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Posted: 9 years ago

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CHAPTER 6

MAHESHWARI MANSION

"Yrrr itna udass sangeet hota h kya" exclaimed adarsh. "Je tu tune bilkul theek kha adarsh" said sujata all were standing there. Laksh n ragini were away from each other as they were unable to face them. Swara was with uttara yrrr priya niketan ajit n sanskar n kavita but sanskar dint liked swara n niketan's friendship.

"To kuch krte h na" said uttara excitedly. "Ya right hmara sangeet to bht feeka sa h" parineeta said. "To chalo mere pass ek idea h" Annapurna said. All stared Annapurna in shockz she was the eldest n ideas. All giggled. "Maa idea or ap" said sanskar . "kyu tum bcho ko Hi idea aa skte h kya" all giggled. "Nai maa acha bataie kya idea h" laksh wrapped his arms around Annapurna. Others smiled. "Dekho sb jodiyan bnao n fir dance krlo sbko maza aega n sbka nachna b ho jaega" she looked to all for approval.

"Wow maa awesome idea." Exclaimed adarsh. "Hnn maa but couple bnae kese" uttara said all went in thoughts. "Hum btate h" came durga prasad along with ram prasad.

"Kya Bade papa aap" exclaimed uttara. "To kya hua beta agar apki bdi maa idea de skti h to hum nai kya" he winked to Annapurna. "Oye hoye papa , is umar me b" giggled laksh n others all. Ragini too got an smile on her lips, laksh noticed that n finally was happy to managed to do so.

"Arey uncle ap bataie, laksh tum unhe tang mt kro" said swara, sanskar was shocked she mingled with his family so well. "Hn uncle ap kahie" added ragini. "Kahie bta de Annapurna" durga prasad teased her. "Kya bhaisa ap b jiji ko cher rhe h" sujata said n Annapurna was blushing. "Arey bus b ap bataie bde papa" added sanskar.

"Hum sb ladkiyon k naam ki chits bnaenge or lasdke unhe dhundenge . his ladki ki chit jis ladke k pass hogi unki Jodi, hn lekin hum or Annapurna, adarsh parineeta or sujata or ram nai bdlenge" he completed. "Kya bhaisa humne b khelna padega kya" said ram prasad. Sujata n Annapurna went excited. "Kyu nai ram bilkul" said durga prasad.

All clapped n durga prasad and ram prasad made chits. Laksh unknowingly was praying to get chit of ragini n ragini don't wanted to dance with him. Saesha hoped laksh gets her chit. Whereas sanskar was in dillema to wat he want kavita or swara , he left it on god.
Swara was all neutral standing chatting non stop to uttara. Uttara who secretly liked niketan wanted to be chosen by him.

"Kya hua uttara, br br vhn kya dekh ri ho" swara said wen she saw her seeing constantly where boys was standing. She kept her head low. "Vo swara , kuch b to nai" she completed blushing. Priya came to them with a plate of some snacks. "Lo kha lo , dance se pehle energy aa jaegi," giglled swara n uttara.

"Chalo chalo sb aa jao, ladko ko ladkiyan mil gai h" girls got excited n all stood in front of boys so that they could get hold of their girls. All boys were standing without any reaction to make sure none of the girls to get to know by their expressions. Parineeta was standing in the girls group. "Arey pari tum yhn kya kr ri ho hum safe h yrr" said adarsh n took her with him. "Adarsh ap b na" she shyed. "Oho Bhaiya Bhabhi ka pyaar" uttara teased them.

"Chalo batao ab sb" said ram prasad to all the boys. Laksh went forward saesha n ragini were standing together. He came to saesha n then turned to ragini n holded her hand. "Ragini its u.." He said n stared her deep eyes. Ragini was nervous , yes she was not yet able to forget wat happened yesterday. She simply went beside him. Saesha clapped. "Ragini hitt it" she shouted. She loved her best friend more than laksh. Next was nikhil "he came to saesha " aja sush" saesha n nikhil Hi fied , they were friends , n were happy to be together.

