Swaragini ff: 'YOU ARE THE ONE' CH 6 pg 20 - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku95

Fantastic
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gayu6

Loved this update nia. So niketan n swara became friends sanskar is feeling jealous on seeing them. Raglak was super. Continue soon

Thankss alot dear .. Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gayu6

Read the 6th chapter loved raglak n swasan dance. Pls continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Haaayyee..niyati u r brilliant. .smiling all through it..muaahh..
Pata hai loved RagLak moments ..swasan was cute..
Bt my fav was DP AP suju n Ram's romantic tym..cho chweet...

hehe thanksss alot Neha... Even I loved that elders more😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Jamina

Awesome just finished reading all parts in one go loved it
If possible do send me PM when you update next part

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Niyati dear wow,wow,wow,superb writing.
3 stories at the same time hats off to ur memory power.
I loved the dancing sequence.

Ohhh so sweet comment thankss alot ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Niyati...thnx fr pm...full filmy yar..very nice...plz update soon
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Niyati...thnx fr pm...full filmy yar..very nice...plz update soon
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CHAPTER 7

HALL

All girls were busy chatting. "Bhabhi or btaie Bhaiya ne kese propose kia" uttara asked pari. "Arey tumhare Bhaiya bht fattu the kabi propose Hi nai kia mujhe, ek BAAT bataun kise ko mt khna" all girls noded shipisly. "Vo mene adarsh ko propose kia tha, tb b vo Sharma gae the" all giglled. "Wah Bhabhi ap to bdi bold h" said swara "dhat swara tum b na" pari slamed her hand.

"Bhabhi apko or adarsh Bhai ko bht mahnat krni padi hogi na sbko manene ke lie" ragini questioned , to which pari laughed. "Arey inke ghar vale hme bahu banene ko betab the" she giggled. "Han or pta h dI jb hum Bhabhi k ghar gae the tb sb uthke chale gae the" uttara giggled n so all. "Sanskar b tha" asked kavita.(kavita was their family frnd too) "hn kavi Bhai b tha, uski to pant fat gai thi sofe pe bethte waqt" all laughed out loud at uttara's statement. Swara blushed sweetly. "Hnn mujhe yaad h, fr sanskar mere pass ae the, pari didi kuch kapde h" she rofled. "Bdi Hi tragedy ho gai thi" giglled saesha.

"Pta h saesha dI laksh Bhai ko to us din cold tha, n vo pari babhi ke mom ne muh pe cheekh gae the." Uttara was one by one reveling secret of boys. Ragini rofled n so saesha hearing abt laksh. "Hnn fr mom was like tumhara devar sanskari nai h, uspe adarsh ka dailouge u remember uttara " laksh sanskari kyun hoga vo to sanskar h" pari said. All laughed.

"Adarsh Bhai ko lga vo naam ki bt kr rhe h" all rofled. "Sch me Bhabhi ap to roz enjoy krengi" said ruchi. "Hn ruchi ye sb he Hi itne pyare" all agreed praising maheshwari's .

ROOF

"Bhai ap pichle ek ghante se pendulam ki trah ghume ja re h plan to bnaya nai kuch" sanskar said being irritated he was very sleepy. "Sansko tujhe nind ari h , niche ladkiyan kitna enjoy kr ri h" adarsh said sitting in front of all. "Bhai to btao na plan sula kyun rhe ho" said laksh being irritated. "Lucky tu b, acha suno hum sb niche Jake ladkiyon pe thanda pani daal denge." Adarsh said excitingly.

Sanskar stood up "hn fr vo hmari complaint bde papa se kr dengi or ap shadi tk ghar ked me, or hum b" sanskar said being disguised. "Arey kuch nai hoga , hum sb youngsters ek team h sansako" laksh got smirk on his face. He Hi fied with adarsh. "Par thanda pani milega khn " said niketan . "shadi k lie barf k tanker bahar ae h, usme se" adarsh smirked. "Kya us thandi tanker me hum kyun hath Dale" ajit denied. "Arey yrrr kr lete h maza b aega" wincjed sanskar all boys begin to silently make way towards backyard from back gate.

