" sanskar added. N he ran faster. Both of them together kept it together. They laughed n hugged each other.
"He chore kbi bde na hoenge jiji" laughed sujata looking at them.

Sanskar n laksh were on terace.
"Bhai ye bta tu saesha k sth he na" laksh came of his thoughts abt ragini. "Hnnn kyun nai" he touched his shoulder kyun tu kavita k sth khush nai h kya " sanskar smiled "nai nai aisa nai h" both of them sat ."ek bt bataun Pyar vyar kuch nai hota" said laksh. Sanskar went in deep thoughts of swara.

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Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Nice..
swara is so talented..

Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thank you for the PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
awesome ff..loved it core...sry fr late rly n tq fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Read 3 parts in one go.Loved so both having not love bt some girl with them. They r nt their true love.Soon they feel their true love towards swaragini. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this is becoming more and more interesting. . swara is going to restart basketball. . it is very interesting. . I'm loving it. . continue soon Niyu..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Hmm.. read all the chapters.. interesting..
It's a new perspective to reverse the roles of the brothers and sisters.. Ragini love Sw a lot!! Lak and San also seem to be quite caring about each other.. uttara is really cute.. I used to love her in the show until I read the spoiler. But here I love her.. she is catalyst for SwSan.

Thanks for the pm Nia.. continue soon.
Edited by Sparkler8 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb
Continue soon
Thank for pm

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