Redemption: A Swara/Sanskaar & Ragini Story [Pt10-Pg33]

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Hi Ally

Very well written update. I liked the SwaSan interaction a lot. So like Sanskaar, to give Swara the time and space needed to ensure she made the right decision.

Now Ragini and Lakshya have to stay together for nearly 5 months. 😊 Does Lakshya in your story know yet that Swara wants to genuinely stay in her marriage with Sanskaar...not for any project of reuniting Ragini and him, but just for her and Sanskaar?

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

I really like this more with each chapter. You had to take that 6 months approach as it is the formality, I was waiting for this. So Ragini and Lakshya still has 6 months in which perhaps they might solve their differences and start over. hmmm interesting! Then SwaSan, I have nothing but praises at the way you handled them here. So mature and deeply loving their bond is. I love the way Swara stayed firm on her decision and Sanskar wanted to give her time. That's so typical SwaSan!

Then Ragini, she's as always the absolute darling!

Continue soon!

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

i really loved the swasan interaction...and was glad to see that swara understood what sanskar was feeling without having to say it...continue to love this ragini. wonder if the one is the show would have been like her if she had been allowed to meet laksh on her own without the marriage sword and everyone telling her he was the one.

don't know if i want this laksh to be forgiven though, i would love for this ragini to find someone who values her for who she is.

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Porkalai

@Porkalai22

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

wow!I jst luv dis ragini..nd waitng for raglak Moments in nxt part..continue soon...thanks for pm.

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

i love they u getting this story around...cont soon...i dont like laksh too..

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Loved the update!

I feel sad reading about a Ragini. She has no idea about her life and no one seems willing to give her a chance! It is understandable given all that she has done but still...

Swara is absolutely adorable in this! She went all the way to Sanskaar's office just to talk to him?

It's so like Sanskaar to try to give Swara an out though I am glad that Swara has set him straight!

I love the way you are developing SwaSan relationship!

Will Lakshya find out in the next update that SwaSan are genuinely giving their relationship a chance?

By the way I realized that Ragini is addressing Lakshya as the 'Man in Blue'. Does she not know his name? And now she has to live with him for 6 months? I hope Laskya will work hard to redeem himself!

Looking forward to your next update.

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kaku17

@kaku17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

What a beautiful update...your characters are so in sync with their traits so inherent to them, which was shown in the beginning of the show...

Sanskaar being the selfless guy, he is...chose to give swara some time to ponder over her decision ...and if need be pull out of that relationship...and the most amazing part swara managed to guess the exact reason for him doing the same...kudos to her...and its refreshing to see the same old swara, not a dumbed down version...

and above all I love your Ragini...oh what I would not give to watch this Ragini on screen again, albeit with a mind of her own and not being the doormat, she always tries to be...

Edited by kaku17 - 9 years ago