Next was ajit(he is sanskar's frnd) he came to priya "will u" he forwarded his hand. Priya cutely placed her palm on his. It was SANSKAR now. He looked confused n came to swara "vo.. Swara" he showed her chit with her name. She smiled widely , how much she deny but ya she liked being chosen by him. Sanskar heave a sigh of relief she agreed. Niketan came to uttara n took her by his side. Priya winked to her. Omi (laksh's friend ) came to ruchi , ya they became couple. Amar and kavita , and adhira n niti were chosen by some some boys.

Everyone went to rehearse till the three already selected couples performed. "Laksh hum nai kr paenge ," they were in some corner. "Ragini suno I m sorry I don't mean to do that bus ho gya" he said ragini saw tears of guilt in his eyes. "Nai laksh galti hmari b thi" she held her head low. "To theek h na sorry from both again friend" he excitedly said. Ragini smiled n simply nodded. "To song to decide kr" they both went in deep thoughts to select a song.
But finally they decided.

"Acha sanskar koi song socha h" swara said excitedly. "Nai swara, tum btao" sanskar said n swara saw him with raised brows. "Mmm this will be perfect. She raised hand for hi-fi , sanskar saw her as wat to do , she holded her hand n met her palm with her. " aise sanskar" n she giggled. Sanskar kept seeing this beauty. "Chalo ab vrna hum main performance chor denge" she held her hand n took him with her.

Others also decided their song n came n sat to watch this new style of sangeet.

It Bevin with performance by the stars of the evening adarsh n parineeta .
Sukh dukh jhoothe
Dhan bhi jhootha
Jhoothi moh-maaya
Saccha mann ka wo kona jahaan
Prem ratan paaya
Prem ratan paaya..

She swirled with hands in front of her face, n walked in front , all clapped. (Swara saw sanskar who was lost in performace, "sanskar mujhe b gane ka mn kr ra h" he saw her , she was sweetly seeing him. "Sath me galo" he holded her hand. Swara sang along with it just heard by sanskar.)
ni ni sa sa re re sa sa...
Payo... Payo...
Laayo... Chaayo
Aayo... Gaayo..
Payo...
Adarsh entered n holded parineeta's waist they shakes their legs.

Saiyan tu kamaal ka
Baatein bhi kamaal ki
Laaga rang jo tera
Hui main kamaal ki
Laksh n ragini were reharsing for their performance wen they collided. They were lost in each others eyes.

Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo re..
Prem ratan dhan payo (payo..)
Prem ratan dhan payo (payo..)
Rut milan ki laayo
Prem ratan..
Prem ratan dhan payo maine (payo..)
Prem ratan dhan payo
Parineeta turned n adarsh holded her hands n they swirled.

Kya main dikha doon
Yaa main chupa loon
Jo dhan hai mann mein
Yeh bhi na jaanu
Bajne lagi kyun sargam si tann mein
Uttara was lost in niketan who was dance regarding with her ."uttara khn kho gai" he clicked . she blushed "nai kuch nai"

Khushiya si hai aangan mein
Chehre pe aaye meri rangatein gulaal ki
Laaga rang jo tera hui main kamaal ki
Sanskar saw swara she was going clapping, he wrapped his arm around her waist , she saw him in disbelief. But sanskar dint reacted simply stood without reacting. Swara managed to blush.

Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo re..
Prem ratan dhan payo (payo..)
Prem ratan dhan payo (payo..)
Mann gagan par chayo
Prem ratan..
Prem ratan dhan payo maine (payo..)
Prem ratan dhan payo
Pareenita n adarsh completed dance , adarsh took her in her arms.
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo
Payo re payo re payo re payo re payo r.
All cheered them with big round of applause.

