PART 14 Updt Pg 82 -PYAAR HOTA HAIN DEEWAANA SANAM--SWASAN SS

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: foresight
ek kabeb mein haadi pe ek free 😆 😆
cute swasan moments...

😆 Thank you soo much dear😃

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose
Naina mindblowing update👏👏 do continue soon dear😊

thank you sooo much Jenni🤗
I am updating now😛

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: anju10
lovely update dear
all swasan scenes were awesome
thanxx for the pm
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Thank you sooo much anju dear..😃😃
I am glad you loved Swasan scenes😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd
nice one

thank u nisha😃

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#245

PART 6

The film got over and everybody was moving out of the theatre.
La:I'm feeling really hungry...Let's go to some restaurant..
Ra:That's right...Mujhe bhi bahut bhuk lagi hain...
Ragini and Swara got into Parineeta's car with her and Sanskaar and Lakshya got into Adarsh's car. Ragini was wearing a yellow anarkali, with matching bangles, where as Swara was wearing a pretty pink colour sleeveless dress. Parineeta was wearing a white lucknowi worked kurta and jeans.
They went to a restaurant. Lakshya,Ragini,Swara and Sanskaar got out of the cars. Lakshya was wearing a yellow t-shirt with jeans, where as Sanskaar was wearing a pink t-shirt with white jeans. Adarsh was wearing a sky blue shirt with beige pants.
Ad:You guys wait here..Parineeta aur main gaadi park karke aate hain..
La:Ok Adarsh...
And they went off to the car parking area.
Sa:Ragini..Did you like the film...?
Ra:Hmmm...Awesome film...
Sw:And I liked the songs very much..!
Adarsh and Parineeta came to them and all of them went into the restaurant.
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After having their food they all came out of the restaurant.
La:Adarsh, lets go somewhere else...Where we can sit and enjoy...?
Ra:Nooo, lets go back...I'm feeling really sleepy after watching the film and having nice food...
Pa:Then we shall go to my home...You can sleep there Ragini, if you want...Rest of us can enjoy...(winks at Swara)
Ra:No...No...(smiles)Then I won't sleep...I don't want to miss any fun..!
Pa:Ok then...I will call my Mom and tell that we are all coming there now...
Ad:And in the evening, you all can come to my home and have the dinner there...Kyun Parineeta?
Pa: Yeh acha rahega Adarsh, ok then...
They all reached Parineeta's home. Her Mom, Premlatha Dixit greeted them all with a warm smile.
Pl: Namaste..Andar aao sab log...
They all greeted her and went inside. They all sat down in the living room. After chatting with Parineeta's Mom for sometime, Parineeta showed them around her home. After that she led them to her bedroom. Her room was very pretty, there were photographs of her with her family members,and with Adarsh.
Pa:Look at that photo...That was when Adarsh and me were babies...See him pulling my hair..
Ra:Oh Adarsh...Tum tab se usse chedna shuroo kiya tha kya...
Ad:(laughing)You know...Isse chedne mein bahut mazaa aata tha...hain na Parineeta..(winks)
Pa:(smiling at Adarsh)Main bhi woh sab enjoy karti thi...Issi liye toh... main uski deewani ban gayi...
Sw:Come on Parineeta...Tell us your love story...
They all sat on her bed.
La:Haan...Bataao...Pehle kisne propose ki?
Ad:You won't believe this...We didn't propose each other at all...
Pa:(blushing) Haan...We knew that we loved each other...As we grew up we realized that we can't live without each other...(smiles shyly at Adarsh)
Ra:How sweet...!!(smiles)
Sa:Do your parents know about your relationship?
Ad:Well...There was no need for an explanation...They sort of knew that we were in love before we told them...When we told them about it after our schooling, they told us that they had always wanted us to get married...
Sa:Swara, let us also tell our parents about our relation...
Sw:Not now Sanskaar...The time will come...
Ra:Swara teek keh rahi hain Sanskaar...Now you both are studying...So they will tell you both to concentrate in your studies...
La:(abruptly)Haan haan Sanskaar,Ragini teek keh rahi hain...
Sa:Ok..
Swara noticed a shy smile appearing in Ragini's lips when Lakshya told this. When Swara looked at Lakshya she saw him looking at Ragini with lots of love in his eyes. But he couldn't see Ragini smile as she had her head turned towards Sanskaar.
Ra:Acha...Yeh bataao Sanskaar...Tumhe Swara se pyaar kab hua tha..?
Sa:Remember our first day in college...I was playing football when Adarsh called me to introduce me to all of you...The first time my eyes fell upon Swara, I was totally in love with her..Swara tum bataao... when did you start loving me...?
Sw:(shyly smiling at Sanskaar)That day itself...But before you saw me haan..(blushing)I saw you at the football ground...and well...I also fell in love with you...(giggles)
Pa:Yeah...You must have seen her face when she was staring at you Sanskaar...
Sw:Parineeta...(and she pinched her)
Pa:Aah...What is this yaar...?Well...You guys sit here..I will go to the kitchen and ask Mom to get something to drink for us...
Ad:I will also come with you...
They went downstairs...
Sw:Sanskaar, I want to talk to you...Lets move to the balcony...
Sa:Ok Swara...(To Lakshya)We will come now (and he gets up)
Swara and Sanskaar moved to the balcony of that bedroom. And Swara kept the door to the balcony half shut. Then she went to the door and looked inside so that Ragini and Lakshya won't see her.
Sa:(whispers from behind)What are you doing Swara?
Sw:Shhh...I will tell you...Please keep quiet..
Meanwhile in the room, when everybody left, Ragini and Lakshya began to feel awkward because they were the only ones left. At first they didn't talk with each other for sometime. Lakshya was looking at her. Ragini started to play with her bangles in a casual way without looking at him.
La: (nervously)Ragini...
Ra:(looking at Lakshya)..Haan...
La:Sorry...
Ra:Sorry kyun...?
La:For holding your hand in the theatre...I did it without knowing...sorry...
Ra:(becomes nervous) Its ok, Lakshya...