As they were going lights went off. "Shut ye kya Ho gya ab kya Bhai" said laksh looking at adarsh "ab to or asani se kam hoga, sanskar tu ek kam kr Jake light ko dekh kya hua" adarsh completed. "Kya Bhai , and here me store room me jaun me, dimag theek h apka, chuhu ka ghr h vo" sanskar denied but somehow adarsh managed to convince him.

"Sun dhyan rakhio sanskar darwaza dheere se bnd kario vo bhr se lock ho jata h" laksh reminded him. Sanskar noded n left.

hall

Parineeta came from kitchen with candles.
"Ye light ko kya hua" exclaimed uttara. "Lgta h fault h" said parineeta. "Swara tum Jake dekhogi kya hua h" said uttara. "OK hnn , vese b bki sb r scared of dark except me. " hn meri superwoman" said ragini n all giggled. "Theek h swara frst floor me store room h vhn tumhe switch ka connection mil jaega, candle ke jana" uttara completed n handed her one candle that was with parineeta.

Swara made her way to store room, she saw it was already open sanskar was in suddenly he saw some light n got scared. "Kaun h" swara was coming in that time , n with his voice got scared n slamed the door n door got struck. "Yaaa" she turned n saw he was sanskar n sanskar was relieved that it was swara. "Tum yhn kya kr rhe Hi sanskar" said swara "tum yhn kya kr rhi ho" sanskar repeated. "Pehle mene pucha," said swara. "Pehle me aya tha, to jawab pehle. ." sanskar was abt to complete wen swara said "tum Hi doge" they both laughed.

"Lights dekhni h" sanskar said n she noded. "Tum electrician b ho" smirked sanskar while he was adjusting something in switch. "Hahaha very funny mujhe sb ata h, or tum kbse lge ho tumse kuch ho to rha he nai sanskar mujhe krne do" said swara.

Kavita who followed swara was shocked to here such words actually she misinterpreted them. "Ye sanskar or swara andar kr kya rhe h" she chuckled.

"Tumhe sb kuch ata hoga , but ye kam mujhe tumse better ata h smjhi" sanskar said n swara slamed his shoulder. "Aa swara dheere yr lg ra h" sanskar said n kavita almost died outside the storeroom. "Ho gya dekho" said sanskar n lights were on. Sanskar was mesmerised to see swara in salwar n kurta of light colour. Swara smiled looking at him. "Good work Mr. Sanskar" she pinched his nose, he blushed. Kavita ran frm the storeroom to hall.
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"Chalo chalte h" swara said as they were abt to open the door it did not open. "Ise kya hua sanskar," swara said , sanskar turned to her angrily. "Tum mujhe aise kyu. Dekh rhe ho" swara said making puppy face. "Tumne darwaza zor se bnd kia na ab nai kholega ye jb tk koi bhr se na khole" swara widened her eyes. "Wat tum kya mujhe blame kr rhe Ho, actually tumhari vjh se mene door ko slam kia tha tb ye hua" swara said angrily.

"Wah ab mujhe blame kr lo" sanskar folded his arms. Swara sat on a heap of books. "Kya kren ab" swara saw sanskar. Then her eyes fell on a rat that was just below sanskar's legs. "Sans..." she stammered. "Tumhe kya Ho gya ab" he said that rat went on his slipers. "Sanskar..." She shouted. "Arey hua kya" he said, she signalled to his foot. He saw n immediately saw up "kya.." Then he realised wat he saw "aaa" shouted sanskar, n jerked his leg in fear. That rat fall on swara "aaa chiii kya kr rhe ho" she ran n so sanskar did. They both hugged each other in fear n stood in the heap of books.

"Sanskar ye to nach rha h" swara said being scared. Sanskar circled her waist. "Nai kuch nai hoga" he gulped. "Hnn tum khud kitna dar rhe ho" swara said as rat approached their heap of books. In fear they jumped n toppled over each other.