Annapurna durga prasad n sujata n ram performed together
Aye meri zohra-jabeen, tujhe maalum nahi Tu abhi tak hai haseen aur main jawaan Tujhpe qurbaan meri jaan meri jaan
Annapurna came on stage holding durga prasad's hand. They have the titanic pose.
"Maa papa hit it" shouted laksh.
Aye meri zohra-jabeen. Ye shokhiyaan ye baankpan, Jo tujh mein hai kahi nahi Dilo ko jeetne ka fan, jo tujh mein hai kahi nahi Main teri
Ram came with sujata , he held his chin, she shyed. Then both the couples started shaking legs.
Main teri aankho mein paa gaya do jahaan Aye meri zohra-jabeen.Tu meethhe bol jaan-e-man, Jo muskuraake bol de To dhadhkano mein aaj bhi, Sharaabi rang ghol de Oh sanam. Oh sanam main tera aashiq-e-jaawida Eh meri zohra-jabeen.
They ended by hugging each other n Annapurna n sujata ran after the performance.
they danced so well that all couldn't stop clapping. "Sanskar tumhare family k bde to bht sexy h" swara commented making sanskar to laugh widening his jaws. Swara kept admiring his smartness. He was just looking stunning n that smile was a pearl. "Tumhari smile bht achi h" swara said sanskar saw her both looked in each others eyes. Sanskar saw her orbs, her lips her cheeks , yes she was very beautiful. Swara saw his eyes, his build up, n pinched his nose. "Kitne cute ho tum n she went from there" sanskar kept staring her did she also was feeling same wat he was feeling. He thought.

It was ragini n laksh's performance. They saw each other. "Hume dar lg ra h laksh" ragini said he holded her hands , "don't wory" sb theek hoga.
yun Tera muskurana or ake chale jana
Laksh saw ragini she was standing middle of the stage. As she was about to go , he holded her hand.
"Wooohhh" hooted everyone.

Yun tera muskurana aur aake chale jaana
Kismat ka hai khul jaana
Tera Deedar Hua, pehla sa pyar hua
Pehli hi baar hua iss dil ko
Naa toh inkaar hua
Naa hi iqraar hua
Jaane kya yaar hua iss dil ko
Laksh swirled ragini in circles , her hairs were tickling his face. He was lost in her beautiful smile.

Tujhse mila toh jaagi duaayein
Aur nazaro ne sajda kiya
Jannat zameen par aayi utar ke
Khushiyon ne jaise chun sa liya
Laksh sat on his legs n spreded his arms ragini was shaking her waist n then turned to him n placed her palm on his.

Har manzar dilnasheen hai
Tu hi tu har kahin hai
Oh.. teri ye rajayein toh hai qatilana
He stood up n shaked her shoulder with her she started dancing holding his hand.

Tera Deedar Hua, pehla sa pyar hua
Pehli hi baar hua iss dil ko
Naa toh inkaar hua
Naa hi iqraar hua
Jaane kya yaar hua iss dil ko
"Di kitni khush lg ri h" said swara , sanskar saw her as she said that. "Hn Bhai b bht khush lg ra h" both shared smiles.

Tere bina tanha tha hardam
Hothon pe hardam thi tishnagi
Maqsad nahi tha, sapne nahi thay
Thi zindagi mein aawargi
Tu mera rehnuma hai
Manzil hai raasta hai
O mere liye tu toh jaise
Rab ka hai nazrana
Ragini was continuely covering the stage by swirling n laksh kept admiring her.

Tera Deedar Hua, pehla sa pyar hua
Pehli hi baar hua iss dil ko
Naa toh inkaar hua
Naa hi iqraar hua
Jaane kya yaar hua iss dil ko
While swirling she lost her balance n fel in laksh's arms. They both staring each others . until everyone clapped. Ragini stood in embracement n went to her friends.

Sanskar n swara came on stage. Swara took her position.
Bindiya chamke, choodi khanke - 2 Laung maare lashkaare Hum ho gaye tumhaare
Swara explained everyone n the last line she ran in sanskar's arms, he holded her waist n swirled her such that she spreaded her arms in air.