Sa:(widening his eyes,whispers)What?
Sw:(smiling)Shhh...Listen, Sanskaar...

La:You didn't misunderstand me na...(now looking into her eyes with the same loving gaze)
Ra:(looking away)No...No...Not at all...
La:So then...

But at the same time Adarsh and Parineeta came inside with their drinks and some snacks...

Sw:(turning to Sanskaar)Did you understand something..?
Sa:(confusedly)Nothing..
Sw:Sanskaar I think they are in love...
Sa:But how can you say so...?
Sw:I think so...You ask Lakshya about it?I will ask her..ok..
Sa:Ok..Lets go inside...
They walked inside. They chatted with each other about many things. Meanwhile Swara noticed both Lakshya and Ragini. But there was no such reactions in their faces like before.
In the evening they had tea with Parineeta's family and then Adarsh took them all to his home. The time was 7 o clock.
They were having dinner at Adarsh's home. His Mom Niharika was serving food for all of them.
Ni:Adarsh beta,You were saying that you are going for a camp from your college tomorrow...
Ad:Haan Maa, koi social service camp hain...All the first years have to go..Its compulsory..
La:How boring..!
Sa:Its for one week...But we can all enjoy...At least we all will be together...(looks at Swara)
Sw:(thinks "that Sonia will also be coming")Yeah..thats right...
Pa:We have got to pack our luggage then...
Ra:Hmmm...Anyway, Parineeta we have to leave soon...We have to reach our hostel before 7.30..
Ni:Koi baat nahin...Pehle khaana to khalo beta...
After having dinner,Ragini,Parineeta and Swara left soon from Adarsh's home since they were late.
Adarsh had gone to get some colddrinks for them while Lakshya and Sanskaar were standing in the terrace.
Lakshya was looking out and was in deep thought...Sanskaar noticed his silence...
Sa: Lakshya...
Lakshya didn't hear...
Sa:(loudly)Lakshya...
La:Hmmm...(in a low voice..but not in his senses)
Sa:(in a loud voice)Ragini...
La:(turns around)Kahan...?
Sa:(laughing)Kaun?
La:(smiles)Sanskaar...Bataa na,kahan hai woh?
Sa:(naughtily)Lakshya...Tell me...You are in love with Ragini...right?
La:(shyly)Haan yaar...I love her...How did you find out...?
Sa:I didn't find out...Swara did..And we heard you talking to her about holding her hand in the theatre..Chakkar kya hai dost?
La:Oh...You know..When she was sitting near me, in the theatre...I don't know..I couldn't control myself...Her arm was brushing mine..Her hand was placed on the arm of her seat...My hand was close to hers..and...you know...I suddenly grabbed her hand...(looks at Sanskaar guiltily)
Sa:(smiling)and what did she do?
La:(looks down)She panicked and loosened her hand from my grip...After that she didn't even talk with me or look at me...
Sa:But don't worry dude...Swara thinks that she also loves you...
La:(excitedly)Really...!!
Sa:She is not sure though...She said she will ask Ragini about it...
Adarsh came with their cold drinks...Sanskaar and Lakshya told Adarsh about his feelings towards Ragini.
Ad:(excited)Par kab se Lakshya?
La:Pata nahin kab se...But when Sanskaar had asked Ragini for a dance on Parineeta's b'day party,I felt bad...Slowly I realized that I am in love with her...
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Meanwhile in the girl's hostel, Ragini and Swara reached their room. Their room mates had gone downstairs for dinner. Swara went to take a quick shower since she felt really exhausted after such a long day. When Swara came out of the washroom,she noticed Ragini standing at the window staring outside. She hadn't even bothered to change her dress.
Sw:Ragini...
Ra:(startled)Swaraa..Kyaa hua..?(smiles) I didn't see you coming...
Sw:(smiling naughtily)Ragini, let me ask you something(comes closer to her)
Ra:(confused)What?
Sw:Do you love Lakshya?
Ra:(in a surprised tone)KYA??
Sw:(grinning)Sach sach bataao haan Ragini...Mujhse chupaane ki koshish bhi mat karna...
Ra:(blushes) Tumhe kaise pata...?(smiles and again looks outside the window unable to face Swara)
Sw:(turns Ragini's head to face her)Woh sab chodo...Tum bataao toh sahi...(smiles)
