Redemption: A Swara/Sanskaar & Ragini Story [Pt10-Pg33]

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Read all parts together..

Its superb..

Pm me when u next update..and update soon😊

Quote

namsmk

@namsmk

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#192

I don't know how I missed your ff. Just read all the chapters..
I just loved the way you write. Awesome storyline..
I wish cvs read this ff.
Continue soon..
Will you please pm me for further updates..?

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Ally

@Allyson

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: princess_tara
awesome update

Thank you so very much for your feedback!

Quote

Ally

@Allyson

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Sakura24
It is progressing well on both couples. I can't say much about Lakshya but I'm eagerly waiting for the day when he comes in terms with their changed lives.
continue soon!

Lakshya still have some ways to go in that regard. His attention is still very much on Swara. It will take him a little to start to pay attention to Ragini and figure out that she's being honest.

Thank you for your feedback

Quote

Ally

@Allyson

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: foresight
beautiful one Allyson. I liked how Ragini is not jumping to make it right the wrong way, she wants to find out what happened and also to find out what swara wants.

swara getting attracted towards sanskar...niceee 😳

i hope ragini and sanskar can help swara solve her dilemma soon.

looking forward to the next part 😃

I absolutely despise TV shows where people just act on instinct without taking in any other information. Swaragini is very much guilty of doing just that numerous times.

That's why I attempted to make Swara and Lakshya's conversation slightly on the ambiguous side as well.

As for Sanskaar, he is so attractive, I don't think any girl could help herself :D

Thank you for your feedback!

Quote

Ally

@Allyson

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: neelzzz
awsm update
update soon

Thank you for your continued support

Quote

Ally

@Allyson

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Lovely update. Lakshya was creepily persistent and nearly neurotic in his pursuit of Swara, his delusion firmly in place, that she's pretending to move on with Sanskaar, just to spite him.

I liked how Ragini is carefully making notes of the nuggets of information coming her way, to make sure that she takes the correct steps to make things better. Thankfully, she's not jumping to the conclusion that she has to reunite Swara with Lakshya.

It was cute and romantic to read of how Swara is getting attracted to Sanskaar, how she feels so comfortable and uncomplicated in his company. Hoping that she doesn't take any rash decisions, based on her fear of Lakshya's unwelcome pursuit.

Thanks for the pm and waiting for your next update. 😊

Hi Viji, I love the use of the word 'creepy' to describe Lakshya's persistence, and it is bang on. His pursuit of Swara turns my stomach at times. I used to think that I was the only one, since initially there were a lot of Lakshya and Swara shippers who wished for them to reunite. Lakshya is a flawed character that I disliked since his introduction to the show. This is why I am struggling with his redemption as well because at times I feel he has no redemptive qualities.

Thank you for your wonderful feedback!