Haai bindiya chamke, choodi khanke Laung maare lashkaare Hum ho gaye tumhaare O re sajan tohe mhaari kasam - 2 Arre maang ma bhar de taarein
Sanskar acted filling her maang, all were impressed by their preparation in this short time. Kavita was burning in jealously.
Hoye, bindiya chamke, choodi khanke Laung maare lashkaare Hum ho gaye tumhaare Hey, bindiya chamke, choodi khanke Laung maare lashkaare Hum ho gaye tumhaare
Sanskar held her one hand n threw her in other direction then brought her back much to bury her in his chest.
Chhupti nahin dil ki baatein Sab keh jaati hain aankhen Mujhko kuch kuch hota hai Jab thaame tu yeh baahein
Swara simply sang without dancing just moving with him n seeing in his eyes. She could feel each word.
Hum khud ko bhool jaayenge Tumko na bhool paayenge Tumko agar bhool jaayenge Hum jeena na chaahenge
Sanskar saw her as he to sang just admiring her.
Poore hue armaan saare Bas mein nahin hum hamaare Hum ho gaye tumhaare
Suddenly swara parted from him n started twisting her waist n sanskar's her instructed that.
Haai, bindiya chamke, choodi khanke Laung maare lashkaare Hum ho gaye tumhaare,
Laksh n ragini were staring each other hiding from them only.
hey! Mm, dil yeh jab lag jaata hai Phir to jiya nahin jaata hai Tum jo nazar aa jaate ho Kuch bhi nazar nahin aata hai
Sanskar swirled her , she was lost in him. Haan, pal do pal ki baat nahin Yeh janmon ka naata hai Jisse pyaar ho uska naam Dil pe likha jaata hai
Swara kept staring him wen he was playing with her hhands to make her dance.
Arre dil yeh de doon, jaan bhi de doon Kar de agar tu ishaare Hum ho gaye tumhaare
Sanskar n swara smiled looking at each other they were constantly dancing.
Haai, bindiya chamke, choodi khanke Laung maare lashkaare Hum ho gaye tumhaare --male-- O re sajan mohe thaari kasam - 2 Thaari maang ma bhar doon taarein --female-- Bindiya chamke, choodi khanke Laung maare lashkaare Hum ho gaye tumhaare, haan --male-- Bindiya chamke, choodi khanke Laung maare lashkaare Hum ho gaye tumhaare --female-- Oh, hum ho gaye tumhaare --male-- Oh, hum ho gaye tumhaare
Swara n sanskar completed , all hotted at their performance's closure.
Others also completed their dances.
"Wah wah , aj to sbne rang jama dia" said uttara , shyely seeing niketan who was still looking at swara , which did not go in noticed by sanskar. He chuckled seeing him.
"Acha h ab chalte h aunty" said ragini seeing the watch. "Nai ragini itni rat ko tum or swara kain nai jaogi, chup chap yai ruku, tum sb b hum pillow or quilt mangva dete h" ragini n others were left with no other option to agree.

All the girls were sleeping in the hall n boys were on roof.

hall
"Schme aj bht maza aya" exclaimed ruchi. "I agree" added saesha. N they continuously kept chatting n giggling wen adarsh saw them , he was here to take water. Parineeta was not with them.
He went to roof. "Tum yhn so rhe ho bhaiyo , ladkiyan vhn enjoy kr ri h" he made everyonw to wake n told them to enjoy.
"Bhai ap sch me pagla gae h unme itni himmt h mujhe nai" n sanskar kept blanket on his face n slept. But laksh removed it. "Uth na sanky , hum me MASTI krenge" said laksh "ladkiyon k sth" said ajit n winked.

hall
"Hum b aa gae" said parineeta "arey Bhabhi ap to maa k sth" said uttara "to kya , hme b ladkiyon k sth enjoy krna h" n she Sat in middle with all.

PRECAP:girls v/s boys, lights went off. N few romantic sequences.

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Niyati

Edited by Niyatiswaragini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Me first!!!!😆
Kya sangeet hai.. sach mein rang jama diya..

Nia, you should take a bow.👏 You must have really spent a lot of time writing this update finding the songs and writing the dance steps. Almost choreographing the songs..

For your updates, tere precaps baazi maar lete hain. Precap padte hue main bhool jaati hu ki update kya hai.. itne Asanskaari thoughts aate hai dimaag mein and i know your standard of romance.. kaafi high hain..😆

Now update next one soon and thank you for the pm.

Cheers
Sharon
Edited by Sparkler8 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update and dhamakedar sangeet
Swasan ka dance kitna acha tha kash aisa serial me bhi dekh paun.
Thanks for tha pm waiting for your next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
that was so sweet
thanks for The PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Niyu.. you are writing it wonderfully. . the best thing is that you are not sidelining any character. . I'm loving this.. dabce sequence was superb.. waiting for the day sanskar realise his love
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice sangeet...
DP ap sujata and RP were awesome..
Nice song selection and wonderful dance performance..

Continue soon..
Thank u for the PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved this update nia. So niketan n swara became friends sanskar is feeling jealous on seeing them. Raglak was super. Continue soon

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