Ra:Haan...I think I am in love...Par pata nahin kab se...I've seen Lakshya looking at me many times...you know...in a romantic sort of way...At first I used to feel really awkward...Slowly I also fell in love with him...I couldn't tell you because I didn't know what you will say..I thought you wont believe me,if I say that about him...What do you think?Does he love me..?
Sw:Toh yeh baat hain...Haan...Mujhe bhi aisa lagta hai ki woh tumse bahut pyaar karta hain...Maine bhi aaj notice ki thi,uske aankhon mein tumhare liye pyaar..(smiles widely)
Ra:(shyly turns away and smiles)Sach..??
Sw:Much!!(laughs)
Ra:(excitedly)And today at the theatre, he tried to hold my hand...I was startled and took off my hand from his grip...But he told sorry to me afterwards..said that he did it unknowingly...
Sw:If you love him so much,then why don't you tell it to him...Becharaa Lakshya...Usse itna tadpaathi kyun ho?
Ra:Kehna toh hain...Par pehle usse kehna chahiye...(giggles)
Sw: Arre waah.. Raginiii..(giggles and tries to tickle her naughtily)
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Sunday morning, the time was 9 am. All the first years were waiting near their two college buses. Swara,Sanskaar,Ragini,Lakshya,Parineeta and Adarsh were standing together away from the others.
Sw:(looking at the watch)They said that we will be leaving at 9 o clock...Where are the teachers...?
La:What's the hurry Swara?The whole camp is going to be boring...!
Ra:(angrily) How can we say that its boring without even going...?
La:(suddenly looking at Ragini with a surprised look)Oh...!!
Sa:At least we are all together...We will rock the camp...hain na Swara?(putting his arm around her shoulders)
Sw:(pushing him away)Chodo mujhe, Sanskaar...The teachers are coming...(smiles guiltily)
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End of PART 6
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Love you all,
Naina😊

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Monica_Suhasini

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Posted: 9 years ago

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M really sorry for being late and made u wait ...

Maf kardo please...

Coming to update... it's lovely

All three couples are beautiful

U have written very sweetly

Swara she z such a Cupid btwn ragya

Laksh catchng hold of rags...awww

And all their outfits in the beginning are superb

Loved them sply sanskaars white and pink

Waiting for next dearie...

Edited by Monica_Suhasini - 9 years ago

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Naina you write such cute updates no... I am always grinning while reading your updates

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Jamina Mohammed

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Posted: 9 years ago

#248

Wow another awesome episode 😊
I just loved it. Njan chodikanam karuthiya Ragya love story illenn and here you are with that. Ente endu agrahavum njan chodikunne mune nainu nadathi tharum 😃 hayee camp I can smell lots of romantic moments is waiting for us 😳

Update soon nainu

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gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Oh sis loved the entire update with happy tears. After movie they went to have dinner. And they were planning to go somewere to njoy ragini told she dnt want to cum she felt sleepy. Bt finally she agreed. The three couples went to pari's home 1st and chatted for some time. They heared abt adarsh and pari love story. And also abt our swasan love story. As adarsh n pari went down to take cooldrinks swara asked sanskar to cum with her to balcony. Raglak left alone and felt awkward. Later they broke the silence and laksh asked sorry for holding her hand. Swara had a doubt as they are in love and talked abt them to sanskar. Later they went to adarsh home and after their dinner the girls left. Sanskar noted laksh and asked abt his feeling towards ragini he told he was in love with her and he s possessive tat he can't able to see her with any he mentioned that sanskar ask ragini hand for dance at pari's b'day party. Here swara also asked ragini abt the same and she too told tat she was in love with him.