HALL

Ragini was standing near the stairs beside washroom where saesha was there. Uttara was sitting with parineeta n others. Wen boys came with water , laksh saw ragini n approached her, other went to the other girls n drained them . "adarsh hum apko chorenge nai" pari ran behind adarsh , "niketan ye kya kia" uttara shouted, priya, kavita n all were drained. "Koi ni uttara happens" said niketan n started running.

Laksh was about to spill was on ragini wen she turned n colided with laksh both felk n water drained them..

Chaahe Tum Kuch Naa Kaho Maine Sun Liya
Swara saw sanskar n lost in his orbs, he was really handsome.

Ke Saathi Pyaar Kaa Mujhe Chun Liya
Laksh saw ragini n smiled seeing her wet cheeks lips.

Chun Liyaaa Maine Sun Liyaa
Ragini kept staring him, to discover wat actually happened with her.

Pehla Nasha Pehla Khummar Naya Pyaar Hai Naya Intezaar Karloo Mein Kya Apna Haal Aye Dil-e-Bekaraar Mere Dil-e-Bekaraar Tu Hi Bata
Parineeta ran behind adarsh , he kept teasing her for being wet "adarsh hum apko chorenge nai" he got hold of him n started beating him.

Pehla Nasha Pehla Khummar Udthaa Hi Fhirun Inn Hawaaon Mein Kahin Yaa Mein Jhool Jaun Inn Ghattavon Mein Kahin Udthaa Hi Fhirun Inn Hawaaon Mein Kahin Yaa Mein Jhool Jaun Inn Ghattavon Mein Kahin
Sanskar saw swara, she was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen in his life. He saw her hair strands tickling her face, he tucked her hair strand behind her ears, she closed her eyes with his touch.

Ek Kar Doo Aasman Aur Zameen Kaho Yaaron Kya Karu Kya Nahi Pehla Nasha Pehla Khummar Naya Pyaar Hai Naya Intezaar Karloo Mein Kya Apna Haal Aye Dil-e-Bekaraar Mere Dil-e-Bekaraar Tu Hi Bata
Laksh made ragini stand she saw him all wet n started laughing . laksh kept admiring her smile.
Pehla Nasha Pehla Khummar Usne Baath Ki Kuch Aise Dang Se Sapne De Gaya Hazaaron Rang Ke Usne Baath Ki Kuch Aise Dang Se Sapne De Gaya Hazaaron Rang Ke Reh Jaaun Jaise Mein Haar Ke Aur Choome Woh Mujhe Pyaar Se Pehla Nasha Pehla Khummar
"Niketan this was not happening OK" she scolded him. "But uttara u lookin hot wet han" n he started laughing uttara simply saw his smile n his orbs.

Sanskar came to senses , "bahar kses jaen" said sanskar, "ruku me awaz Marti hun" as she went n tried door opened. "Hme drane k lie bnd hua tha bus" sanskar giggled they both came out n was shocked to see the condition. Of the hall , all were wet, except saesha. She saw swara n came to her "swara bus hum teeno bche h, ye hme b bhigo..." She was abt to complete wen adarsh n parineeta drained water on 3 of them . "bhai ye kya kia" sanskar saw up. Adarsh wincked to him.

His eyes fell on swara that water drops made her more beautiful, saesha noticed that. Swara went to ragini. "Sanskar swara ko kya ghur the the" he blushed with saesha's question "kuch nai dI ap b na" n he too joined others.

"Ye sb kya Ho ra h" came durga prasad. All went mump n scared seeing him. "Hey bhagwan je bchon ne kya kia h" said sujata. "Adarsh ye sb" Annapurna slamed her head. Suddenly dp turned away, all got scared that he is angry now, as sujata and Annapurna were standing dp came along with ram with drained them too. "Papa" laughed adarsh. "Kyun MASTI ka haq bus sirf tum bcho ka h" said ram. "Je kya kr dia apne, budhape b satiya gae h ap" sujata said in anger n splashed water on ram. So did Annapurna.

"Hmari shaadi se pehle ki holi" adarsh n parineeta shared romantic glance. Sanskar smiled looking swara laksh accepted his feelings for ragini.

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Precap: 5 years ago, suspense

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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update Niyati..
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